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Reviews For Ok Cupid
Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:23 PM · On: The Next Day

What? No explanation? You can do better than that.



Author's Response:

Everything will be explained in the sequel which is posted under my profile as the story She is. Ok Cupid was originally meant to be a one shot that got away from me and turned into a set up for my Jasper story.

 

Please give She Is a read and let me know what you think.

 

Thank you for reading.

 

Rayne.

Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 02:24 AM · On: First Night

Very interesting and nicely written!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I have just submitted the first chapter of the sequel to the validators today.

 

I am enjoying your story An Equal Fate as well. I found it the other day and have a couple mor chapters to catch up on. I love when soneone takes the storyline in a new direction.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 11:39 AM · On: The Next Day

nice

Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:47 PM · On: First Night

Try writing whose POV it is. You have KPOV up until you introduce EPOV. I got confused lol Great chapter!!!! Very HOT!!! Love it! Would like to see this as  a full story or is it a one-shot? I love me some Emmett/Kellan fics! Gorgeous!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your feed back. This is a 2 chapter piece. The second chapeter will hopefully be up soon it is i in the beta process now. I am revising as I type. This is actually a prequel to a multi chapter spin-off that will have Jasper as the main with Nasreen. Though Kira and Emmett will have roles as well as the other Cullens and mystery characters. I will also be giving each couple various one shot out-takes as I come up with them.

 

Thank you Rayne

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:54 AM · On: First Night

nice

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