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Reviewer: FrankieCullen18 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 02:45 PM · On: The New Guy
I love this story, i'm new but i'm glad i've caught up!! i can't wait for the next chaper anyway x
Reviewer: rhiannal (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 04:07 PM · On: The New Guy
it's like an addiction... i keep looking for more!
Reviewer: rhiannal (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2012 02:01 PM · On: The New Guy
still reading and desperately waiting on more... What a beautifully written original storyline! Please please give us addicts more
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 12:33 PM · On: The New Guy
I just caught up to present in your story. I think you do an amazing job of keeping it real. The characters' reactions are much more real than many stories I've read. I find, also, that I really can't predict where it's headed. Thanks for your creativity!
Reviewer: lovebug_1982 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2011 12:53 PM · On: The New Guy
How does Bella feel? What will she do when she figures out how she feels? Please Please up date soon. I have been waiting for over a year. I really don't want to ditch this story.
Reviewer: Lil Krocks (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 11:01 AM · On: The New Guy
Hello,
You're writhing such a wonderful story. I spent the two last hours reading it and I'm dying to know the rest of it .... Are you planning on posting a new chapter any time soon ?
Thanks for this story,
Reviewer: vfy (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 09:03 PM · On: The New Guy
Great chapter! I can see how this would be a challenge. I am still holding out for some way that Edward can redeem himself, but I am sure your plan it better than anything I can come up with. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: vampiremerlot0609 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 10:32 PM · On: Subject Matter
Please tell me that you are still planning on finishing this story. It's so good, and it has me so interested. It really sucks when great authors abandon stories but don't let the readers know. Please update/finish!
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 12:39 AM · On: The New Guy
NOOOOOO!!!!!! PLEASE FINISH this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's 2:30 in the morning and I am dying for more!!!!!!!!!
sigh O_O
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 11:46 PM · On: Confrontation
WOW! WOW! WOW!!!!! What an amazing chapter!!!!! BRAVO to BELLA for realizing her worth and standing up to Edward! He dicked her and no matter what, that's NEVER okay!! KUDOS to you for writing the story that way and not allowing her to roll over and fall into his arms! I love how this gives such a RAW depiction of real issues. I'm hurting for them both, but I am standing up shouting (like Julia Roberts in Pretty Woman) bc Bella chose her dignity over a dude!!!! WOO WOO!!!!
(still love Edward tho) ;)
Reviewer: Desi123 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2011 04:54 AM · On: The New Guy
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO WRITE A NEW CHAPTER? I'VE BEEN VERY PATIENT. I DESERVE A NEW CHAPTER. PLEASE UPDATE SOON I'M GOING OUT OF MY MIND. PLEASE
Reviewer: MonCherie (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2010 05:37 PM · On: The New Guy
I just now got caught up on all of this I had been off here for a while but I cant wait till the new post. I hope Edward is sincere it seems like it and I hope maybe bella can forgive him only time will tell Great story!!! ;)
Reviewer: Desi123 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 11:32 AM · On: The New Guy
When are you going to have another chapter up? It's been forever. ;-(
Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 05:53 PM · On: The New Guy
Hope to see another of your master piece chapters soon.
Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Moving On
Snap!
Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Q & A
I would have done the same
Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Thnks fr th Mmrs
Poor Bella
Reviewer: twilightamy (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 10:30 AM · On: The New Guy
love this story
Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Experimentation
Great ending
Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 12:37 PM · On: The Green Monster
So much tension. Good & bad thing.
Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Breaking the Rules
intense
Reviewer: jeanieinabottle (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Experimentation
"I only love two things,painting and having sex". Oh, no, Bella, run as fast and as far as you can. This can't end well!
Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 11:28 PM · On: The New Guy
I am loving this story. It is captivating, passionate, and well-written. Poor Bella. She can't seem to move on, either with or without Edward. They are miserable without each other, but after what he did it's hard to imagine how he can redeem himself in Bella's eyes. I can't wait to see how things turn out. Tanya is an interesting and likable character, and Heidi is horrible. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Strike a Pose
yeah bella he was appreciative.....he sure appreciated seein you naked ass....lmao
Reviewer: joythecat (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 04:20 PM · On: The New Guy
Great as always! An awkward conversation for Tanya and Bella to be having right away, but I guess when you're upset the verbal filter doesn't work as well...true for me, at least! :) Anyway, I've liked the story a lot so far, and I'm looking forward to the rest!
PS. Edward's such a jerk for telling the bouncer she's under 21! As if she'd want to talk to him more after he did something totally controlling and obnoxious. The boy sure does know how to get out of someone's good graces!
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