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Reviewer: redsoxlove (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: The List
i'm surprised they find it that odd about carlisle..after all edward reads minds..bella walks through walls and mike newton flies!
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
wow ok I really love this story! please update as soon as you can!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: schaapje98 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
Thanks for the story! It's really nice. I would love to read the next chapter. I'm sorry to hear about your mentor and wishing you all the best.
Reviewer: poodleann04 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
I really like this story! Please tell me you haven't abandoned it!
Reviewer: TaylorAnn (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
This is a really great story so far... Keep it up
Reviewer: TaylorAnn (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 12: Dealing with James
ESME!!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!!
Reviewer: TaylorAnn (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 7: Pillow Talk
I like this whle chinease food gives people nightmares thing.
Reviewer: TaylorAnn (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 5: Official Complaints
"Don't worry about me, love. I can take care of myself." Oh, god! Did I say ‘love'? I hope she didn't notice.
this is my fav line
Reviewer: TaylorAnn (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 2: A Secret Request
Aro seems kind of dark
Reviewer: KiddyWiddy (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
When will you update this story?
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
I love the beginning of Carlisle's plan.
They are going to have such a great time in Chicago, and maybe they can slip past Jane...
I wonder how Sam will take what is happening at the school & if Jacob will come back into this...
Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Mole
I.HATE.JAMES.
Like very, very much. I bit my lip open 'cause of him! He's so annoying! Thanks for making him into person to hate more and more. Really. I have been focusing all my anger from everything to Volturi, Tanya, James, Victoria and Jacob. And now I'm much happier. :)
I'm so excited about Edward and Bella's romance. It's so sweet and wonderful ^___^ I'm so happy for them!
Thank you!
Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 2: A Secret Request
OMG. O.O what the heck has gotten into Aro? World-domination? Enslaving humans? That's terrible! Gotta read more!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 8: The Mole
Oh, Aro put him in his place...kinda. Damn stubborn James! Doesn't he know when he's been beat? Oh well, I hope it doesn't go his way & he learns. Or, maybe that guardsman could tear him apart...... :)
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 4: Orientation Day
Aw, I love fluff!!! So, I could be wrong, but Edward & Alice's parents died in a train wreck, and Bella's died in a car wreck...I'm thinking Aro made it happen?!? Don't know how the rest of their parent's died, but I'm thinking Aro had a hand in all or most of it?
Hmmmm......can't wait to see if I'm even close!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 2: A Secret Request
I think this is going to be an interesting story! Can't wait to read the rest of what you have up! I am intrigued by this so far!!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
MORE!!!!
Reviewer: Eliza Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Invitation
Wow! X-men meets Twilight...Cool! This has quickly become an addiction. Please give me more!
Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: purehazel (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
another tory i have been waiting FOREVER for you to post another chapter of! again um dying here hurry up!!!!!! plzzzz
Author's Response: Sorry purehazel. I've just been busy and had writer's block that seems to not be abating, unfortunately. I hope to get that cleared up soon.
Reviewer: RandomTabi (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
Wow!! I just wanted to say that you are an amazing author!! I didn't think that I would like this but I can't stop reading it!! Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait for more!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a try. I think that too many people think it will be Harry Potterish. I love HP, but this story is original. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: MjAlicefan (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
Carlisle could get the 'Sensational six' s help to save Esme!!!
Reviewer: bekahsaurus (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
Oooh, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: first lady (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
sorry to hear of your loss.
i am glad that you have a distraction, but you will have to grive to move on. you may be busy, but you will have to take some time for yourself to cry and reflect on the relationship the two of you had.
my prayers are with you and your mentor's family. just take comfort in knowing that he is no longer in pain and is at rest!!!!
as for the story, i LOVE LOVE LOVE it.
what is carlise's plan?
do i see jacob in the future?
will carlise turn the Sensational Six himself?
WAITING ON PINS AND NEEDLES TO FIND OUT!
Author's Response: I've done some crying and reflecting. Tomorrow is the funeral, so I am sure I will shed a lot of tears then. He had no family outside of his friends--we were his family. I've lots of distraction, but I've also been reflecting. It's a good balance, really. Thanks for the prayers. And I am glad that he is no longer suffering. He's always had health issues--he was a type 1 diabetic. Between that, his heart, and cancer, he was in pretty bad shape.
Thanks for your kind words about my story. The Quiluetes are in the future, but Jake was at the orphanage, remember? Will he make it back to his people?
All will be revealed--eventually. I know--I'm evil. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Invitation
Okay, you so rock for this statement! I may or may not actually somewhat love it! ;)
"Oh thanks, Ms. Shrew. Next chapter may or may not possibly in a roundabout way have scenes where Bella and Edward may or may not be in a hotel possibly or maybe not alone together. Mwuhahahaha!"
Geez, Fangs! You've got me guffawing over reviews now as well as stories! :D
Author's Response: Glad to make you laugh. I just didn't want to give too much away. I probably did anyway. Thanks as always for reading, Ms. Shrew.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: Christmas Break Begins
i hope he is succesful
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