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Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Tragedy Bella POV Haiti Compilation

ok so although i enjoyed the glimpse of Bella prior to Lost Cause, this chapter helped confuse me more...I've been confused about Bella's age from how she thinks she's in her 30's but looking like a 17....so i dont know which one to think is the truth?hmmm...hopefully another real chapter of Lost Cause will be up and slowly mysteries will be solved.

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Education - Tanya POV

I liked this one! It is good to see Tanya as being gracious about Bella and more than understanding about mating. :)

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Education - Tanya POV

Oh! I'm really anxious to read Edward's reaction to Bella's e-mail! =)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  I hope you liked the email response.

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Education - Tanya POV

Thanks for the shout-out, hon!  I enjoyed this chapter; I just really love Tanya's voice in this.  You conveyed both her vulnerability and her innate confidence without sacrificing any of the main story.  Very nice work.  I especially liked her line about "we are what we are."  Something Edward doesn't like to accept.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Strider.  I would like to think that after almost 1000 years, she has at least somewhat embraced her fate.  She such an interesting character...yes, she flirts and is fairly promiscuous...but there's gotta be so much more to her.

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Persuasion - RPOV

Great chapter, hon!  I'm enjoying all your alternate POVs; they really add some depth the story.  I didn't think Rosalie came off as too bitchy; she came off as an angry person who is worried about her family.  She comes off as a person you'd really want to have on your side. 

Yes, I think Jesus and Dumbledore would like this chapter very much...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I tried to convey that she isn't all bad.  SHe's just angry and worried, like you said.  I mean, sure she has a selfish way of handling things but that's just her.

I wouldn't want her against me!

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