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Reviews For Caravaggio
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Paradise Lost

I am so very torn.  I can't bring myself to abandon this story as the writing is ridiciously good for fanfiction (or even published work for that matter) but I can't imagine a satisfying resolution either.  How could I ever support her taking him back after his actions, especially consisting the timing and circumstances...

Reviewer: ELF (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2010 12:33 AM · On: Paradise Lost

i really didnt know how you was gonna pull this chapter off after what edward did, but everything was perfect i love angela shes such i good friend and of course the gossip at school from jessica she needs a sock shoved in her mouth. im glad edward owned up to what he did and didnt hide away from it, the conversation was just right and bella did the right thing. nice touch bringing felix in. looking forward to next chapter

Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Paradise Lost

want more, and edward have to say sorry in better way...cant wait

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Paradise Lost

I really loved how you wrote all of Bella's emotions!  She's pissed and hurt, but she has pride and is pissed that she feels the way she does.  It's perfect and confused-just like it would be in life.  I still can't wait to see how Edward is going to get himself back in Bella's life.  It's one thing to find out your "boyfriend" was with someone else.  It's another thing all together to have that visual with you for the rest of your life!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Paradise Lost

great chapter! i cant wait for the next update! update soon!

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Paradise Lost

Way to go, Bella! I'm glad you didn't put up with Edward's crap.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Thnks fr th Mmrs

Sadly, I saw that one coming. But I wonder where Renee has been?

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Sleeping Siren

Nice, as always.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm glad E & B are getting to the next stages! I kinda want Bella's parents to find out about them, just to see what happens.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:40 PM · On: No Choice

I actually thought this chapter was kind of nice, even if it was transitional. I'm glad Bella had her little outburst.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Paradise Lost

I really wanted Bella to kick Edward in the nuts. But I can't wait for the next part.

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Revelations

Bella is so cute.

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Paradise Lost

Excellent chapter the interaction between them was perfect for the situation, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Paradise Lost

Oh how my heart aches for Bella. I can't imagine what would have made him do such a stupid, selfish thing that night after the way he was with her during the art show and the walk to the party. He really seemed to care for/love her very much. I'm dying to find out just what really went on in that bathroom and why. I don't blame her for standing up to him the way she did. He acted like a prick! But a part of me still loves him and know he's really messed up somehow and I want to give him a big hug, that is after I smack him upside the head!! LOL. Hope the angst doesn't last too long. ;-)

Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 8

Awesome writing.

Reviewer: lonewolfskid (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Paradise Lost

I think it's safe to say that he made a mistake.  The thing is, I think everyone has done something in the past that they knew, every step of the way, was a douchey move.  Probably not this, but hey, something.  This is fiction.  The characters are not actual people.  But you can see them as such.  It's so easy to want them to do the 'good' thing, the right thing.  Honestly, people do shady things and they make horrific mistakes and that's life.  It's complicated and raw and super sucks alot of the time.  I appreicate the real.  Edward is a dillhole, but he's a dillhole that I feel sorry for.  Not nearly to the degree that I feel it for Bella, but hey.  Good stuff.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Paradise Lost

ALL I CAN SAY IS ANY WOMAN WHO TAKES A GUY BACK AFTER HE CHEATED ON HER IS A STUPID FOOL. SORRY BUT THAT IS HOW I FEEL.

I AM SO TEAM EDWARD BUT NOT CHEATWARD. THIS STORY IS KILLING ME, BUT IT IS SO WELL WRITTEN. I HOPE HE WALKS IN AND FINDS HER SCREWING FELIX. I GUESS ANOTHER GOOD PUNISHMENT WOULD BE HER BECOMING SOMEONE ELSES MUSE AND HE HAS TO SEE THE NAKED PICTURES OF ART.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Paradise Lost

Great chapter! Well, at least he has the decency to seem ashamed of his actions. If Bella is going to forgive him, he will have to majorly clean up his act. The question is, can he? Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: janna479 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Paradise Lost

EP is amazing, i'm caught up with the chapters and I love it

this chapter was really good, the emotions were so raw and as much as I hate angst these chapters were written very well, I have yet to be disappointed when I read this story, it breaks my heart a little, but leaves me hoping that better will come

Reviewer: Leah_Clearwater (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Paradise Lost

That was awesome. I'm pretty pumped about the next chapter!

Reviewer: mystic (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Thnks fr th Mmrs

Very sexy story.  Have no idea where you are going from here.  Can't imagine they can reconcile - so it will be sad.  But I'm sure you will turn it around some how.  The sex was really good in this story.  Please update soon.  Can't wait to read what's next.

Reviewer: teamedward77 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Subject Matter

i love it!!! u left me wanting more!!! lol wen's  the next urgin to update???? hehe

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Thnks fr th Mmrs

Oh wholly hell...really...did we really have to go there?  I know, I know...we did, but to be honest...it physically pained me...really.  maybe I'm PMSing or something, ut I'm truly upset.

Excellent chapter...cant wait for the next update

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Sleeping Siren

enjoyed seeing the inner workings of this man and his art

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 11

a date...ut the big question is...what the hell is Renee up to?  Please don't let it e E...I don't think I could take that:)

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