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Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Breaking the Rules
great chapter! i cant wait for the next one!!!
Author's Response: Awesome! Glad you like. The next is already in the queue for approval.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
LOL Maybe Edward is in for a bit of a rollercoaster ride due to Bella now.
Author's Response: Haha I think the feeling in mutual for these two.
Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Holy Crow.. that was so fucking hottttttttttttttt.. please update ASAP.. great story!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha thanks. I was nervous about this chapter, especially since reviews dropped so much over on ff.net. But hot is good, I like hot. LOL
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Wow, Bella has certainly gotten brave!
Good job on this chapter, and I look forward to the enxt!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: She is certainly starting to find her own way and becoming bolder in a way she never has before. Glad you liked the chapter. The next chapter is already in the queue.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
I hope her parents aren't the nosy types, though it doesn't seem that they are keeping that close of an eye on their daughter, which is preferable.
Author's Response: Renee and Charlie seem pretty hands off to me, which is good for Bella LOL.
Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Holy cockblocking mother! Looking forward to the next!
Author's Response: Yeah, Renee totally is. Although the kids probably shouldn't get into it right before mom gets home. lol
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Well, things are definately getting hotter. I like bold Bella. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I like bold Bella too, and yes, things are beginning to heat up.
Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Muse
I don't like this story at all--I LOVE IT! You have a wonderful style and the sexual tension is killing me!
Paige
Reviewer: ipreferbrunettes (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
The first 4 chapter caught my attention! I'll definitely be back for more.
Saw New Moon when it opened here in Australia on 19th. Loved it, loved it, loved it.....bring on Eclipse!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
I'm loving it. but I still feel like he's using bella... he's kind of bad boy and I don't thing he want to change it.
but I'm in love with this story and can't wait for more
Reviewer: Raptured Ignorance (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
This is so amazing. Please update soon!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
It almost seems as if these two are careening towards disaster! Edward knows better, but can't help himself. Bella knows better, but doesn't care. And things will probably only get more intense. I love where you wrote that Edward was wrong, she's not his muse, she's his siren!
Reviewer: WndrngY (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Strike a Pose
Beautiful and intense. I'm anxious to see where this is going. I'm hoping Edward is misunderstood, but afraid he's a bit of a slime. Eek.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Bella is a naughty little minx!!
Reviewer: Sometimesirun (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Eeeeek thats all I have to say.*trys to calm down*
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Whew, that was close!!! Things are getting hot and heavy with Bella and Edward - I like it. It's just a shame that Renee had to come home. But that Edward, sure is a fast thinker.. hehe
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
I saw Twilight in the theater at 9 and then New Moon at the Premier Midnight Showing. Then went back that night at the 8o'clock showing. Wow... I need to see it a few more times and soon! Awesome! As is the chapter! But I worry that Edward really is a cad. :( I hope not but it does sound as is he has a plan for every naughty bind he's in. I do hope he's really falling for Isabella. Love springs eternal (as well as hope) Great writing! I do mean great!
*hugs*
Joan
Reviewer: ashe7990 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
"He's such a nice man" ::snicker:: Oh, oblivious parents.
I like your "cad" version of Edward. He's refreshing. :) I look forward to the shenanigans these two will get into. Love it!
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Wow, this is a cool story! I love the idea and what you've done with it so far. Can't wait to read the rest! Xoxo
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Somehow I don't think Edward is really nice. I think he's sexy and slightly mysterious and even talented...but not nice...
At least he's honest about it...
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
I'm surprised Bella hasn't brought up her forthcoming birthday since Edward claims 17 is an issue (though his actions betray him)
Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
Love this, it's seriously hot and beautifully written.
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
That was great! all i have for a review. That, and i'm excited for your next chapter
Reviewer: La_Push_Head_Banger (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Breaking the Rules
That was Awsome!! I loved and I can't wait for maore!!!
Reviewer: Raptured Ignorance (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Muse
I love this story so much. When they kissed, I had to get up from my desk for a moment an compose myself before trying to continue reading. It didn't help that it was 1:17 in the morning.
Amazing! Please update soon! <3
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