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Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
What a sweet chapter. I loved the dissusion on houses. I think they should show the fam the dvd! Cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am happy that you liked it! I will have more for you soon. The next chapter is getting beta'd now!
Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
Ugh! I hate cliff hangers. Update again soon!
Author's Response: I did! I did! You already have the next chappie! Thanks!
Reviewer: allycat38654 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
aww they r so sweet
Author's Response: Thank you! They are really moving forward in their relationship and really trying to be there for each other. More coming soon!
Reviewer: charlieD (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
realy think that they should share with thier familie sas to wether they do is up to you
thanks
charlie
Author's Response: Yes, in the end, it is up to me, but I do so love your opinions! You have no idea how much they influence my writing! Thanks Charlie! More soon, just for you!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
YES share it, especially Esme, poor thing. They are too cute for words.
Author's Response: Thanks Nikkycoly! I am gald you liked it! More coming soon!
Reviewer: 3dawns (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
Should they show it or not? Hmmmm.....they were so drunk that they don't remember it, BUT they both looked extremely happy throughout. That could go either way. The friends will like it, but the rents may not. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: The rents? Hmmm, yes, Esme might be a little disappointed. But at least they have a visual record of it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! More soon!
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
A wedding party sounds good to me. Dress up, video watching, dancing and maybe vow renewal. Replay of the wedding night could be fun... Thanks, Nancy
Author's Response: Thanks Nancy! I hadn't considered having a party for them but it is a good idea. More coming soon!
Reviewer: RI40 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
aww, edward is so sweet.
what the hell bella text him.
Nuigfjt basnby. Lobe u. Is this another language, becaue I know good night and baby doesn't have so much letters.
LOL.
enjoyed the chapter and shouldn't you be sleeping not updating.
Author's Response: Edward is really trying. Her actual message is supposed to be Night baby. Love U. If you've ever tried drunk texting, things never come out as you plan. She hit a few extra letters but was too intoxicated to realize it. She had fun though.
I am glad that you liked it! I posted it before I left for work. Despite being sick, I still had to go in and put in a full day!
Reviewer: Ann Middle (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
I vote yes, they should share it with their family. Why not? Awesome chapter as usual. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: You are definitely in the majority here! Thank you very much! I am really glad you liked it. I will provide more very soon!
Reviewer: Magic Reader (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
SHARING IS CARING!!! LET EVERYONE SEE THE VIDEO!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Too funny! Sharing is caring! I love it! Thank you!
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 34: Taking Care
soo cute, i think they should totally share the video with the family. Especially Esme, since she is like a mother to Bella. i think she would love to see the video of the wedding.
Author's Response: I bet that she would! Thank you so much! I am glad that you liked it.
Reviewer: purpledaisy (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter One: Preparations
Alice driving a civic?! No way! lol ;-)
Reviewer: purpledaisy (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter One: Preparations
Alice driving a civic?! No way! lol ;-)
Reviewer: purpledaisy (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter One: Preparations
Alice driving a civic?! No way! lol ;-)
Reviewer: purpledaisy (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter One: Preparations
Alice driving a civic?! No way! lol ;-)
Reviewer: purpledaisy (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter One: Preparations
Alice driving a civic?! No way! lol ;-)
Author's Response: LOL! It can't always be a yellow Porsche--not in the real world anyway! Thanks!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
Very cruel but I look forward to picking up where you left off. I love these two
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll give you more soon!
Reviewer: isabellarose (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
uh oh...they found the bag with the goodies from the wedding! lol are they gonna watch it or just leave it? pls write more i really like the story so far
Author's Response: Oh, they won't leave it! If you want to know what is on there, check out the outtakes! More posting mid-week! Thanks!
Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
Wonderful chapter addition as always. Cannot wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will have more for you soon!
Reviewer: crazyone (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
This was great I cant wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! More coming on Wednesday or Thursday!
Reviewer: RI40 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
I LIKE KATE.
YEAH EVERYTHING OK WITH EDWARD. HE JUST FORGOT TO CALL, HAPPENS TO ANYBODY.
CAN'T BELIEVE YOU STOPPED THERE. DVD OF THE WEDDING CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHATS ON IT.
Author's Response: Thanks, doll! I am glad that you liked it! The actual wedding is in my outtakes if you want to see it!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
LOL! That's mean. Ok ok, you are really good about updates so I'm sure we won't be in limbo for too long but yes, this was another fantastic chapter. Love that Bella was only crying because she thought Edward was going home to his apt rather than to hers. Kudos for giving Renea credit for at least trying. We all know she does love Bella beyond belief but isn't capable of being Suzie homemaker/Betty Crocker. It's ok. :) This whole love at first meeting with your Edward and Bella just warms the heart and soul. Love this!!*hugs*
Joan
Author's Response: Thanks Joan! They really are making it work now and it will continue to get better. I promise another chapter will be up soon but we are nearing the end.
Reviewer: adraves (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
AHHHH, there is no next. Where is the rest of the story. I had looked only for completed stories, so I am confused. I have loved reading this story, I would have loved it even if they were not twilight characters it is that good. Please let me know when you will be posting the final chapters of this story!!!
Author's Response: I post every Thursday and there are only a few chapters left so I won't drag it out too long. Based upon what I have already written and what I have in mind, we are looking at around 40 chapters and an epilogue. I am really glad that you like it! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: charlieD (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
You are with out doubt an evil woman. The wait for the next chapter will kill me, ok maybe not just dont hold back and get the next chapter out already.
waiting
charlie
Author's Response: Charlie, as soon as my beta returns it to me, I will post it. I promise. If you want a preview, check out the outtakes! Thanks!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 33: Coming Home
Duhn duhn daah! The wedding DVD!!
Author's Response: It sure is the wedding video! Coming soon, they see the wedding! Thanks.
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