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Reviewer: cher (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 23: Rehearsals
This fic is so wonderful. I think this is the cutest drunk marriage ever. My two year old is in the hospital right now and in her downtime this chap brought me a smile..update soon so I have something to cheer me up
Author's Response: Cher, I am so sorry to hear about your daughter. My thoughts and prayers are with you. If there is an outtake that you would like to see, email me and let me know so I can write it for you and give you some extra Vegas. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: cofey (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 23: Rehearsals
loving ur fic and glad edward is getting ready to tell the family .. feel sorry for bela that he makes her feel that he's ashamed to be with her let alone married to her .. yes was quick and they were off their faces drunk but they do love each other and soooooooo belong together ... they could always have a 'recommitment' ceremony and do the whole family and pictures bit .. bet that grandma cullen already knows they r 'involved'
my biggest prob with ur fic is that i am desperate for updates and unfortunately am not soooooooooo patient
thanks for sharing
xoxo ety
Author's Response: Thank you cofey! I am so pleased to hear your feedback. The recommittment ceremony is a great idea. I might have to do that!
I am updating every week around Thursday because I am trying to keep ahead of the curve writing wise. When RL gets me bogged down (like right now), I don't want to make you all wait a long time for the next chappie.
Reviewer: becky 1963 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 23: Rehearsals
so so good
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 23: Rehearsals
I hope their news don't slip before the time they are planning. can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Oh, gracebella. Things are never so easy for these two, are they? More coming soon. Are there any outtakes you want to see? PM me and let me know.
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
Sweet and hot ;)
Achilles
Author's Response: Thanks, Achilles!
Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
I've really been enjoying this - and I love the grandmothers, lol! Thank you for the smile!
Author's Response: Thank you, darcybabe! The grandmothers just might be my favorite part. They make me laugh too!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
Ok, so now I'm expecting them to get busted in on in the morning in all their post-coital bliss... :D
Author's Response: I have a few more surprises in store! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
I LOVE IT. EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
great chapter....i forgot how long you make your chapters, it was a lovely surprise..
Author's Response: Thank you! This was the longest one so far by more than 1000 words. I just had too much to say and I wanted to leave it there.
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
Great Chapter I cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank you, lilmissb!
Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
I can't wait for everyone to find out they're married! The question is - - - will it be a planned reveal or an unexpected revelation...
Loving the story!
Author's Response: Oooh, SchlagerG, you have hit on the crux of the issue... Which will it be?? There is still so much to go! Thanks!
Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
Wonderful chapter addition. Theres been a few occasions where I was extremely jealous only to find out that if i had just asked the situation would have never gotten sour. Human mind is a funny thing.
Chapter ended well. Cannot wait to see how these two manage through Alices wedding without blurting something out.
Author's Response: The human mind is a funny thing! We can talk ourselves into all kinds of corners, can't we! Thank you for reading and reviewing. It means the world to me.
Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
Love the new chapter, can't wait until everyone finds out they are married!
Author's Response: Thank you leechlover81! People will continue to find out in stages but the next stage is coming up soon.
Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
You always pack so much into your chapters. It's wonderful! It's going to be so interesting when the B/E marriage news comes out. I hope Esme isn't too disappointed. Thanks so much for writing. Love your story.
Author's Response: Your words always mean so much to me, Maserati. Thank you so much. The wedding chapter will be eventful to say the least!
Reviewer: britishangelsoul (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
Oooh, not being careful to be quiet in a busy house? Uh oh.
Author's Response: Could have consequences, no? Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
Omg I loved that chapter... The sex was hot and they are so cute together. The jealous bar scene was funny. I can't think
of a time I was jealous for no reason but iam sure it's happened. Can't wait for the
next update!
Author's Response: I have the next one all ready to go! I am glad you liked it--it was sure fun to write! Thanks for reading and responding--it makes my day!
Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 22: Explosions
Awww- he loves her! He needs to tell her :) Fun chapter- can't wait for the wedding.
