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Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Do you remember?

Wow. That was a sweet but sad story. Very well written and easy to follow. Thank you.

Author's Response:
Good morning, detroitangel ~

Thank you. I was going for the sad and the sweet and I'm glad you found both in there.

Thank you for your kind words about my writing, too. :)

I appreciate your reading and leaving me a note! :)

LJ

Reviewer: pheebs33 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Do you remember?

Amazing story.... I cried like a baby. You really got everyone in character.

Rosalie still wishing to be human and jealous of what Bella has even with the health problems that Bella and Jake now face.

Alice's sorrow that Bella couldn't remember.

I especially felt so sorry for both Jake and Edward. I love Bella with both men. Even though I would have chosen Jake, it was really hard and I could really feel the pain that Bella's loss of memory caused Edward. And Jacob, after all these years still protecting Bella.

Like I said... an amazing story.

Author's Response:
Good afternoon, pheebs33 ~

Thank you so much for thinking my characterization was on. I work hard at that aspect especially in fan fiction. I'm so glad it read well for you.

Thank you for reading and sharing your response with me. :)

LJ

Reviewer: JBC719 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Do you remember?

Oh, it's hard to leave a review for that. I never cry when I read fanfic. Very very well written.

Author's Response:
Good morning, JBC719 ~

Thank you. It was a rough one for folks, I know. Thank you for reading and leaving me a note. I appreciate it. :)

~LJ

Reviewer: kaygdee (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Do you remember?

I lovvvvvveeedddd it! The perfect combination of happy endings and harsh realities!

Author's Response:
Good morning, kaygdee!

Aw, thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it. Happy endings and harsh realities...that's a great summation!

Thank you for reading,

LJ

Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Do you remember?

Definately need the Kleenex after this one. It is beautiful though. I hope in thirty or forty years that will be me and my husband. Thank you for a lovely story.

Author's Response:
Hello again, vampiremom1221~

Well I hope you and your husband will not be dealing with memory loss in that time! But yes, I wanted to show that Jacob Black understood what love really is, in this story. Because I think he'd make a great husband. :0

Thank you so much for reading this story, too, and for your generous rating!

LJ

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Do you remember?

OMG - THIS WAS SWEET TORTURE TO READ!

Author's Response:
Good afternoon, tazz~

Thank you for reading. It was kind of a rough one, wasn't it? I like to think that it portrays Jacob as being a terrific husband. :)

Thanks for taking the time to review!

LJ

Reviewer: dragontess (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Do you remember?

No kidding about the kleenex. But worth it.

Loved the very different take you presented here, and how you wove in Edward's "promise".

And Jacob seems perfect in this (sad) role. And poor Edward..GAH! *sniffles*

And poor Bella, to have had all that and then to lose it by degrees.

Will be checking out your other works....

Author's Response:
Good morning, dragontess~

Thank you for reading and for your kind review. I wanted to portray Jacob as a wonderful husband and hope I succeeded, sad though his role is, here.

I appreciate your comments!

LJ

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Do you remember?

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!
OH EDWARD!!!

Author's Response:
*covering ears* You okay in there?

Yeah... I kind of did that, didn't I?

LJ

Reviewer: kelseasc413 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Do you remember?

Oh my god! That was really well written, but really depressing...especially the part about Edward not existing in her head. Well done.

Author's Response:
Good morning, kelseasc413!

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind remarks about my writing. *smile*

It is a sad story in a lot of ways, yes. The lost Edward-memories have struck many as particularly painful and even harsh on my part. However, I think this is one way it could have gone!

Thank you for the terrific rating! I do appreciate it!

LJ

Reviewer: eyeofthehurricane (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Do you remember?

Suc a beautiful, heartbreaking story. I sobbed. You are such a beautiful writer!! Im currently reading your other story about Jacob imprinting whilst married to Bella and Edwards reappearance, and I cant wait for you to update!!

Author's Response:
Greetings, eyeofthehurricane ~

Thank you so much for your lovely review. I have been humbled by people's response to this story about my human Jacob and his Bella.

Thank you for reading it!

I will be updating the other story just as soon as I've had my coffee. *smile* A decaffeinated update is not a pretty picture...

Thanks again!

LJ

Reviewer: darklotus (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Do you remember?

Poignant and lovely - I enjoyed it very much

Author's Response:
Good afternoon, darklotus ~

I'm glad you enjoyed my story. I have been surprised by the response garnered by it, to be honest.

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to let me know!

LJ

Reviewer: twilighter022 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Do you remember?

... UGHEEPPPPAHHH!!!!!! howw... im speachless sry, just know that i loved it, and right now im bawling my eyes out so i cant form coherent sentances to properly worship your wonderful work,

-twi

Author's Response:
Good evening, twilighter022 ~

Please don't apologize for such an emotional response. My work is hardly worthy of worship *smile* but I'm pleased you were not left unmoved by it.

Thank you for reading and for your review. I appreciate it!

LJ

Reviewer: Tigerlily74 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Do you remember?

You weren't lying about the Kleenex. That is an awful thing to watch happen to someone you love.

Author's Response:
Good morning, Tigerlily74~

It really is. I haven't had this occur in my family, but I have friends who have and it's been heartbreaking.

Thank you so much for reading and taking a moment to respond. :)

LJ

Reviewer: Winterstale (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Do you remember?

