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Reviewer: partygirl209 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
oh man!! i wanted to read Bella going to Italy!!
Reviewer: kbaby (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
Please finish soon, Loved it!!!!!!!!1
Reviewer: nolie02 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
Great story so far. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
Ooooooooh! I looove the way that Edward sees her first and then it brings bellas pov. Pleaseee keep writing!
Reviewer: angelmastr7 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
This is awesome and very promising... I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Whispering_Willow (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
Wow this very interesting, I would like to say that this is a very nice story and I look forward to seeing more chapters soon.
Please update soon =)
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
how many more chapters left till we find out the victoria bit?
I can't wait!!
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
how many more chapters left till we find out the victoria bit?
I can't wait!!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
fine but hurry up the background stories and get to bella vampire and bella and edward and volturi please
LOVE STORY WRITE FAST YOUR AWESOME
Reviewer: 3nyah30 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
This story is different and I enjoy that. It was great reading both perspectives. Sadly Jacob always gets screwed. I like him, but feel sad for him. I understand this is needed, he is one of the best supporting characters that I know. Keep up the good work. Take your time. Life is important and so is good writing.
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
Oh, I really like Jacob but there's not likely to be any happiness for him in this story. I can't wait to see how Bella gets changed, and how her relationship with Edward develops in Italy. Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 2: Unforgettable Memories
Aww Bella, how could he do that. I love Edward, but in this story I'm team Charlie/Jacob!!! ... so far.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
This was a good chapter! Your tansitions between POVs was nice!
Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
This chapter was excellent, well worth the wait. I know that we will have to wait for the updates, but I'm ready. The story had such a promising beginning and the update has revived my interest in your story. Please update as soon as you can...don't abandon this great story!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 2: Unforgettable Memories
how sad poor bella
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue
great chapter!
Reviewer: TWIreland (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
This story as well as "Fallen Star" is one of the best Fanfics on this site. Its too bad I have to study for the Junior Certificate or else I would try one myself but this idea is genius.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: t-reader (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
I'm enjoying your story. The fist chapter was amazing and I'm anxious for to see how Bella ends up a vampire!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
Poor Jacob D=.
Reviewer: Anazarel (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
*sigh* poor Jacob... He doesn't deserve it... I know, I know: Bella must be with Edward. They belong together, and I want it. It's just... The poor guy doesn't deserve it. (well, life isn't fair, right?)
Amazing fic! I'm expecting their meeting...
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
WOW!!!
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
Poor Bella and poor Jake. It's so sad.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
Great update. I have missed this story. I am eager to read how it develops!!!
Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
You're off to a good start with this story. But no more "background" please ... let's have some action!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 5: Breaking Away
cant wait to see what goes on in this story!!!
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