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Reviewer: Leilal (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 08:33 PM · On: In the Dog House

Just want to say that I really love your Stephanie Plum fics. I don't care for this Edward at all, I wish Bella would grow a pair and when master comes home greet him in full rangewear complete with stungun, pepper spray and baretta and lets him have a time out. Shame Bella was a successful,intelligent,independant woman; now she hides and is totally dependant. These two have a load of issues. Oh well, I will stick with it and see where it goes. Mahalo=TY Aloha,Leilani

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 10:56 AM · On: In the Dog House

This was awful way to learn.  but she will not do it again.  I 've read your story and waiting for a new chapter.  I hope you will finish the story.  it good and I will like to have a closer.  Please finish the story.  and I'm going to read all your off chapters their awesome and funny in a way.  Being his slave is what she wants. It make her Happy.  and that all what Edward wants and he love her.  in his own Dom.  way.  awesome. Smiles Leona

Reviewer: Sprat (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 12:50 AM · On: In the Dog House

I love it and can't get enough of this story!  I find myself day dreaming about Bella's servitude.  Many Thanks.

Reviewer: Carlisle Cullen 19 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 10:33 AM · On: In the Dog House

Oh das ist heftig

ein glück hat Bella gelernt und ist niewieder böse zu ihren Meister

schönes Kaptiel

Reviewer: deenerneener (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 12:19 PM · On: In the Dog House

I'm so glad I found this prequel outtake!  I'd wondered what Bella's canine experience had been like, and exactly how Edward had treated her. 

I can't even begin to imagine the boredom of being chained all day, confined to a small territory, with no books, music, television, or anything else to offer distraction.  And to have to endure that for an entire week!

Even as much as I enjoy this series, I can't really understand Bella's mindset to want to be a 24/7 slave.  Considering it as a serious matter, it really makes me re-think some of my preconceptions about life, and how I define myself to myself (and to others).

Great job!

Reviewer: deesirius (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 12:18 AM · On: In the Dog House

Woow now that was degrading!!!!!!!!!! Guess she really did learn her lesson!

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 07:06 PM · On: In the Dog House

He was an ass to do that to her. Lord I'd never have it in me to actually play along with it in order to get him to get out of his "funk". I'll be honest and admit I've secretly wondered if I could be "submissive" enough to ever be a sub...but there are just some things I'd never do over my dead body. My pride is way too high for that. I'm so headstrong I'd probably still be in that damn "dog house". Edward can be such an ass. Great story though :)

Reviewer: tightlybound (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 02:03 PM · On: In the Dog House

Well yes that was a lesson ..Iguess I even learned that a slave is treated better than a dog. And to not be able to touch your face or wash. Ohmyno Ohmyno ohmynooooo Very good, thanks .. good laugh also

Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 01:40 AM · On: In the Dog House

Your outtakes are as good as your story  I find them very entertaining

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 09:37 AM · On: In the Dog House

Totally woofworthy!!

Reviewer: Faith Michaels (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 10:27 AM · On: In the Dog House

Great story and lesson. Knowing this lifestyle as I do, I understand this lesson very well. Hope to see more...

Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 05:12 AM · On: In the Dog House

I am so conflicted when I finish reading your chapters..there is such a weird comfort between these two...its' hard to believe that you can see so much love when she just lived like a dog for a week...I guess it really is true that discipline when created and implemented with love as its intention is beautiful...but not when anger and control are involved...not so much...very important distinction...surrenduring to love is easy...but not to control...weird weird weird...but I love being stretched to look at these things...you are driving me crazing...but I lvoe it!!!!!

Reviewer: fleur50 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:10 PM · On: In the Dog House

euh...

Reviewer: loverlover (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:49 AM · On: In the Dog House

you serously are good at this

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 02:52 AM · On: In the Dog House

Holy Crow I could never do that!  Man you made me look at a dog in a whole new light...

Reviewer: Darker Shade of Black (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 04:54 PM · On: In the Dog House

This was a very hard lesson  indeed !

I Know some slaves accept to be their Master's canine for role - playing and punishment, but reading it this clear makes me shiver ...whoaaa !!

Vety well written, very descriptive and to the point,  I felt really the heavy atmosphere and how the days stretched and stretched, almost cried with her at the start.

Painful and enlighting in the same time, and heavy in the positive sense.

There's a lesson to be learned from this not only for subs, but all of us humans who take things for granted !!

 

Thank you a very GOOD work, and mostly I like your writing style.

How you make the whole idea blossom slowly.

 

Hats off !!

 

Reviewer: rosewed (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 06:31 PM · On: In the Dog House

I really hated reading this in fact i had to skim towards the end but it was well written and true to her character. And I am conceeding the fact that if any story makes you feel something be it hope or in this case true indignity and shame that someone would behave that way and be deluded that the partnership was fair or the punishment was to benefit them. It was well written in that sense.

Reviewer: citoyenmasen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 10:35 AM · On: In the Dog House

it's weird sorry i don't know what else to say . I've read some bsm stories but this is .... weird

Reviewer: jennifer575 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 07:14 AM · On: In the Dog House

while i enjoy the story and find it interesting i can not help but want to pick up a dull blunt object and bash edwards head in until his brains spill out on the f****** floor.  but that being said great story.  love the detail.

Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 08:09 AM · On: In the Dog House

Wow- that was crazy good!! ..... at least he didn't make her sleep in a crate!!

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 03:07 PM · On: In the Dog House

Your Domward is a smart Master!

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 05:33 AM · On: In the Dog House

Great chapter. I laughed at Bella when she finally realized what Edward was trying to teach her and she started REALLY acting like a dog. I can just imagine how funny that was to Edward. GREAT JOB!!!! I am really loving your story.

Reviewer: mrf773 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 03:42 AM · On: In the Dog House

i love this outtake would love to see more like it, i have to say your bdsm/slave story is by far the truest i've seen

Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 02:25 PM · On: In the Dog House

Wow... that was quite a punishment. I like how Bella goes through so many emotions with regard to how she feels before, during and after the punishment. It definitely proves how even when little is said, much more is actually thought. It was a very interesting how you created such a creative episode in their relationship. It obviously took a lot of thought on your part to get it right. Great job.

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:27 PM · On: In the Dog House

As with the other part of All of Me I love this. This short story is a wonderful look into the world that you have created and given some would be readers a chance to see if they might like this story.

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