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Reviewer: KatD812 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 09:35 PM · On: One-Shot

Love it! Would love to see this expanded. Alec fascinates me!

Reviewer: rose angel (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:33 AM · On: One-Shot

you HAVE to carry this on its great really

Reviewer: rose angel (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 07:33 AM · On: One-Shot

you HAVE to carry this on its great really

Reviewer: fallingStars39 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:49 PM · On: One-Shot

This story is great!!  Very well written, and gave a very insightful look into Alec's character.

Please continue this story. I’d love to see if Alec and the girl ever meet again!!

Thanks for sharing.


Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:16 PM · On: One-Shot

Very good.  I think you should extend it into some chapters.

Reviewer: cinroc (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:14 AM · On: One-Shot

That was fantastic.  You should write more twilight stories.  i look forward to the next story you share with us.  thanks for sharing this one.

Reviewer: Axciom (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:26 AM · On: One-Shot

Awww, just a one shot? REALLY?

It is my not-professional-opinion-at-all that you should continue with this.



Reviewer: miaokuancha (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:52 AM · On: One-Shot

PLEASE let this be the beginning of a greater story ....

Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:42 AM · On: One-Shot

Short and sweet!  Very well written.  I appreciate that there weren't any grammatical errors and the content was written professionally.  Some content are really just meant for teenagers by the language used.  So thanks for this one-shot.

Author's Response:


Actually, one of the main reasons i wrote this was because especially for Alec, there are some incredibly badly written stories out there, and i didn't really think that was fair to him!

Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:02 AM · On: One-Shot

It was great. I wish you would continue it.

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