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Reviewer: kelly101079 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

I really hope they treat her good and make her feel like a part of the family and not make her feel like she did something wrong



Author's Response:

Esme and Carlisle love Bella, plain and simple. There will be more soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: hmregan13 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Wow! So did not see the big reveal happening that way. Love it! I think Esme and Carlsile might still have their concerns, but will relax now that they realize that Edward has married Bella and not Tanya. I hope they will be supportive- Edward and Bella have enough stacked against them. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Let me just say that Carlisle and Esme will not be supportive of Edward's decisions. Eep! I am going to have to hide! Maybe Snowqueens Icedragon will let me camp out in her bunker!

Thanks, hmregan! I always love hearing from you!

Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

nOOOOOOOO!!!! you did not just leave me hanging with that last statement!!!! LMAO!!! ;-P
the cullens love bella!!!! lol =-) ooo i bet esme will wanna start planning their wedding or even help with the honeymoon!! funny how esme thought it was tanya!!! lol. great chapter!!! so remember dont leave me hanging toooo long, now that the secret out!!! lol
tiny

Author's Response:

Hey tiny! There will not be another wedding for them, sadly. You do get to see theirs in the outtake though!

I had to stop there; it was just too long to keep going.

Reviewer: Neurotika (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Ooooh, why end it there????!

I'll admit I was pissed at Carlisle and Esme until they said Tanya. Then I started laughing.

Update REALLY soon? 

xxx



Author's Response:

There will be an update next week (I am ducking to avoid the tomatoes). There is an outtake coming soon, though. I had to end it there because the chapter would have been just too long if I kept going.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. It makes my day to know that you like my little story.

Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

OMG my heart is pounding I cant wait for more... hehehhe LOVE it



Author's Response:

Thank you, lilmissb! More is coming! And an outtake soon!

Reviewer: mika90 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

you just about gave me a heart attack, with that stunt! lol

 

I got so scared that they didn't like Bella! but instead they didn't like Tanya! 

 

please update soon! i wanna know how the parental's are gonna react! ;)

 

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

There will be more soon, I promise! Thank you for reading and reviewing. Carlisle and Esme love Bella. And that's all I can say about that.

Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Love it! Love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! There will be an outtake coming soon!

Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

OHHHHHHH HELLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!! This was gooddddd. I love the end of the chapter, it was priceless.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Mayi! It's going to be a bumpy ride!

Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Dumdadumdum!!!  Poor Edward & Bella!  Bella is going to crawl into a hole if Carlisle & Esme still have the same opinion of the marriage as they did when they thought Edward married Tanya!  Jeez!  Hopefully, you will cut Bella SOME slack and let them be semihappy for Edward and Bella.  Bella is as patient as Esme (it appears) so why couldn't she handle his residency???

I think Edward needs to "grow a pair" and 1) give Bella the security she needs by telling her he loves her and wants to be married to her; and 2) tell the parents he is a grown, responsible man (Grownward/Ballward-LOL)  who is quite capable of taking care of his life!  Just look at all he has accomplished!  

Well you asked for my take on it!  This is your story and I am only along for the ride you are taking us on!  Thanks for writing your tale!!!!

dhull (Austin, TX)



Author's Response:

Thank you dhull! Edward will get there. Just remember that his parents just validated all of his fears and he will take that hard. Bear with me. I believe in HEAs so I can guaranteed one! BTW, I love Ballward! That cracked me up!

Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

I liked the way you revealed their marriage!  How funny they thought he had married Tanya, but understandable.  Please let them tell each other that they love one another sooner rather than later!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you liked it! There is a lot coming and, I promise, he will tell her.

Reviewer: twilightobssessedmom (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

That was a great chapter!!! So, now Ma and Pa Cullen know.  I can't believe they thought it was Tanya!! Hopefully they will be happy now that they know it is Bella! I cannot wait for the next chapter!! I love this story!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you like it! It makes me so happy to hear that! Tanya was the last serious girlfriend he had so it was a natural reaction. Stick with me here because the ride is about to get bumpy!

Reviewer: Twilight fan and mom (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

WooHooo!!!!!!!!!

