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Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen: Arty Party
Okay, so Bella has been completely upfront and honest with Edward. It would seem that Jasper is not so honest and upfront with Alice.
I understand Jasper's dislike for Edward, but he's being a dick. Of course, Edward is a complete idiot, but I think he'll figure out his feelings soon.
Thanks for the update-Kate
Author's Response: I think Jazz may have shared some stuff with Alice (he did get head from Alice in Landau while B was in the back), but he probably didn't share all the little details ... the important ones.
Our Jazz just feels threatened ... and he has turned into a dick :(
Reviewer: jaclynheartz (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen: Arty Party
Love this story! One of my favorites by far! It always makes my day when I check my fav updates and see yours. I just love how unique and original it is. Keep up the amazing work :)
Author's Response: Thanks!!! It makes us gigglesnorts to get reviews like this =D Chapter 19 is finished and being edited ... an update won't be long now!
Reviewer: Ash Night (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen: Arty Party
this chappy has the epicness. you guys should get a typin' on the next one!
good luck to michelle, i hope her mini human is done cookin' soon
Author's Response: Lucky for you the next chappy is finished and with the betas!!!! AND chappy 20 is almost finished!!!!
Michelle's mini human gets popped out in a month =D
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen: Arty Party
jasper should have kept an eye on her. if he knew she was gonna be like that, and he was worried about her.... something bad could have happened to her.
i still think edwards a shit, just one thats growing some semi redeeming qualities.
and as always, i love the way you two write this thing. keep the good work up!!
Author's Response: Jazz should have been watching out for his Bells-a-bub, but I think he had his own problems with his Pixie. I'd love to be a fly on the wall for that conversation!
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter Eighteen: Arty Party
Ah man, can't remember if I reviewed the last chapter (darn phone reading) but it made me sad. And the ending of this one did too; him shrinking away because he thinks she said she loved him. He defends himself fiercely to Jasper and is ignoring all the football guys taunts, but the minute it gets emotional he's going back to hiding. And all the freaks are gonna blame him for the douches showing up and crashing their party. I'm worry about Bella getting so, so gone, but I'm glad no one did anything to her. When they got seperated I was worried one of the jocks was gonna mess with her. And Jasper? Not telling his Pixie? Totally changes the feel of the agreement between Bella and Jasper; she would never have hidden it from Shags.
Author's Response: Our Eddie is emotionally challenged ... what can we say?!
We think our Jazz is just jealous and worried that Edward will steal Bells-a-bub away. AND maybe there are more feelings there than meets the eye ....
Oh snap!!!!!!
=D
Reviewer: carolvieira (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter Eighteen: Arty Party
jeez this was reeeeeeeally confusing! what the hell just happened? did she OD-ed?? is he going to freak out with the 'i love you'??? too many questions, sorry, couldn't help
loving it
update soon xx
Author's Response: Too many drugs with alcohol do not mix, young grasshoppah! Chappy 19 is with the betas and hopefully will be up asap!
<3
Reviewer: lorij (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter Eighteen: Arty Party
WOW! Poor bella the break up is coming and my heart hurts for her!!!
Author's Response: Our Bella is going to have some interesting twists we think (well, we know, but we are tight lipped bastids!!).
Reviewer: robing77 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Chapter Four: Invites and Moldy Peaches
Lovin the show!
Author's Response: W000t!!! Thanks!! We <3 the production ..lol!!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
Love the story and the writing... it is so creative.... can not wait to read more and i hope that edward does not hurt her
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!! We <3 hearing that others love the story as much as we do. You won't have to wait long to read more ... chappy 18 is in the queue!
Reviewer: retrostar (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
Hrm, parallels in their universes, perhaps? Can't wait for more, ladies!
Author's Response: We see interesting stuffs comin' up in their universes!!! Chapter 18 is in the hands of one of our spectacular betas and will be delivered as sooooon as possible. Michelle and I have some serious love for Chapter 18 AND there is a wee bit of a teaser on the forum!
Reviewer: mu_cullen (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
it was too short!!!!!!!! Anyways, it was an awesome chap. Loved the whole Emmett Edward talk. And I feel so bad for Jasper! Maybe Edward should let Bella get her Jazzgasms :)
Author's Response: Things are gunna get interesting in that whole Jasper/B/E/Alice rectangle!!! Michelle and I think you will REALLY dig chapter 18!!!!!!!! I just need Michelle to get online so that we can get it finished (I am WAY too excited!!!).
