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Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
Happy birthday!
And I loved this chapter from the beginning to the end, especially the end, lol!! ;D I love how the relationship between Bella and Edward is developing, I'm really glad to see she's continuing to make progress and well, Edward is simply amazing!
Can't wait to see what will happen next! :D
Reviewer: Bones_Rocks (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
Happy Birthday! I'm really enjoying how this story is progressing. I hope things keep getting better for Bella.
Reviewer: little_hateful (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
well Happy Birthday and loved the chapter!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
Hey, Happy Birthday!!!!
Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! I hope she's getting better. It sounds strange, but it almost hurts to see her hurting like that. She deserves some happiness, even if she doesn't know it yet. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: Morbidmuch (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
Happy Birthday then :) Mine's on Thursday.
Reviewer: ssuryan (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
How thoughtful of you to give us an ExB kiss on YOUR birthday! Thanks!
And I know all about hubby being gone on birthdays (and Mothers Day). SO - get yourself your favorite pint of Ben & Jerry's, a bottle of champagne, and your favorite chick flick/80s movie (Some Kind of Wonderful is usually my choice) and take care of yourself!
Happy Birthday!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
what a wonderful chapter. loved it! Happy Birthday!!!
Reviewer: BellanEdward4ever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
Woo hoo!!! It's about freakin' time!!!
Happy birthday :)
Reviewer: TheFutureMrsPattinson (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
Happy birthday sweets!;)
I loved the chapter! (especially the ending..) I do hope Bella doesn't make it to easy for Edward though, I really really LOVE great angsty back-and-forth realationships =)
Great job!
Reviewer: pacificblue87 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
happy birthday!! and im soooo happy bella finally snapped the eff out of it! dang teenage angst!
Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 23 - Cocoon
Thank God indeed, Edward! lol
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Revelations
So Val, I have spent the past 2 days rereading this story. Though, I may have skimmed the tougher parts. ;)
I am so glad that I did. It is amazing to see everything that Bella has been through. I feel as if I can appreciate where Bella is now - so much more!
It was wonderful to see that she is continuing to make progress. While I don't expect her to change her thinking and feelings overnight - I am thrilled to see her changing.
I love how wonderful and supportive Edward is being. I truly wish we could have seen this Edward all along. Oh and he is 17 now, right? Niiiiccceee!!! ;)
Well done -- can't wait for more!
Reviewer: autumnbcullen (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Revelations
Ahh!! This is amazing. Sure, Bella's been through alot but I'm sure alot of us want Bella back and the way you've written Bella's character has really opened my eyes and (this is going to sound soooo cheesy) has helped me understand myself a little bit more. I've not been through (not even the first degree) what Bella has but her misery and those parts where she's not dead anymore is very...I cant find the words. UPDATE!!!
Reviewer: FanFic4SANITY32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Revelations
Any criticism or mean reviews you may have received about this story...ignore. This is by far one of the most realistic stories i have ever read. I grew up, and still live, in a small town..pop.3,000. I have experienced one way or another just about everything that is in this story...from the constant 'everyone knows everthing', friends comitting suicide in high school, having friends that 'used' guys, and especially the boredom. I adore this story...takes me back to those teenage years that we all thought we would never get through. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 22 - Revelations
wow ,she was honest with him .....
and now i've caught up ,damn the 20th seems so far away ......
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 21 - June Fifteenth
i never kept anything from my friends funeral ,i wish that i had
Edward (in my opinion) is doing everything the correct way.
Bella speaking to Mike is something she shouldv'e done months ago
Of course things have to get worse before they can get better
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Confession is Good for the Soul
i didn't ever want to smack Edward !
ive still a few more chapters to go ....
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Playing with Fire and Getting Burned
a bet ,typical ,stupid,hormone ridden, teenage boys!
Well i hope Bella starts to see things more clearly.
Edward ,does he know the extent of the bet ,how far James had got?
Im still playing catch up
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Trouble
yep ,you nearly got me ...poor Jake !
Bells is all kinds of messed up hey !
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 17 - In or Out of Control
Bella !
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Consequences
what the hell was Renee thinking !?
Bella def needs help ,im guessing we will have to watch her melt down before we can start the re freeze !
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Confrontations
i love the New Moon qoute ,in the book its exactly that point that i cave ...words are always more hurtful
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Crazy
this has to come from experience?
i never chastise in a review ,we all have opinions ,mine i choose to keep to myself
a lot of angst in this chapter ,im guessing its going to be a little dark for a while now ....
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Quicksand
wow ,what a chapter ,the eulogy was well written
Well done
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