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Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 11: Safety Precautions

Yay! Bad-ass Edward

Author's Response: Glad you like him.  Thanks.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 11: Safety Precautions

Oh yeah, badass Edward rocks!  Rose is allergic to roses?!  That is totally awesomely funny! :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  Thanks, Ms. Shrew.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 10: Strawberries and Chocolate

I am worried about Bella eating those chocolates.  Did James do anything to them?   My favorite moment was Edward carrying Bella like a sack of potatoes to Carlisle's office.  Nice image!

Author's Response: Nope.  I thought about the chocolates being drugged, but they were sealed in the store's wrapper, so they were safe.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 11: Safety Precautions

ooh i am loving this. i want to know what bellas power is!!

Author's Response: Well, I wish she had the power to clean my house--lol!  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 11: Safety Precautions

I'm loving this story. Wasn't too sure from the first chapter, but the second one intrigued me and by the third I was a gonner. Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: What didn't you like about the first chapter?  What did you like about the second and what about the third hooked you?  I'm just curious.  Thanks for your honest review.

Reviewer: RosalieCullen (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 11: Safety Precautions

LMAO GO EDDIE! Poor Rose being allergic to Roses thats soo funny and ironic. These were great chapters as always! James needs to back off. Wonder what Bellas gift could possibly be. Loved the updates can't wait for more =]

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter.  I liked the Rose/rose irony.  And well, James is a bastard.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 11: Safety Precautions

Break it again update soon

Author's Response: I'm trying.  I've got a little writer's block, so it might be a few days.  Sorry.

Reviewer: Jaja (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

oo nice story.  it's very different, which i love.

 

and your Aro is spot-on!  I always felt that Aro was creepy yet odd.

 

nice job! 



Author's Response: Thank you.  Glad you like creepy Aro.  He's fun to do.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

GREAT MORE

Author's Response: Soon.  I update as much as possible.

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

They are very cute together!!

Author's Response: I think so too.  Thank you.

Reviewer: RosalieCullen (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

Hehehehe sooo cute. I love how in love they are. Great chapter. =]

Author's Response: Thanks.  I love them in love too.  Like me some mushy stuff.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

Love the flirting.  I don't mind a bit.  LOTS of flirting is a good thing in my book.  The chapter opened so well.  What a nice way to wake up.  Maybe I would be more of a morning person if I could wake up like Bella did! :)  I like how you have B and E so possessive of one another.  It is just so fun to read that they are voicing it because we all know that's the way they think about each other. 

I don't remember which story, if this one or SAV, but  you mentioned a squee moment-- can you tell me what that means.  I have a pretty good idea, but I don't know the actual definition.  Thanks!

p.s. I was rooting for Aro to kick James' ass in the last chapter.  I was just wishing a bit of torture on the guy.  Other than that I am most definitely not for his plans.



Author's Response: A squee moment is a cousin to the happy dance.  It's just intense joy.  Thanks for the review, and I'm glad that you liked it so much, Ms. Shrew.

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

ooh i am loving this!! i cant wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Glad.  Thanks!

Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

love possesive bella!!!



Author's Response: Thanks.  I do too!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

Flirting is good.  We like flirting.  Especially when flirting means lips and tongues and happy hands. 

I don't blame Bella for hating Calculus.  I hated it too.



Author's Response: I never had to take math after Algebra, so I didn't.  Geometry was the worst as I am so not logical.  Anyway, I like the flirting too.  I'll try not to just limit it to Bella and Edward. 

Reviewer: thebluejayway (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

Flirting is good:)

Author's Response: Glad you like it.  It was fun to write.

Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 9: Minty Fresh

Too Cute. Now I'm waiting for the lesson with Carlise.

Author's Response: The lessons won't be for a while.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: The Mole

*clearing throat loudly*  Did I read that correctly, or did you just claim a rivalry between James and Edward?  WTF?!  No, I re-read that, and that's what it says.  I am shocked.  First, you actually had me rooting for Aro *gasps loudly in surprsie* and then you got me again with that rivalry.  I am going to squirm over that one.  It's just so icky! LOL!   Love the story, now update soon please! :)

Author's Response:

There is a rivalry, but Edward's the only one Bella wants.  I can't believe you were rooting for Aro.  That's surprising, but then again, I'm always surprised by people's reactions.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 7: Pillow Talk

Oooh!  Alice's dream was creepy.  I'll bet James must drug the boys to keep them asleep, but I think they are going to regret not letting Bella know.  It might make things easier for James if she does not have all of the info.  Good story, totally loving this! :)

Author's Response: No drugs will be involved.  Thanks, Ms. Shrew!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 6: Idle Threats

Okay, so something happened to the site tonight.  It disappeared as I was reading your story.  Evil!  I bet James did it.  What I remember from my review was that I liked your sleepy Bella.  She was quite funny, and of course, Emmett was uber-adorable.  Hopefully, I can continue reading...*fingers crossed*

Author's Response: I know!  I was trying to update SAV and the site did this weird thing!  I'm so glad it's up this morning.  I might have updates for this story too.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 5: Official Complaints

Absofreakinlutely fantastic!  OMG!  There is so much in here that made me giggle like a 17 year old school girl! ;)  Let's see... some of my favorite moments are Edward thinking about kissing Bella's boo-boos;  Edward thinking of Bella as his woman; Bella describing the catfight between Edward and James; Emmett eating the Oreos as they played poker; Alice chanting "Eddie's got a girlfriend, Eddie's got a girlfriend."; Bella got a human minute and Edward did the happy dance!  MARVELOUS!  You totally rock!  Fabulous story Fangs!  You've made me a very happy shrew! :D

Author's Response: I'm so glad.  I might even have a "squee" moment in one of the chapters.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 4: Orientation Day

Love it!  Edward is fabulous in this, but I love Bella reaction to James; what an ashole indeed!  I couldn't have said that better myself. Favorite line: "I abused the opportunity to sweep his hair out of his eyes whenever possible.  He seemed to like it when I did, too."  I just adore the way you worded that. :)


Author's Response:

Yeah, James is really creepy, as always.  As far as B and E, they are quite smitten already.  It's that whole love-at-first-sight/destiny thing.  Thank you, Ms. Shrew.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 3: Arrival

p.s. So the school only takes orphans.  Does Aro ensure that the humans he wants become orphans?!  That is such an uber-creepy thought...eewww!  If the students ever found out that would be...bad for Aro and his plans.  Just speculating here, but you've really got me thinking.

Author's Response: Hmmmm....you might be on to something.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 3: Arrival

Emmett is freakin hysterical!  Rose had the best line: "Introduce yourself, dumbass."

I like the initial interaction of Edward and Bella.  Then he wiped her hand!  I love that! :)



Author's Response: Glad you like my portrayal of the characters.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2008 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: A Secret Request

Okay, Aro is EVIL!  WOW!  Your bad guys are really bad guys!  This is good set up.  It can go in so many directions.  What would happen if the other brothers found out?  Hmm...What about Carlisle?  If he is Headmaster Cullen, does that mean that he feeds on humans in this story?  I doubt it.  Will Carlisle one day lead a rebellion against the Volturri?  Intriguing idea ...  ;)  Reading on...

Author's Response:

Why Carlisle is involved will be revealed later.  He is still a vegetarian, or else couldn't hang out with the kids.

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