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Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

That didn't go like I thought it would! Hope they get back together soon, so when does the "attacks" going on around the city play more into the story? Unexpected but a well written chapter.



Author's Response:

You are keeping me on my toes with the insightfulness. More on those attacks soon and there will be a couple more chapters of angst. I love your reviews!

Reviewer: momtokyle (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

wasn't expeting this turn of events. looking forward to read more chapters.

Author's Response:

Thank you! More is coming soon!

Reviewer: Natalina (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

he is an ass hat why does he always run when the going gets tough



Author's Response:

Because he is an idiot and an asshat. And a man. He will figure it out though. I promise!

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Edward, you bastard...how DARE you treat Bella this way?  She has done nothing...and you are seriously going to regret this...

I am so angry at Edward right now...

Bella is SO hurt, I don't blame her if she NEVER forgives Edward...if she does, she better make him grovel...and I mean a LOT!!!

Not to mention that Rosalie is going to be angry too...and no one wants an angry Rosalie...

Who cares, Edward?  You are making these decisions without her and that is really beyond stupid and idiotic...so don't EVEN expect sympathy from too many people...

Bella didn't seem inclined to talk...well what the hell did you expect Edward?  You are SUCH an idiot...

You are truly stupid if you don't know how Bella would react...

He does NOT need to be coddled...he needs to be laid into but good...

LOVE this chapter, even if I am extremely angry with Edward :)



Author's Response:

Um, I am glad that you liked it. Edward does have some issues and he will be working on those. Keep the tissues and baseball bat out for a couple more chapters!

Reviewer: darcybabe (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Gosh, I didn't expect this at all. Any chance it will fixed soon? I loved Carlise's succint, "yes," when asked if they all hated Tanya that much. More, please, and soon!



Author's Response:

Um, define soon? It will take a couple of chapters but there will be a happy ending. Just bear with me!

Reviewer: lynnjay79 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Wow, that was a painful chapter.  Just when they are getting so close - overreation and lack of communication strikes again!  ugh!!!!



Author's Response:

Yea, I know. The next one won't be roses either. Bear with me. There will be an HEA. Thank you!

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Wow... totally not what I was expecting :(



Author's Response:

No one expected it, but there it is. More angst on the way then full steam ahead to an HEA!

Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Hi

I liked this chapter but was a bit disapointed in both Edward and his parents, I think they could have all handled it better.

I hope that Edward wakes up soon and goes and apologise to Bella - I hope she forgives him but isnt too easy on him - he needs to realise that they can get through this together and that he shouldnt just assume that she wont be able to cope with his schedule.

Cant wait for the next chpater.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support here. You are right, no one handled it well. There will be resolution but we have a little more angst to go.

Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

That was NOT what I expected at all! Holy crow that was like crazy talk lol They went from totally in love and together...to nothing in minutes. WTF Edward I want to punch you right now. What a dip shit. Edward should go crawling back, fucking beg for forgiveness and hope Bella even listens to his dumb ass. All in all, I am not sure if Bella should forgive him. I mean she should definitely listen to him and if he is truly sorry for freaking out etc then maybe but right now...Edward has some serious sucking up to do, to me as well as Bella lol I personally am a HUGE Edward and Bella fan I mean HUGE but right now, I am not liking him very much. He did a crazy 360 and I am very very pissed at him. How can she ever forgive him for cutting out on her like that. From going to one extreme to the other in less than 24 hours. What was the difference between telling Carlisle and Esme then or the Brunch? What and when did his mind change? It doesnt make sense. I dont like this chapter lol please say its a dream or something lol This is so heartbreaking. I want to forgive him...you better have a good plan haha lol You are an awesome writer though and I do "normally" like this story but this chapter...not my favorite lol Oh and HOLY FUCK Alice is going to be PISSED!



Author's Response:

Nikkycoly, it was the culmination and confirmation of all his worries and fears that caused him to react the way he did. The 12 hours between then and brunch would not have made such a difference if his parents hadn't reacted so negatively. He does have some serious butt-kissing to do and it will take him some time to do it right. After all, just an "I'm sorry" isn't going to do it.

Only one person has been upset with Bella here. She didn't fight for them very hard either. She let her own insecurities color her reaction as well and she let him push her away.

There will be an HEA, just bear with me until we get there!

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Like Carlisle I don't understand either.  He's seriously fucked up this time - I realised he said those things partly because he thought his parents reaction was a negative one but then in the phone call to Carlisle did he change his mind or what?  Is he trying to formulate a way to apologise? (although after that she should seriously kick his arse) Help, I'm confused?

Achilles



Author's Response:

Achilles, he is trying to find a way to apologize because he knows that he has messed up and he knows the standard "sorry" isn't going to cut it. The concerns that led him to this place still exist though. Carlisle's assurance that they could live through it helps immensely since he has already been there and his marriage to Esme is still strong.

Does that help?

Reviewer: bwaygirl0521 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

heartfail......  i am so sad....but i still can't wait to read more....PLEASE tell me the angst won't last long...



Author's Response:

Only a couple of chapters. We will get to the HEA!

Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Wow, Edward is dumb. Really, really dumb. Maybe too dumb? I'm not sure that I can believe that if he was really that sorry that he would let it go that long. Just because he wants to think of a good apology? Also, his parents say one thing and he's done? That seems pretty weak sauce to me. He didn't even let them finish their sentence! He's an idiot. Forget him Bella! Sorry, I had to rant! Anywho, I really do like this story.  See ya next time.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Never underestimate the fear of failure and having all of your doubts and concerns validated by those whose opinion means the most. That said, he is an idiot. More coming soon!

Reviewer: gris2001 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

edwars should suffer



Author's Response:

He just lost Bella. He will suffer. Unfortunately, so will Bella. Bear with me while they work through it!

Reviewer: belward (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

He should be ready to gravel gravel gravel, also buy tons of books for bella she would love that! He needs to put on his big girl panies and man up

Author's Response:

I love it--big girl panties and manning up! It's awesome! Thanks!

Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Edward is typically a little emo, so this is normal behavior for him. I think they need to get past it and realize they don't do well apart.



Author's Response:

How right you are! They will get past it but it will take some time. Bear with me while we get there!

Reviewer: TwilightMom505 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Bella needs to put him through the wringer! Assward surfaced and he needs to pay - just for a little while!!!!



Author's Response:

He won't get an instant reprieve, that is for sure. Thanks for all of your support!

Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

love it! Thank you for updating! Please update soon! This is my fav story!

Author's Response:

Ooh! That makes me so happy to hear! I don't think I've ever been anyone's favorite before! You will have another chapter on Thursday!

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Holy Crap! That was SO not what I expected!!! I can't believe Edward would just jump ship so quickly & leave Bella thinking she's nothing!

I figured Carlisle & Esme would've wrapped them both up in big hugs. Edward needs to get his head out of his butt & do some serious kissing up to Bella.

I'm a HEA kinda girl & want them to fix things.



Author's Response:

I am an HEA girl too so you shall have the fixing. It just takes some time to get there. Thank you!

Reviewer: Jessie (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

I think Edward owes Bella some serious groveling.  f



Author's Response:

Just groveling? Most readers are out for blood. I think she owes him some fight too. After all, how strongly could she feel if she didn't even fight for their marriage?

Thank you!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

This story is giving me chest pains!  The angst really hurts...you're physically hurting your readers with this story!  Don't you feel bad?  You should give us a really quick update to make us feel better :D



Author's Response:

I do feel bad--your guilt trip made me laugh. The next chapter is with my beta and as soon as she gets it to me, I will get it to you! That should be sometime Thursday.

 

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

oh my!!! i didnt see that coming at all...how could Edward do that to Bella, yea she should forgive him but not until after some hard work and fun suprises...



Author's Response:

Edward's a man and not one that is good with relationships. There is lots to come! Thanks for reading and reviewing each chapter--it makes my day!

Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

Well now that was NOT what I was expecting!  I was thinking they would get the misunderstanding rectified and then the rest of the trip would go as planned....you definitley suprised me! 

Edward is being a drama king though....he's really taking the brooding thing to a new level, isn't he??   Bella needs to make him work for it!  I would!  Whatever....you can do anything for love, even medical residency!  I've seen it!  Wake up Edward!  LOL!!! 

I LOVE your story!  Looking forward to see how you have Bella handling all of this!  Thanks for writing!

dhull (Austin, TX)



Author's Response:

Thanks dhull! He's Edward, brooding is what he does best. We have a little more angst in store but there will be resolution. I am an HEA kind of girl!

 

Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

hmmm not sure what I think of this. You captured the emotions well and I felt like Bella and Edward would feel. I guess everything couldnt be peaches and cream. As usual I cant wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, lilmissb! I am glad that you could feel the tension and the pain. The angst will last a little longer but I will resolve it, I promise.

I have already posted the first outtake and the second will go up tomorrow.

Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

I am very angry with what Edward did. That was so stupid and irrational and impulsive and he should be ashamed of himself for doing such a thing to Bella. Especially since she has given him no reason to doubt that she could handle his work schedule. I a bit angry with how Bella reacted too. I can understand she might have been shocked when all of a sudden he said "this isn't going to work" But never would I have expected her to still let him walk her out to the truck. I would have been happier had she slapped him and told him to stay far, far away from her. I hope she doesn't take him back immediately. I hope she makes him grovel and beg and make it up to her a million times over. But those are just my thoughts. Otherwise great chapter and I hope you'll update with another one soon.

Heather



Author's Response:

Thanks, Heather. Nothing will be easy for either of them and we have a couple more chapters of angst but stick with me. There are outtakes posted on my profile too. One went up today and the other will go up tomorrow.

I am glad that you noticed that Bella didn't follow through with what she should have done either. That isn't a very popular sentiment but a true one, nonetheless. She should have fought harder to make him see reason.

Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 25: Repercussions

I can't believe Edward did that to Bella.  Your writing is so good that I feel like Edward broke up with me.  In your last sentence, you say Bella's wrath, but isn't it more like broken heart?  I can totally see where she would believe that he was just trying to placate her to get through the wedding and that he didn't really care for her.  I was hoping there would be a little more of the conversation between Edward and Carlisle at the end here.  I sure hope Esme can soothe Bella, since it looks like Edward will be too busy working to do it.  My heart is breaking, so please update SOON!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Edward and Carlisle will have another conversation. And you're right, that schedule that Edward was worried about will come into play very soon. You will have another chapter on Thursday. If you haven't already, check out the outtakes. I posted the first today and the second will come tomorrow!

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