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Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 09:30 AM · On: Decision

That reaction from Edward was so satisfying.  It really hit the spot.  Still loving the story, keep up the great work!  Also if I understand your Author's note correctly, you are keeping the lemons seperate, if that is correct I just wanted you to know that I really appreciate the chance to skip the lemons.  A good lemon is tempting, but I'm better off if I don't read them.  Thanks for giving us the option to read them or not.  :)

Reviewer: KimiD (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Decision

THAT WAS GREAT! really really good EPOV.  i liked it.  you are very discriptive in your writing, KimiD

Reviewer: KimiD (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Confusion

Always love the EPOVs it gives insight into the mind of the writer with how deeply they can delve into the mind of a vampire & more closely the mind of Edward's selfloathing and berating his existance.  Pretty good job needed little more angst. but all in all pretty good.  KimiD

Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Decision

Another excellent outtake. You write Edward's perspective so well!

Reviewer: AubreyRose (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Confusion

Great outtake. I like how you wrote Edward's confusion of having these new feelings for Bella. It was sweet to see him so protective of her.

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Decision

I love that he is so protective and in love w/Bella from the first and that his fascination w/her only grows in his self-imposed absence--much as in canon. This was the best outtake yet! :)

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:02 PM · On: Confusion

This was a good one, too.  I am always a little amused at how Edward has to talk himself into things before he'll make a choice.  You really bring that out here, having him flit through justifications for his feelings before he really understands them, until he lands on a reason to go home and see Bella.  Well done!

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Confusion

I liked this EPOV.  I liked how you played up his lust/care for her as well as his thirst.  I am enjoying seeing all the pieces come together through different characters--it's like a puzzle.  Well done!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and boost to my self-confidence. 

I hope there aren't too many pieces being revealed!  ;)  I'd like to leave a little something to the imagination.

In MS, Edward seems to feel these things long before he understands or even acknowledges them.  I wanted him to at least partially recognize them even if understanding is far off.

Thanks again.

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