Reviewer: barbiedoll123 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Worlds Collide
i loved this and jasper was gushing about her , i hope his wife dont find out
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
Thanks for the great story. I was so happy to read something set in DC since I work there and live in VA! You are awesome!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 27 - Waiting for My Real Life to Begin
that was cool!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 15 - No Air
that was hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!! way to go esme for lying!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Whatever It Takes
i had to read one more chapter before working...LOL!!!
so excited to know that Edward is in love with Bella. And of course Irina is a bitch...is she related to Tanya in this story?
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Crazy for You
exciting....can't wait to continue reading! have to do work now!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Worlds Collide
definitely interested especially since i work in dc. i really liked your other story Georgia on my mind....so I'm off to the next chapter.
Reviewer: twisample14 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Every Time I See You Smile
FYI - I'm still loving your story! I haven't beenr eviewing this one as much because I figured you're only reading reviews from the new story you're working on.... just in case you wondered....
Thanks again for sharing your wonderful stories with us
Reviewer: twisample14 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Worlds Collide
SK - we're off to another great start with this one!
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Please Don't Leave Me
i love when edward cries it is so f*cking sexy.. i just want to soothe his tears away
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Sunday Morning
edward is soooo pushy...i love it...sigh
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Don't Stand (So Close to Me)
edward naked in bed sleep?...yeah right
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 6 -- I'm Yours
oh my edward
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
OK....WOW! I started reading this story yesterday afternoon and could not stop! Well, I had to stop at about 2 a.m. this morning when the battery on my Blackberry died, but I picked back up with the last few chapters a couple of hours ago and just finished. I LOVE your writing. All three of your stories are captivating and so far I've been hooked after the first chapter! I can't wait to continue the journey of your newest, Gateway! I love what you do with our beloved characters. Keep up the incredible job!
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Confidence
" I love it when a good plan comes together" Channeling you inner A-Team? LOL Hannibal's line was always "I love it when a plan comes together". *snirk* 80s flashback. If it wasn't intentionally I think it's even funnier
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Confidence
" I love it when a good plan comes together" Channeling you inner A-Team? LOL Hannibal's line was always "I love it when a plan comes together". *snirk* 80s flashback. If it wasn't intentionally I think it's even funnier
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 15 - No Air
Lawyer joke:
So this lawyer has a weekend off and decides to take his Czechoslovakian friend to the cabin. Well they're out in the back having a barbeque with some beer when two bears show up and the male eats the lawyer's friend. Immediately, the lawyer pulls out his cell and calls the local sherrif department. A few minutes later the sherrif and the country ranger show up. The lawyer starts pointing emphatically and says "It's him! He ate my friend!!!" Without pausing, without hesitating for a second, the sheriff shoots the female. The lawyer is quite confused and turns to the sherrif saying, "I told you the OTHER bear ate my friend. Why did you shoot the female?"
The sherrif responds, saying, "Like I'm going to believe ANY lawyer who says the czech is in the male."
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Hanging by a Moment
*sniff sniff* That was so beautiful! I'd love to unexpectedly see a closet open with lots of empty hangers.
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Sunday Morning
Heh... Dear Edward -- still the overly controlling good hearted guy we all know and love. :P
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Fix You
ASSHOLE!! Aside from the immediate inclination to vomit from the date rape drugging, that's my reaction to Newton. Any story that makes me react that strongly (and keeps me up till 2:30am reading with no intention of stopping) is a good one. That means your story is a good one :D
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Whatever It Takes
Irinia as the bitch-whore. Nice change, it's usually Tanya for some reason.
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Obsession
All your chapter titles are songs. Cool. I never though a story revolving around a law office could be interesting. I like.
Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
Awesome story! Great writing! Can't wait to read your next story.
Reviewer: Thaitetwi (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Afternoon Delight (born2speakmirth)
Wow, That was hot! Awesome writing!
Reviewer: bibliojodienda (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 6 -- I'm Yours
are you for real? she had been violated,and she is flirting eaten ,drinking,and ended explain herself ,,, who called her frigid? ....
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