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Reviewer: JD Thorn (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2012 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow, that was one of the coolest, smartest, most insightful things I've ever read in regards to the way a man's mind works.

Reviewer: renesmeebellward (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was the sweetest thing ever i whish i had that with someone thanks for writing it

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was really great!!

Are you going to turn this into a full length story?

Excellent job!

Reviewer: moewerts (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

luv'd it

Reviewer: Angel Wings 113 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

*fans self* is it hot in here or is it just this story. don't mind if I go take a cold shower now.....

Reviewer: jcb (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

oooh...steamy. loved it.

Reviewer: evildoer (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

"Fuckity fuckity shit. The ‘thin cotton’ of my bra, wasn’t actually my bra at all – it was my thin t-shirt, which meant that I was totally head lighting my ex-boyfriend’s father, who realized that my raised temperature and blush was because I was a bitch in heat, as horny as a horndog on fucking horn pills."

This part made me LOL! love the story. :)

Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it

Reviewer: feebee70 (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

this is great! i think you meant to give it an NC from your note, but it somehow got a 'G', you may want to fix it.

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

awkward turtle for the win, i've never met anyone else who uses that before this! excellent work!

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