So, so utterly sweet and heartfelt. Alice was the most difficult to read for me and brought the tears on. It made perfect sense to me that she would forget Edward but Alice, her best friend and tireless champion, really resonated with loss for me. Good, faithful Jacob still protecting his Bella warmed me towards him more than any other story I've ever read with him as a central character. I've watched family members slowly slip behind the curtain of lost memory and it's heartwrenching. You completely delivered the mixture of helpless frustration and determined optimism to live each day with what your loved one can remember. This story, a reminder that the most important thing is love, is so succinct in communicating it's message. I'm sorry I've just gotten around to reviewing - you know I love a good tear-jerker. Well done!

-w

Author's Response:
Greetings, Winterstale~

Thank you for your observations and kind words. Thank you, too, for seeing Jacob's love as being the centerpiece to this story. I am sorry to hear that you've had to live with this slow stealing away of family members.

Thanks much for your generosity of review and rating. :) I do appreciate it.

LJ

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Do you remember?

TEARJERKER TO THE EXTREME. But I loved it. Gah that is SO sad. But amazing nonetheless.

Author's Response:
Hey, Shelbie Lyn~

Thank you so much for reading this one. I know it's not the "usual" thing to come off my keyboard. :) Glad you liked it, sad though it was. I wanted to show how much Jake loved his wife. :)

Thanks for the review and shiny rating!

LJ

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Do you remember?

That was so cool! I love the Cullens came down for her birthday & how she remembered Carlisle!

Then later how she remembered then visiting on her birthdaY~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response:
Good morning, fleur24~

It was pretty cool that she remembered Carlisle, yes. Glad you liked that.

I wanted her to remember them having come to visit. The memories can be tricky things, but she had a little one, anyway.

Thank you for reading and taking the time to drop me a line!

LJ

Reviewer: belladonna1472 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Do you remember?

Oh my god, I am so not a Team Jacob person, but I clicked on your name and decided to read this one-shot. I'm so glad I did, because it is simply fantastic. Haunting in a good way. Truly, truly excellent. In a sad way, this is what Edward would have wanted - for Bella to be human, to be safe. He said it himself in New Moon or somewhere, that human memories fade.

At times I was reminded of The Notebook, but this was obviously different in many significant ways. I did, however, tear up just like when I watched that movie!

Author's Response:
Good morning, belladonna1472~

Thank you for taking a chance on this one-shot. I'm glad that you find it to be true to what Edward would have wanted (at least to an extent, eh?). Human memories DO fade... I just don't think Edward was prepared for how it would feel to him when confronted with it, you know?

I haven't seen The Notebook, but I have heard from some of my readers that this story reminds them of that movie. I should perhaps watch that.

Thank you for your kind review and for reading. :)

LJ

Reviewer: Mya Ray (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Do you remember?

so sad! I have spent my life working with people with demensia and it never stops breaking my heart to see how much is lost

Author's Response:
Greetings, Mya Ray~

It really is a very sad condition. I'd have to guess that you're an emotionally grounded person, very strong, to work with those who are suffering from dementia as well as their families.

Thank you for reading my little story and taking the time to share your response with me. I have been really overwhelmed with the response to this story that I have received.

LJ

Reviewer: kelly95 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Do you remember?

Aw, this is amazingly sad - it takes me a bit to cry in fanfics, but this had me going! Especially when Bella said that it was like he'd never existed in her mind! My grandfather has alzheimers so i understand :(

Author's Response:
Good morning, kelly95 ~

I am so sorry about your grandfather. It is a really hard thing to see those we love stolen so gradually away, right in front of our eyes, sometimes.

Thank you for reading and sharing your response with me. It has been humbling to "meet" so many whose lives have been touched by someone with Alzheimers. I am sure that your grandfather is loved as unconditionally as Bella is by Jacob.

Thanks again,

LJ

Reviewer: Mhgood (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Do you remember?

Oh, man! So sad, and yet so sweet! This is excellent.

Author's Response:
Good evening, Mhgood ~

Thank you for seeing the sweet with the sad. You are very kind. I appreciate the approbation. :)

Thank you for reading and taking the time to drop me a line. :)

LJ

Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Do you remember?

Wow, that's beautiful. I agree with Edward - I think I'm glad she doesn't remember him. And what a great life she lived with Jake!

Author's Response:
Good evening, tsarcasm~

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. She did have a great life with Jacob. The life Edward wanted her to have, I feel. The sadness was the early memory loss and her loss of her whole life, eh?

But she was still greatly loved. :) I thought that was beautiful.

Thanks for reading and leaving me such a kind review!

LJ

Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Do you remember?

Very well written and very sad. I am glad you ended it on a very happy note though.

Author's Response:
Good morning, Elisabethe~

Thank you for your kind words. :) It is sad, yes, but I believe that in the end, the love is palpable and that's what I was aiming for. I imagine you saw that, too, as you appreciated the ending.

Thanks for reading and the lovely rating!

LJ

Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Do you remember?

Kind of beautiful.

And sad.

But mostly beautiful.

Author's Response:

Good morning, Diana_in_Houston ~

It is kind of beautiful. I am so glad you see that beauty through the pain and sadness of this story.

Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and for the beautiful rating. :)

LJ

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Do you remember?

Beautifully written, thank you for sharing.

Author's Response:
Greetings, dkgors ~

Thank you for reading. :) I'm glad you took the time to let me know.

LJ

Reviewer: Passio_nate (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Do you remember?

I had a sad smile etched to my face the whole time reading this.

Beautiful..

Author's Response:
Greetings, Passio_nate ~

Ah, thank you. A sad smile is kind of my response to it, too, as I read it over. I do find it to be a beautiful story, though it is sadly edged.

Thank you for reading and letting me know how you were affected. Thanks, too, for the rating!

LJ

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