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Reviewer: Soni-Angel (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
I came across this story and really enjoyed it, just sad to note that it was last updated in November 2009, hopefully will see an update in the near future.
Reviewer: Lexi1290 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
I loooove it! Bella the bad ass next chaptr please :)
Reviewer: BellasMommy (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
i really like this (:
i always like stories where bella has a backbone.
you're doing a really good job at writing this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! if you guys are happy then im happy, its my motivation
x
Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
Come on!
I've been on tetherhooks waiting for this chapter... I kept checking to see if you'd updated, searched your story on fanfiction.net to see if you'd posted there... and I finally get it and you leave it there??
Ah, well it was still awesome. Very different take on the "first encounter".. I actually heard myself gasp when Bella said that. How did Edward not bite her? I would...
Oh, and Lauren needs to die. I hope she gets what's coming to her.
I do this thing, where I write my Favourite Quote of The Chapter: and I think Edward has to take this title...
“I was very rude to you the last time we formally conversed, so I need to understand why you felt compelled to defend my honor?”
I. Swooned. Classic Edward... glad he's still the same! ;) Can't wait till the next one... little faster? Please??! *innocent look*
Author's Response: Haha thank you for you very kind review. I'm not actually posting on fanfiction.net but I do read some of the great stories on there. I'm glad you like the Biology scene, I just thought that if Bella was bad she wouldn't take Edward acting like that towards her and I knew when she reacted this would make his bloodthirst worse, so I got her outta there quick before he bit her.
I actually laughed when I wrote that line, I thought it was very Edward but hopefully I don't over-do the formal language. I will try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible, but I am very busy at the moment so i will aim to have it up by sunday. Thank you so much for your support x
Reviewer: justineXcullen (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
Loved this chapter! I was eagerly awaiting a new update so thanks for delivering! LMAO@ Bella dissing Lauren, TOO funny! Cant wait to read more ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I try to update as much as possible but I struggle to find time somtimes x
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
hehehe really well writen and i love that song!!!!
wtm
Author's Response: Thank you for both your kind reviews! I love that song too and I just thought it summed up my version of Bella really well! x
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bye Bye Phoenix
awsomeness!!!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: Katara97 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
I like it so far. =]
Author's Response: Thank you! x
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
OH i love bella in this!!! She's not the typical shy girl...girl has a dick and she will use it!!!! LOVES LOVES LOVES THIS!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yer, I know what you mean, I just thought if Bella is supposed to be this strong, independant girl she should act the part rather than just be such a pussy all the time x
Reviewer: linzilady (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
This is awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! x
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 2- Arguments and Questions
Hah! I wonder if Lauren will plan any kind of revenge lol
Author's Response: Mmhhh interesting idea. Im honestly just making it up as I go along, so I don't even know yet! Thanks for the review! x
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 1- Bye Bye Phoenix
nice
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback, even just the one word of support makes the difference x
Reviewer: destoryourdestiny (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bye Bye Phoenix
Definitely continue! The bad Bella needs to be seen! I'm looking forward to reading about what trouble she stirs up in Forks (and with Edward).
Author's Response: Thank you! I love the bad Bella too!
x
Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bye Bye Phoenix
Continue! Please! I'm hooked already! How is Edward going to handle bad-ass Bella? How will she handle Edward glaring at her because she's his singer thing (assumming that's going to happen)!
Review as soon as you can.... pretty please! XD
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Yes, the Biology scene is sooo happenning. Lets just say that Bad ass Bella doesn't like the schools pretty boy glaring at her. Ill try and get an update up sometime this following week.
Thanks again
Reviewer: justineXcullen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 1- Bye Bye Phoenix
Oooh, i'm liking this so far! I LOVE bad ass Bella! I look forward to reading more of this. Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you for my first review! I was really hoping it would be positive, so you made my day! I'll try and aim at the moment to update every week.
Thanks again! :) ps. I love Bad ass Bella too
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