Author's Response: It is sure to be exciting--that's for sure! Thanks for the response!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 21: Preparations
I love this so much. I cant wait for the update. I apoligize for not reviewing as I went through but I wanted to tell you how amazing it is. I love Edward and Bella even though Edward pisses me off sometimes. I hope they tell each other how they feel about each other soon. If they love each other then they should say it to one another no matter how short their time has been with one another. Then again my husband and I are going to be celebrating our 6 year anniversary and we got engaged after 6 months of going out so I may be the wrong person to ask lol Sometimes you just know. :-) Update soon, I love it!
Author's Response: I don't mind you waiting until you were finished. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you like it. That's all that really matters to me. I am a firm believer that when it's right, you know and you should go for it. These two, though, have been taught something different. Bella has the experience of watching her mom "fall in love" over and over again with it never lasting and Edward has been raised to be overly cautious. I think that can be hard to get past sometimes. They will get there.
I update every Thursday and I am planning to post some outtakes as a separate story at some point. I only have one in mind so far but if there are others you would like to see, message me and let me know. Thank you!
Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 21: Preparations
LOVE Grandma Cullen!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad. The grandmas were so much fun to write. I am going to have to bring them back later.
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 21: Preparations
it is great
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 21: Preparations
My wedding was lovely. However, I ordered a stacked cake and when I arrived at the Inn to get ready, the cake was tiered and holding up the tiers were pillars with swans attached to them. It was awful and I turned into Bridezilla on the spot. My photographer sent me upstairs to get ready and saved the day. He got rid of the pillars, leaving only the risers and put fresh flower petals around each layer. It was ended up being gorgeous, but I definitely ended up having my insane, Bridezilla moment.
Author's Response: I love Bridezilla moments. I turned into one when my mother was more than 2 hours late to take me to the church and she refused to let me leave without her. I know the feeling. Thanks for hanging with me here!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 21: Preparations
I loved the whole Grandma things that is the main reason we eloped lol. I missed Edward this chapter and I was kinda hoping Bella would slip and tell Esme her and Edwards secret. I loved how bella called Esme Mom and even though it was probably something she called her all the time it means so much more now. Cant wait for more. I was having such a bad day today and when I saw your story in my inbox it made it so much better thanks so much!!
Author's Response: You are welcome lilmissb! Your review made my day better. I wanted to spend some time showing the existing relationship that Bella and Esme have. Edward will rejoin us in the next chapter and he is as fun as ever! The grandmas have been so popular, I might have to bring them back a little later, just for the fun of it.
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 21: Preparations
Wedding horror stories? Other than marrying the right man, I don't think a single thing actually went right at my wedding. From the band quitting the night before to seriously unexpected snow at the outdoor tentless Arizona wedding to the minister reading the rough draft that was full of cross outs and elipsis... next anniversary will be 13 though.
I like the story very much. I am having trouble with these two and their hmmmm, not even sure how to put it. They seem to be making it so much harder than they need to. They like each other, but don't know each other well; so forget being "married" for awhile and just act like you are dating. Stop all the husband and wife pressure since it doesn't seem real, and just date until you find each other. And Edward, much as I usually love him, kind of an ass. Not only does he keep blowing up at her but he's keeping things from her too, like his need to work more. Not gonna work so well in a relationship if he can't get his act together.
Author's Response: I find that wedding horror stories are the norm but yours seem to take the cake. Congrats on the 13 years though.
I am glad you like the story. I can completely see your point but, as a married woman, I would find it hard to put that aside, even if it was unplanned, and treat the man like we were just dating (even if it would make more sense). As for Edward, he's a man that feels a lot of pressure and doesn't really know how to express things. He lets things build up, then blows. Sadly, I think I am a lot like Edward in that way and I often push things aside until I can't stand it anymore then hit my spouse with crap that he thinks is out of the blue. Honesty is always better though and they will learn.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I love your thoughts here.
Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 21: Preparations
chaos :) but weddings usually are . very nice chapter addition.
Author's Response: Thank you! Weddings are chaos, aren't they?
Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 21: Preparations
The grandmas are too funny! Good for Bella to stand up to them. I liked that she and Esme had a little moment togther. I am now starting to wonder when and how the truth will come out and what Esme's reaction will be. Great chapter- can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: More grandma fuckery on the way for your reading pleasure. I can't reveal more about Esme's response but know that it is pivotal. And I think I'm gong to write an extra chapter on her POV, just so she gets to tell it in all its glory.
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