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Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Revelations
Love this story!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Revelations
There's definitely more than meets the eye here. Wonder if Bella could walk away- I don't think so, even if she wanted to. I don't get the feeling Edward could really walk away at this point either...
Reviewer: DjDangerette (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Revelations
I like meany Edward. He's just...hotter when hes curt, or mad, or angsty. All together = SEXY EDWARD
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Revelations
Wow, edward's...insecure, maybe? I like bella's conver sation with angela, she's a good, insightful character. can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Revelations
great chapter! i cant wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: wendyms (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Revelations
More More More..
Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Revelations
thanks for the update
Reviewer: michangelina (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Revelations
Fucking HOTTTTTT!! Great chapter.. Loving this.. please continue..
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Revelations
ANother great chapter.
Achilles
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Revelations
Good update. When's the next coming? (pun intended)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Revelations
I knew that there was more to the story of Edward! I can't wait to see how this plays out, is Bella mature enough to handle things?
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Revelations
loved it
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Revelations
oh yes, there will be tears.......lots of them......
Reviewer: AllorNothingKR (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Revelations
Fabulous! As always!
Reviewer: milehi767 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 8
just want to say how very much I enjoyed your story...thank you for writing it.
Linda
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
MY GOD I NEED A FREAKING MINUTE HERE!!!!!!! *fanning self* *running to bathroom and slamming door*.............................................................*fifteen minutes later* Okay I'm back. MY GAWD WOMAN THAT WAS FUCKTASTIC!!!!! I can't tell you enough how much I loved this chapter. One I want to tell Alice her timing really really sucks. That would have been so erotic, but Bella and Edward in her bedroom that was even better. What a way to lose your virginity. FUCKING LUCKY GIRL!!!!!!! You wrote that fantastically. Honestly I think that is the best chapter you have written so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapter YOU HAVE NO IDEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! For your author notes to me age isn't a big deal my man is 14 years older than me and I have to say that the sex is fantastic. Gets better with age and damn it why isn't he around after reading this chapter. Bwhahahahahahhahaha. You are now one of my favorite authors, sorry it took so long to read this and now I'm glad I'm caught up. *tapping fingers on desk looking at watch* WHERE THE HELL IS THE UPDATE!?!?!?!?!?!? LMMFAO Only kidding I'll wait. hehehehehehe
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Experimentation
OMFG that was the sexiest thing. Gawd that was hawt. DAMN IT I'M ALL WORKED UP!!!!! *THUD* That was so damn erotic and you did a wonderful job capturing that. I felt like I was right there. Then him painting her in the nude again with him nude also. FUCKHAWT!!!!!! Okay off to the next chapter before I fucking explode.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 11:46 AM · On: The Green Monster
Well you continute to amaze me with this story. I loved the unveiling of her painting. I'm glad that Edward was there and Bella was just a little jealous that he was there with Tanya. Well I can't wait for Edward to realize that Bella is there at the bar and how he reacts to Jessica. Anyway I'm off to the next chapter. Great work hun.
Reviewer: kels16 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 8
I love this story, I am dying for the next update! (Hopefully it's soon, *wink*wink).
Reviewer: jnr1230 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 8
Wow...great story! I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow, that was good. I like that Edward said he'd call bella next time something came up. I liked this chapter a lot and can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great chapter! I like that Bella does stand up for herself by asking Edward what she wants and needs to know!
I am not sure if I completely believe his reason for not being at her house on Tuesday. I just wonder .....
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hey, when you love someone that deeply....age doesn't matter....unless it's a really unexcusable one....like....15 and 23...now that I can understand. But I think it's sweet that you found your husband at a young age. Cute. I mean, you love each other so what are you supposed to do?? hehe. Loved the chapter and can not wait until you udate!!
-lionandthelamblove7
Reviewer: angelcullen (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 8
I absolutely love this story!Even though the art thing has been done before,this one is very unique and I fucking can't wait for more,thank you for writing.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Last Session
Okay I lied I had to get one more chapter in before my christmas work party. Told you I was a gluten for punishment. I'm so glad that I read this chapter. WOMAN WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME!!!!!!!!! DAMN IT ALL TO HELL!!!!!! I'M SO FUCKING WORKED UP IT ISN'T FUNNY!!! FUCKING HELL FOR RENEE TO COME HOME EARLY GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That really was an AMAZING chapter. I loved every moment of it. Edward I'll help you with your blue balls. Anyway great work and now I'm now off to my office christmas party all fucking worked up THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!! BUT I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!!! I can't wait until later to read the rest. Also I'm glad I'm cracking you up that is my job in life to crack people up. Okay I'm really going now. Later!!!!!! Damn it is hot in here!!! I wish I could go outside to cool off but I'm in Florida and it is fucking hot outside. Okay I'm really off now. Bye
Penny
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