Reviewer: Gogsnkay (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
Way to make my sunday afternoon much better. Looking for 18 already!! Lol! Eddie was always gonna go and brood about it or it wouldn't have bothered him from the start to be with her. Way to go to Emmet for being cool about it and showing him it'll be worth it. Now onwards girlies, there are deisres abrewing! x
Author's Response: Michelle and I aim to please!! We like making Sundays better =D We are super super retardedly stoked about 18 - ridiculously so .. it is going to be a good one!!!!!!
Emmett is our cool cucumber and we love him for being our balance.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
hahahaa, Edward's kind of lucky that Emmett didn't beat him down after the incident with Rosalie, but I suppose they are brothers and Em is aware of what a bitch Rose can be especially to Edward.
Oooh, Jasper's being all possessive. Dude, you cannot be like that, especially when you have your pixie. You and Bella might share a special friendship and connection, but you need to respect her right to find her pixie. :)
Author's Response: What is the sayin'? Bros before .... Em is very aware that Rose is difficult - a cunt if you would. LOL
I think we might start seeing a different side of Jasper... maybe there are some feelings there that he hasn't admitted to. It will be mighty interesting!!
Reviewer: numbertwochild (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
i just hope he doesnt fuck his relationship up so bad. cuz i just get the feelin that he's gonna mess up
Author's Response: We more for squeaky clean ........ hope, hope, hope, hope!!
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter Sixteen: Casa de Cullen
just remembered about the review button... my bad.
if i could have kicked carlisle in the jewels, it would have been done. snobby bastid.
Author's Response: Carlisle is an asshole, but we think B pulled her own =D
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter Eleven: Afterschool Shenanigans
i laughed. i laughed so hard i squeezed out a tear or two
Author's Response: YAY!!!!!!! We love tears of laughter!! Lets us know we aren't the only ones who giggle over our story.
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter Nine: Asshats Swallowing their Pride
reviews are your myrtle?
puff puff pass my friends...
still loving the story. sorry i missed a review on the last chapter, i had to see what would happen next... damn, now i'm sounding like a pussy whipped vag... :)
Author's Response: No worries about being a pussy whipped vag .... Michelle and I will read over what we have written and I'm always the one to scream "WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?? OMG!!!" and Michelle has to remind me that we are the authors and we have an outline.
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter Seven: Coming Clean Semi Nude
if feedback is your crack, does that make me your dealer? :)
this story is, by far, a much welcome change from the usual bella/edward love story. i love this confident bella, and i love how she keeps edward on his toes. i love her intimacy with jasper,on every level, and yet it worries me how future in depth love interests will effect their relationship.
good job, guys. i'm loving the ride your taking me on.
Author's Response: That does indeed make you our dealer. We pay in new chapters!!
Thanks for diggin' our story. We wanted to take a different approach on the characters and voila! This is what came about. We hope you stick with us =D
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter Six: Aftermath and Cat Fights
i so want to see those pictures
Author's Response: Hahahha! I could probably whip out some of my photoshop skillz .....
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter Five: Shin-digs and Treachery
poor jazz!! she should have whacked a stepford with the damn spatula, at the very least!!
Author's Response: Poor Jazz indeed. I think those Stepfords needed more than a whack ... bunch of bastids!
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter Four: Invites and Moldy Peaches
i'm really liking the hold THIS bella has over edward. she makes me fucking laugh!!
Author's Response: She is nothing he has ever seen before but everything he wants to be. She is his ideal ... and she doesn't know it which makes her hold on him even stronger!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
Great chapter!
I hope that things will get better between Bella and Jasper. You need the one you love, but you always need your bestie.
I'm that Edward and Emmett talked finally. I thought that Emmett might beat Edward up, but he just wanted to talk. That's always a good thing. =)
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Chapter 18 is gunna be a doooooooooozy!!!! Michelle and I are super excited about it.
I think things between B and her Jazz are gunna get interesting. I think there are some things going on there that haven't really been talked about.
Em and Shags were always gunna be ok. Brothers gotta have each other's backs!
Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
My biggest issue with Rosalie is that she is nasty to many people, not just Edward.
Thanks for the update-Kate
Author's Response: Rosalie is a bitch. I seriously hope Emmett dumps her ass ..... we will see!
Reviewer: lorij (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen: Early Reflections on High
WOW! Is he goign to dump her because he can't take the pressure??? I am it is never a good sign if they can't own up to being your boyfriend. Poor bella!
Author's Response: Our poor Shags has some serious commitment issues. We hope he will pull his head from his arse and be a man. We've placed bets with our bookies.
Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter Three: Shaggy and the Scoobes
sweet
Author's Response: I love the interaction between Bella and Shags in this chapter!!!! Makes me squeeeee!
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