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Reviewer: Baandfam69 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 25
I'm so happy I stumbled upon this story. I'm looking forward to so much, even the not-so-nice topics because I have a feeling that Charlie's antics haven't ended and Renee's return to Bella's life could make it a bit turbulent emotionally. I love how you mix the vulnerable with the strong and how your writing is honest. I wanted to nut punch Charlie for his cruelty but I also feeling a little anger towards Renee for leaving Bella in such a volatile place. Keep up the amazing writing and if there is anything I could do to help, besides being a devout reader, let me know.
Reviewer: cherry123 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2013 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 9
sad but an amazing chapter.. my heart broke for jessica
Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2013 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 25
xoxo
Reviewer: Southernbella86 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 25
omg i am officially obsessed with this story!!! i just found it yesterday and read all of the chapters! im dying for more please!!!
Reviewer: Xerseven (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 25
Wow. I just discovered this one. Great story, although it took me awhile to get used to Charlie as a bad guy!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 25
I missed your story and am glad to see you return.
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 25
Still here it's ok I know life gets in the way
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 25
SOOOOOOOO glad you're back. I was afraid one of my favorite stories was abandoned. Great chapter and so worth the wait. I hope real life turns in your favor!
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2011 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 22
Gah!!!
Reviewer: Edwards Bella (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 22
This is awesome. I hope to read more soon. I've been a fan of this story from the beginning, but have had to step away for a few months. So glad to be back and reading some update. Please continue!
Reviewer: Fionna (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 2
Ooh first two chapters are really intriguing, I'm glad you've chosen to drip feed the information bout bella's past rather than lay it all on at once. Can't wait to get cracking on the rest! X
Reviewer: noobie (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 22
ahhh please write more asap!! Oooh I'm formulating ideas now, maybe Charlie has Renee hostage and he tells Bella that if she doesn't come to him he'll kill her mother or something, similar to what James did to Bella in twilight. Whatever it is, you're doing a great job with this story! Write more soon please!!! :)
Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 22
ah- when Rose said there was a phone call I first thought it was someone telling her that Charlie died and I would have been like :noo! he didn't get what was coming to him!! lol.
and I loved that Emmett was there to be all big-brother protector. loved it. I shudder to think what would have happened if Bella was by herself.
the Renee development is unexpected. can't wait to see where you take that. until next time!
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 22
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 22
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 22
so her mom is finally contacting her? after everything? abandoning her with that monster?!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 22
Oh, please don't let her forgive the loser mother
Good job
Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 22
Awesome!
Reviewer: maddierose (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 22
okay so i literally just started reading this story and ive been reading it for 5 days non stop trying to catch up while balance my exams...its been crazy but i really love it so much!
It is a really constant story and there really is never a dull moment. There is always something happening and i really love that about it.
This chapter was really good and im glad we go to see some E and B time :D haha
OOOO and im really excited about y Renèe is calling!!!! Hope u post again soon!!!
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 22
Wow didn't expect that one. Another great chapter can't wait for the next one. YOu are the cliffhanger queen though.
Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 21
Emmett is big enough he won't let him get close.
Reviewer: britablue (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 22
I won't kill you cuz I had a feeling her Mom would show up sooner or later. I really hope she izn't feeling guilty and all of a sudden decided to play mama bear..... Anywho thanks for the quick update, and once again another great chapter! Keep up the wonderful work *cheers*
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 22
I am so glad that Bella stood up to her father. Even father sounds like too much for him..sperm donor is more like it. And her mother calling out of the blue?...hhmmm....I am very suspicious about that. I think that Charlie is pulling her strings. I re-read the out take from his point of view and I'm almost certain Charlie is behind the phone call. Please update soon. Great writing as always :) Happy Holidays!!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 22
Wow is all I can say.. the cliff hanger is great.. I knew she would come into play sooner of later. The question is are you going to told with Edward and Bella Feeling and have her move with her mom. I really hope not. I think that would be awful.. Take it from someone one that been in that place. Or should I say my son has been there. It is not nice when a parent rounds out and leaves you. I m a loving mom but can't replace his Father and I say that lightly. donor is more like it. He tried to talk my son into leave me. It kill my son heart. he has not seen his father in 2 yrs. after it took 6yrs for him to come around in the first place. I m Sorry about my feeling about parent that abandon there child. They have not right to take them away from a safe and loving home. But do wish she can connect with her mom. Love the story. Hope you have a great night.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 22
Emmett was sweet :)
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