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Reviewer: twilightcougar (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2014 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Obsession
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Reviewer: BelovedSunshine (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2013 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
I found this out of the blue on a list this week! I was so excited to have a new story from you. :) I loved it. And I will share with you that I threw up through 4 pregancies. I still have a list of foods I don't mind throwing up and foods I don't ever want to throw up again!
This was great! Thanks :)
Reviewer: ladybird2 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2013 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
I totally enjoyed re reading your story!
Marie
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Reviewer: Emma Goldman (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2013 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Crazy for You
Love this story! And I have to say I really love how you have captured D.C. work culture. I've worked on the politics side of things but it is all the same long hours and lots of alchol!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Make This Go On Forever
Thank you so much for the glimpse into Bella and Edward's future. Their daughter and Rose and Emmett's son was a nice touch, but their son turning out exactly like his father was too funny! And with Angela's daughter, too! What goes around comes around for sure! Great story, I loved it all!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 27 - Waiting for My Real Life to Begin
I think it was wonderful, romantic and quite the surprise of everyone's holidays! There's not too much that's conventional about these two anyway!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 26 - All I Want for Christmas is You
Edward is a good brother and happily got Jasper and Alice back on track. That's sweet, since Alice is whipping together the wedding for him and Bella! Carlisle and Esme were just about overwhelmed by the good news. Wait until they get to ceremony tomorrow! This is going to be so cool!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 25 - Where We Gonna Go From Here
I'll bet Edward will be teased by his dad, about his bride being pregnant. Like father, like son! Too bad Bella had so little faith in Edward that she would think he wouldn't want his own child!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 24 - Just Say Yes
One more thing these two need to talk about is the possibility of children. Edward did not have a good reaction to that little scare they had a couple weeks back.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 23 - The Blower's Daughter
Edward's doing the right thing by telling Bella's folks the truth of their living arrangements. Charlie has it right, too when he tells Edward that the hard part will be convincing Bella to marry him. For some un known reason, she just can't let herself believe his protestations of love and forever!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Afternoon Delight (born2speakmirth)
Great chapter, with Edward securing the huge new account! That loyalty test was kind of surprising, especially the part where Edward thought to himself that his old self would have done it without even thinking about it! It's nice that there are still a few things he's never done with anyone but Bella!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Every Time I See You Smile
That was just too funny, telling Jane about Edward's girl and Bella's guy! I couldn't believe that Ms. Cope kept her marriage secret for twenty-five years! On to Italy, where Bella's idea will no doubt be the factor leading to the big new client!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 20 - You and Me
Oh joy! Edward's made partner and Marcus knows he and Bella are together! That must be a relief to both of them! Sneaky Edward, getting Renee to cancel Bella's visit so she will be free to accompany him to Italy!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Confidence
Edward really dodged the bullet on this one! Lucky Aro and Heidi put family ahead of business and knew who was trying to stab Edward in the back! With the opportunity to take on another big client, Edward is really looking good to the firm! Best of all, he's back in Bella's good graces. Hope Alice and Jasper are going to be okay about the baby!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Empire State of Mind
I'll say one thing, the man works like a dog! Talk about long hours, good grief, as Charley Brown would say! Something else these two need to initiate is more communication!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Here Without You
Ordinarily I would tell Rose to mind her own business, but I think she may be on the right path here. Edward admits to himself he has control issues and he and Bella need to talk things out more and decide stuff together. Not happy to hear Jane is going to cause more trouble. They really don't need anymore right now.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Please Don't Leave Me
I'm kind of surprised at Edward! Not that he would break down and cry, but that he would take out his anger on Bella the way that he did ! Marcus telling Edward to make sure Bella had a good time in New York was slightly suspicious too!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 15 - No Air
This must be why you should never lie to your mother, for if you do, it will come back to haunt you! I laughed just like Bella did, sure you're embarassed, but it is funny! Esme did a great job of lying to Marcus, too, but it was exciting news that Bella would get the clerkship and help with school!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2013 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 14 - I'm in Love with the Girl
People, being the little humans they are, those tales you've heard are probably not urban legends! That was a funny for them to nearly get caught like that!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Stop and Stare
Life is zipping right along! Edward must be thrilled to have Bella moving in, and going to New York with him, too! It sure makes things nicer when everyone gets along the way they do, and his parents already love her.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Hanging by a Moment
Looks like Edward's crops are in, you know, reaping what he ha sown? Poor guy is trying so hard to change and be the man who deserves Bella, true blue and straight arrow!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Sunday Morning
Bossy Edward, telling instead of asking. Wonder how that's going to be received? Hope he doesn't shoot himself in the foot!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Don't Stand (So Close to Me)
That sentence, about an intelligent man being stupid, was pretty cute! For an evening that had it's ups and downs, it seems to have ended real well!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Livin' on a Prayer
It's surprising that Edward and Bella never met before, considering how much time she's spent with his parents. This should be fun at the party, them trying not to be obvious and all.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2013 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 - They Bring Me To You
It tickled me that Jake beat hell out of Newton and put him in the hospital! The interview with Garrett and Marcus went rather well, too. Rachel came through with flying colors, despite disliking Bella. Then again , who wants to see a woman raped before their very eyes? I had to chuckle a bit over the swimsuit and the four condoms! Maybe they'll both get lucky?
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