 

LOVED IT!!!!!!!:)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Wonderful chapter full of thr wedding!
I was hoping the Vegas wedding wouldn't come up, but of course it did! I just hope Edward stands up and declares his love for Bella ... and of course his intention to stay married to her.

Thank you for your frequent updates and soon for the out-takes. This is a great story!

Author's Response:

Thank you Schlager G! Carlisle and Esme did manage to hit many of Edward's fears and validated them. His reactions will not be so clear cut. I will have more to you soon!

Reviewer: gracebella (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Nice chapter! I think it would be unfair if Carisle and Esme change their reaction because it was Bella. Well, their reasons are mess already. They are accusing him that the marrige is not good for his career while the thruth is, they want him to get divorce cause they hate his wife. Even it was misunderstanding they are wrong. If I'm Edward, I would be pissed too.

Edward needs to make his parents accept their marrige by declaring his feelings. Mostly for Bella's sake though, as a reward of her suffering. Time to man up! Update soon.



Author's Response:

Keep in mind that Edward is also very concerned and his parents words hit him exactly where it hurt most, whether that is what is intended. They do hate Tanya but also know that she is not very supportive of him and that is where they draw the line.

The next chapter is ready to go and I will have it to you soon! Thank you!

Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Arg...you're evil!!  Please update soon.  Can't wait to see how E & C dig their way out of this.



Author's Response:

(See me laughing maniacally and rubbing my hands together!) I know, I know. It was cruel and unusual to leave it there but it was necessary! I promise that I have the next chapter ready! Thank you!

Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Holy hell. I can't believe you ended it there. Oh, please get the next chapter up soon. :)



Author's Response:

The next part was just too long to include! I promise that I have it written and I will post it on schedule (if not a little early!). Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Hi

I think they will back up now that the realise that he hasnt married Tanya - but i think he will have a very angry and embarrased Bella on his hands and a lot of explaining to do.

Cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Oh, Edward will continue to have lots of explaining to do. But no worries, it is all for the greater good--I promise!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

What a beautiful wedding! Even if Edward wasn't paying attention!

Now I'm dying to know what Esme & Carlisle's reaction to Bella will be. I certainly didn't expect Tayna to make an appearance in the story!



Author's Response:

Oh, and Tanya will be back soon. It was a lovely wedding and everything that Alice always wanted. I promise to have you a chapter by next Thursday (and maybe something special for Easter, if I can manage it)! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

i hope finding out it is bella will make the biggest difference in the world. if they are still negative, i think it will hurt bella so badly.



Author's Response:

Carlisle and Esme's support will not be a problem for them. There is some angst coming though, so stick with me and we'll borrow the bunker from some other authors! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

wow

great chapter.

i think they'll be dissapoinment at first but then thei'll be happy for them.



Author's Response:

Quite right, quite right! There is a lot more to come! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Avaanne (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

A shrieking Esme, Carlisle losing his cool, and the reveal of Edward and Bella's marriage .... what more could one ask for in a chapter.  I loved this one.



Author's Response:

Thank you! There certainly was a lot and there is more coming soon! Keep your eyes open for the outtakes too!

Reviewer: twilightfanatic09 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

That was a great chapter but im totally pouting about that cliffie you just left us with :P lol keep up the great work!!!!



Author's Response:

I know you all don't like cliffies, but this chapter was already more than 8000 words! The next chapter is full as well! Thank you for your kind words and for reading! It made my day!

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

LOVED the "intorduction"! (And all the rest was nice, too!) ;) I can't wait to hear Edward say those three little words. Thanks so much! Your update made my day.



Author's Response:

Thanks, darcybabe! There is a lot going on with these two now and I already have a lot more ready for you all!

Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

I do believe that Carlisle and Esme will be eating their words next chapter. Can't wait to read it.



Author's Response:

In the immortal words of Cake, perhaps, perhaps, perhaps. More will be up soon and my first outtake should be posted shortly!

Reviewer: sarahstokley (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Wedding

Hm..I wonder what they'll think since it's Bella.  I think they'll still be a little upset because they were left in the dark, but I bet their initial reaction will be RELIEF that it's not Tanya!!!  I can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. They are definitely relieved! More will be up soon. Stay tuned for an outtake too!

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