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Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Muse
Wow-getting hotter in this one! Love that Edward is a cad but he is inspired by Bella.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Muse
Great chapter. I like your Edward. He does what he wants and won't apologise for being himself. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Muse
This was a great chapter. I really like this story so far; its unique. I think there's a lot more to Edward than meets the eye,blackened or otherwise. You've done a good job of capturing the "artist" in him I think. Creative people are intense. Great job.
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Muse
I love the passion and intensity of what is brewing between the two of them. As for some of Edward's actions...he's twenty two, beautiful, an artist and a man. Goes without saying he might act first, think later. I think he is torn now between Bella as his muse and Bella as a real flesh and blood woman..who was pleasuring herself before he came in to paint her which of course has him wound tightly and ready to explode, as evidenced by the kiss. This is really getting good...great character development and sexual tension between the two.
Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Strike a Pose
This story is very intriguing. Oh man, another one for vast list of obsessions.
This Bella is an easy one to relate to. I can see myself and a lot of people thinking the same thoughts and going through the same actions as her.
I like this Edward, but I don't know if I trust him ... he's too smooth in a quiet, unobstrusive sort of way. It's like he says just enough to feed an innocent curiosity in order to get exactly what he wanted all along. I don't know whether to read his politeness and his hesitancy as an act he puts on to make it seem like the other person had the idea and has the power. But then again Jess didn't play into his charms, unless she's lying. The fact that he asked Jess if she would pose nude and that he allowed her to give him an handjob definitely don't weigh in his favor either though.
I'm looking forward to the next update and what transpires during their next session.
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Strike a Pose
damn
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Subject Matter
great start
please tell me she is 18 in this
Author's Response: She is 17, but I put it at the start of the school year so her birthday is right around the corner LOL. I met my husband three weeks from my 18th birthday when he was 22. :D
Reviewer: farkle (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Strike a Pose
silly bella, of course the artist is trying to get your clothes off and have sex with you! Artists aren't monks, y'know! Edward has found a great way to get cheap models, charming the girls. Very funny.
Reviewer: CandraJade (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Strike a Pose
I so hope that what Jessica said isn't true. At least the thing with the hand job. I'd hate it if Edward was just a pervert who used his job to get sexual favours from teenage girls.
I could get over it if Edward really asked Jessica to pose nude, too. He's an artist after all and painting nude people is his job. But I'd like to think that there is something special about Bella in his eyes, that she is the only muse he has ever had sexual thoughts about.
When Edward went outside for his cigarette break I got the impression that he was fighting against the growing attraction towards Bella. That doesn't fit to the story Jessica told.
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Strike a Pose
Interesting twist. So Edward can charm the girls into taking their clothes off. Who knew?!? Great chapter.
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Strike a Pose
Oooohhhhh....Edward is going to be in trouble...*giggles*...I wonder what Bella is going to say to him and if she is still going to do the painting. Will she finish the portrait, or will she tell her mother a lame excuse to get out of it?? Hmm...Anyhoo. Love this story and can not wait until you update!!
-lionandthelamblove7
Reviewer: karaiona (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Strike a Pose
awesome storyyy :D
update plz.... naow? yes
thx;]
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Strike a Pose
I'm pretty pissed off that he asked that HO, Jessica, too!! She is just Ewww!i
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Strike a Pose
If Jessica is telling the truth, 5 words: Well, damn. That little fucker!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Strike a Pose
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens the next time Edward comes. Will Bella confront him about it? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Strike a Pose
hormonal teenagers + a player = disaster
Reviewer: Raptured Ignorance (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Strike a Pose
Oh my! I'm captivated. You must update soon!
Reviewer: DDiaz1170 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Strike a Pose
uh.... i just hoe she won't have a fit for painting other girls....
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Strike a Pose
Very interesting. I was upset too when Bella found out that he asked to paint Jessica nude too. I can't wait to see how their next meeting goes.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Strike a Pose
Hmm, I really don't know what to think now. Edward has been nothing but professional with Bella, hasn't tried anything with her - hasn't even tried to kiss her. She should take that into consideration when she confronts him with her newfound knowledge. Maybe Jessica is making things up. She really should talk to Edward first before just assuming everything Jessica said was true.
Reviewer: DjDangerette (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Strike a Pose
oh my goodness! why stop there! please please please continue, and soon!! i'll be waiting...i can't wait for the other side of the story!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Strike a Pose
Well, a little of that lost it's appeal pretty quickly didn't it! Poor Bella! I have a feeling Edward may be in for a bit of a hard time!
Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Strike a Pose
Poor Bella! I would be feeling sick too. I'll bet Jessica is at least embellishing a little. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Subject Matter
Oh, Bella hit it right on the head with the comparison to Eve and the serpent! Naughty, naughty-I want more!
Author's Response: More will be coming soon! Glad you liked it. And yes, Bella did get that very accurate.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Strike a Pose
great chapter! update soon!
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