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Reviewer: Bejohns (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 1, Bella

I found your wonderful story last night and have been unable to put it down and I am sitting with tears still running down my cheeks after reading the epilogue, beautifully written by a talented author much better than your average fan fiction. Thank you.

Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

WOW!! This was a wonderful story but I am sad to see you never wrote any other ff. You have a beautiful way to tell a story and I love that you made it a life journey. I just wish that everyone could find a love like Bella and Edward! TY!!

Reviewer: Betsie (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

Oh my god! I can't even remember having cried so much at the end of a fic. You comPletely blow me! I don't even know what to say. You're story makes me wish for a love story for my own. It's a hard time in my life right now and it is really hard to keep my hopes (I'm not far from your Bella in the early chapters). I long to be love and I really wish I'd get a relationship someday that could be half as good as the one you just describe.

Chapeau ma chère!

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 11, Beauty & The Beast

Alaska in February are they CRAZY! My relatives lived there for over 20 years, loved it most of the time. So much hunting and fishing to do. BUT, the snow was overwhelming, freaking below zero for months and months. February was around -12 degrees on average.

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 6, More Forks, Roses, & Some Dancing

I should be studing for my final but I couldn't resist reading a little more. Loved this chap! The 2nd part of the trip to Forks was amazing getting to know a little bit more about Esme was wonderful. And the Cullen house sounds beautiful and like a place I wouldn't mind going for a visit. I'm happy that Edward was wise enough to help Bella during Renee's coments, sometimes even when people say things with the best of intentions end up hurting someone.

I liked it the first time and still do, the slow process of their relationship 'cause it makes it more real. Of course let's not forget the charged moments they shared when he picked her up and later on the dance floor. The UST is building up. I'm happy that Bella is starting to open up to living fully once again.

Reading your EN I remembered that I still need to do my gift shopping! Wish me luck! 'cause I'll have to do it next Thursday after my finals!

Kisses.R.

Reviewer: lovesurfer (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2011 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 5, Mr. Whitlock, Rose, & Esme

Since FF won't let me write another review for this chapter I'm posting it here!

I had a blast with Mr Whitlock/Jasper and his conversation with Bella regarding hers and Edward's relationship-to-be, it was so obvious that sweet little Alice was behind it. hahahaha

"Things like that don't happen to girls like me. Those things are called fairy tales and we read about them in books and wish for them upon fallen stars. And dream." I really can relate to Bella in this, I have felt like this a couple of times in my life, the last one a few months ago when I realized that what I was wishing for was never going to be real, that his heart was never going to love mine back...well I just can keep wishing and someday I hope the time will come when it finally comes true.

I loved their trip to Forks and meeting Esme, she's such a strong and wise woman, it's really inspiring. I'm trying to remember constantly what she said about building walls to keep the pain and sadness out, but ending keeping the joy out too; so as not to live my life in a forte that doesn't alow me to relly live.

Kisses.R.

Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

I absolutely loved this story and it so true--I am a nurse and have seen people die that confess that their beloved deceased husband visits them everyday then its their time to go with them. But I think that is true love and not everyone finds it during their lifetime. Thats what's sad. Well I love E/B ff they are the best and this one will always be a favorite!!-

Reviewer: cris-p (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 15, Peepholes

I have to say, I was quite angry when I got to the introduction of a TMI. My father-in-law suffered one and hasn't been the same since. After reading more of your story, however, I have to say you handled it about as well as anyone could. I just want to say I'm enjoying the story, and am glad that Edward will come out of it in better shape than I at first feared.

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

Just when I was beginning to wonder if I was going to find any more good stuff out there, I run into your little fic. It is georgeous! You must finish H&HG, like, NOW! This story needs its companion like Bella needs her Edward. Damn it, you made me cry.

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

Geez, it's so hard to type when you're crying. Couldn't we have stopped somewhere good, did you have to go all the way to the grave? And, all the accidents? The emotions are killing me. Anyway, great story! Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: twilover45454 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

today is my birthday and i have to say your story gave me the best present yet. I stayed up all night reading your little gem and I have to say this is one of the best stories I have read to date yet. That is no small task because i have read many to many to admitt. Please add to this as you see fit it truely it a heart stopping piece of work. a true admirer from this day on....

Reviewer: twilover45454 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

today is my birthday and i have to say your story gave me the best present yet. I stayed up all night reading your little gem and I have to say this is one of the best stories I have read to date yet. That is no small task because i have read many to many to admitt. Please add to this as you see fit it truely it a heart stopping piece of work. a true admirer from this day on....

Reviewer: wwprongsdo (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

Definitly cried during the last few chapters, beautiful story.

Reviewer: twilovemom76 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

Needing tissues is right! What a great story! I love that you saw it though & didn't leave it hanging like so many stories do, even if the ending was sad, it was real.

Thank you so much for this.

Reviewer: ccslover22 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

Beautiful ending brought me too tears amazing story ovrerall.?

Reviewer: strawberrydancer (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

The end of this chapter made me cry. Literally. You are a very talented writer!

Reviewer: SUNSHINEDAYDREAM (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

i think i have gone through two boxes of klenexes!!!

Reviewer: babycullen (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2011 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

Award winning! I cried through out this whole story. You should really turn it into a published book. OMG the love you portray in this story is exquisite and the last 5 chapters I have literally been crying my eyeballs out. I envy your talent and can't wait to reread this master piece!

Reviewer: Kvampire_fan (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

fantastic story i cried!!

Reviewer: Kvampire_fan (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

fantastic story, I cried!!

Reviewer: tlips18 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2011 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 10, Walls, Tears, & Words

banana? really? I think you should have consulted with your beta on that... it totally distracted me from your writing...

Reviewer: JAZZPURR (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 11, Beauty & The Beast

At this point in time I just want to walk up to Bella and SMACK HER RIGHT IN THE FACE! What are you doing! You are being soooo stupid! Errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........calm down, this has got to end better.........sigh.......reading on ;)

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

amazing story

Reviewer: junjin (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 2, Edward & Ethan

It's going to kill me to keep reading w/o Edwards pov, but so far so good. So I'll keep on reading.

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"

first and foremost thankyou for the quotes they were fab,than thanks for a lovely story. abk

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