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Reviews For Caravaggio
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:39 PM · On: The New Guy

I loved everything about this chapter!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: deedeediva08 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 01:01 PM · On: The New Guy

theres no more please write more to this story

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 12:52 PM · On: The New Guy

Awesome work!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 12:41 PM · On: The New Guy

I'm so thrilled for this update!  Thank you! 

I am proud of Tanya for being a friend to Edward and Bella both.  She said some things Bella needed to hear.  

Reviewer: rhochradel (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:26 AM · On: The New Guy

Still a faithful reader here.  :) This chapter was very good. Sometimes it takes time to get things just right.

Reviewer: prat43ec (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:22 AM · On: The New Guy

Please, this time, update soon!

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 11:13 AM · On: The New Guy

Yes, I haven't given up on this story, as a matter of fact, just this morning I was reading something else and thought about Caravaggio, wondering when we would ever get an update. Well now, knowing that you've written this also from Edward's POV I can only ask that you considering posting that one as an outtake, please.

Bella is so conflicted about her feelings regarding Edward, but really, I just wish she could get beyond the hurt and just forgive him and try again for that connection between them. As Tanya basically said, we all make mistakes and must learn to have empathy for those who do unto us. Even though Bella claims to have forgiven him, I'm not so sure she really has. I know it's much harder to forget than to forgive and that is the problem. It's very plain to see they are both still so miserable without each other, which speaks for the depth of their feelings for one another.

  Tanya is a good friend to him and I think as time goes on that she and Bella will also form a bond, unless Bella does something to hurt her Edward.

Thank you for not injecting Jacob in the story as another option for Bella, I just wouldn't be able to stand that. Jacob annoys the hell out of me for some reason. I guess because he's always trying to insinuate himself between her and Edward. (inTwilight, not here, yet).

I loved that this was a nice long chapter and hope we get another one soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:39 AM · On: The New Guy

tanya is a wise person i hope bella really thinks about what she said

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:35 AM · On: The New Guy

Wow....she's not letting go. It would be very hard to forgive Edward....I don't know if I could do it. But I so want these two back together and in love. But Edward seems like such a cad.....so idk.....

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:27 AM · On: The New Guy

OMG! So happy to see a new chapter!!!!!! I love this story! Can't wait for more. Hopefully soon!!!!! :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:20 AM · On: The New Guy

Bella is moving on with her life.  I am actually starting to feel badly for Edward.  I don't want him to be intimate with anybody else.  I like him wallowing.  But I do feel badly for him.  He realizes what he lost.  He knows it was his fault.  He sees her more clearly now than ever before.  It will be interesting how his painting girls at Bella's school will go over.  I am so addicted to this story!

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 10:13 AM · On: The New Guy

so glad for the update! i'm rally happy you brought in jacob, especially as a harmless junior. and i think it's important that bella did this modeling. can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:56 AM · On: The New Guy

yay,my first gold medal!i know,you didn't mention what kind it is,but if it is my choice...seriously,i had thought you had given up on this story.sometimes people do,even on good ones.so i was very pleased to see this update.i think i am like a leech;can't let go of a good thing.only i have no interest in blood!

Reviewer: LupeGold (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:51 AM · On: The New Guy

Ah, so happy to see an update :) Can't wait for the next one... it's a tough one eh? I'd like to believe that if I was in Bella's situation that I'd just kick Edward to the curb and move on with my life, but the truth is that i'm not confident that i would do that.... hmmm...

Reviewer: trillian (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:50 AM · On: The New Guy

just to let u know i am still reading and was really glad to see an update

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:28 AM · On: The New Guy

I am STILL crying over this!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 09:06 AM · On: The New Guy

An AWESOME update!! Keep it comin'!! *hugs*

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Moving On

I like that Bella is moving on.  She is so much stronger than Edward ever gave her credit for. 

They had a really good conversation.  Edward cleared up some things for Bella but I do agree with Bella - there will never be a good reason/explanation for what he did. 

So curious why the Duke is obsessed with Bella.  Oh and I still think very bad things need to happen to Heidi!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 11:14 AM · On: Confrontation

I am glad that Bella talked to Alice and Edward.  She got so much more information from them about Edward and Heidi's past.  Somehow, during this chapter, I hate Heidi more and actuallly felt bad for Edward.  He really has had a crappy life. 

On top of everything else, she finds out that her parents are getting a divorce.  Bella really has had a hard day.

 

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Moving On

Well are they going to get back together or what??? Nice, different story. Kinda refreshing to see Edward as a "cad". He's too gooey perfect in all the other stories, nice change! Thanks!

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Moving On

The plot thickens now i believe.  WOW...I have read this fic from yester today and didn't read anything else.  I know that you have been experiencing a lot of stuff in real life, but this story needs to be finished.  It is truly wonderful and Bella needs to be with Edward and I hope this Duke guy is not going to do anything to Bella.  THANKS FOR TWO DAYS OF FUCK AWESOME READING.  Sherri

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Thnks fr th Mmrs

HE IS A FUCKING JERKOFF.  That is all that I have to say.  MEN ARE FUCKING PIGS.  it is certainly one thing if he were to sleep with someone else, but this was their first "date" as it were and he was so very thoughtful to her the entire evening and just like a man, thought with his dick instead of his head.  I don't think that I could forgive me for what he did.  He said that he can't get Bella out of his head, but he sure did that tonight, didn't he.  FUCK HIM!!!!!!  Sorry for the rant, but he deserves it.  THANKS FOR THE STOMACH CHURNING READING.  It did the trick.  Sherri

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 11

How cool would it be to have someone like our EDWARD paint our body.  YUMMY is all I can say.  I have this story saved for some time but certainly glad I am reading it now.  I LOVE IT.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sherri

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 8

that was just a beautiful chapter.  We know that Edward didn't just stand Bella and and had a very justifiable readon for not calling.  I am glad that she chose to give him her virginity.  He didn't pressure her or anything, it just was meant to be.  I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR, BUT I HAVE THAT IT WILL HAVE A HAPPY ENDING.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRTING.  Sher

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Experimentation

Now is when the fun begins.  He got a taste and she got a taste and now they wont' be able to stop.  I know how that feels when  you really want someone.  I cannot wait to read on.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sherri

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