Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 14 Witchy Woman
Ooooooo, I have my suspicions about what's going on, but I'm choosing to keep them to myself. I'm always wrong about this stuff, so I just let it play out in my head, and then read the better version when it comes out. Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 14 Witchy Woman
oooo fireman edward .... hot!!!!
Reviewer: cole5183 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 14 Witchy Woman
That was absolutely hot! Thanks for a very nice lemon!
Can't wait for your next update....
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 14 Witchy Woman
that was some excellent twi-porn. I can't wait until E opens up to B and tells her his story.
Reviewer: meliebot (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 7 Perspective
Eugh. Evil Caius.
Reviewer: meliebot (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 6 Conversations in Bluntness
Eeeeeeee. Esme was so close to finding out. I BET you if she had found out she wouldn't have let Bella know and then would have played Mrs Matchmaker. So cute.
Reviewer: meliebot (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 5 Imaginary Girlfriend
I absolutely love Edward's sexy Bella fantasies. I'm actually kind of hoping when they get together (I'm guessing they will?) that he gets to have a real sexy Bella stiletto moment.
Reviewer: meliebot (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 4 Cardioversion
Haha, I loved the last part of this chapter. The first half didn't grab me as much but I think that was just because I was getting antsy for when they would reunite! Not to say the first half was horrible - it was absolutely brilliant. You're very poetic in your writing...I love it!
Now right onto reading the next chapter.
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 13 Her Inspiration
a ride in the Aston ,who wouldnt be impressed and the back seat .....
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 13 Her Inspiration
I want to know that back story of these 2. I just know that if they can get it out in the open they would be so much better for each other.
I love how Edward didn't push her for more. He just let it happen. :)
Author's Response: It's coming, well most of it anyway. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 13 Her Inspiration
great story can not wait to read more
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 13 Her Inspiration
they are so sweet! i can't wait to see what happens with the other couples, and then jake! what is he gonna do when he realizes that bella left. and she left with edward? will the others be at the apartment when they return? or will they show up the next morning wearing the same clothes? i love the story! i can't wait to see how edward gets his mother's ring back!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 13 Her Inspiration
Hey great chap it was a really sweet thing =] and i loved the ending =]
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 13 Her Inspiration
Aww! How sweet is Edward. I want one!
Reviewer: Melmelly100 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 13 Her Inspiration
Wow this is such a great story! Can't wait for you to update!! =)
Reviewer: meliebot (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 1 Emergency Department
Wow. All I can say is...wow. This chapter is fantastic. And its only the start??? Poor Nikki.
Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 12 The Kiss
MAN! I HAD JUST ABOUT GIVEN UP ON YOU! HOPE YOU WILL BE UPDATING OFTEN SINCE WE HAVE HAD SUCH A LONG ABSENCE OF ANYTHING RESEMBLING A CONTINUATION OF THIS STORY.
Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 13 Her Inspiration
I LOVED this chapter. He is the sweetest man alive. You're doing a great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully, Edward will remain a gentleman *wink, wink*
Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 12 The Kiss
why or why, didn't he just rip that ring off Tanya's hand? *sigh*....
Reviewer: open_arms (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 1 Emergency Department
I just read all 12 chapters and am DYING for more!!! :) love it and have been giggling like an idiot at my cumputer screen esp bella's waxing adventure hehe
Author's Response: That was my favorite chapter too! LOL!
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 12 The Kiss
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Lemon drop? ;)
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 10 Formal Introduction & Faux Pas
Holy Edward! I like his pov! ;)
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Gala
Cliffie!!! And just like Bella... I fell! ;P
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 12 The Kiss
Hey i loved this chap i loved the ending and how edward stood up to tanya =]
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 12 The Kiss
awesome i love this story
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