Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 29 Classic Aversion
wow! Only a couple of chapters? It'll be interesting to see how it all gets tied together.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2011 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 29 Classic Aversion
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 29 Classic Aversion
Well I sure hope Edward gets his head out of his ass and soon. He is lucky bella still wants to fight for him. Love your story and look forwad to more
Reviewer: MommasLittleMasochist (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 29 Classic Aversion
yeah its totally love just cuz she wasnt dying to have him in her pants! right.
anyway good chap! update soon!
Reviewer: Prudentwifeyyy (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 Emergency Department
awwwwwwwwwwwww soooooooooooo cute. priceless
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 29 Classic Aversion
So glad to see a new update. Great story. Keep up the good work
Reviewer: Jollypop (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2011 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
I love this story. Please update soon!
Reviewer: MillzGHat (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 1 Emergency Department
Reviewer: MillzGHat (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
i feel better now
Reviewer: kerrywin (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2011 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
cant wait for more!
Reviewer: Tinny xxx (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2011 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
wow ... i dont have words wow ....
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 Smile, My Angel
I'm sorry you didnt get as many reviews as you would have liked. I think, as a reader who doesn't review often, mostly it's because you just have to click the NEXT button asap when a story like yours captures your every thought and you just HAVE to find out what happens next. I am in love with this story and you are such a talented writer
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 10 Formal Introduction & Faux Pas
holy crap!!!! I am seriously gonna die when the citrus comes along...holy hell!!! I am in love with your edward and bella and CANNOT wait to read the next chap
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
Whew. What a story. I think Bella is wrong his grandfather is capable of many many things and manipulation is a tool he uses. If he would do that to his daughter and son in law knowing it would affect his 9yr old grandson, what would stop him now?
He is someone I would do my best to NEVER see. I would just split all ties with him. Family or not. He contributed to the demise of Edward's parents. He may not have pulled the trigger, but he pused him into the situation to do something harsh.
WOW, up until that story I was ready to say "Bye Edward".
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 27 Confrontation of Hypocrisy
she is better to be rid of him.
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 Perspective
i cannot freaking wait till they meet again!!!!!
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 3 Siren's Call
just started this story and i love it so far>>>totally hooked
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
Love it
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
Wow finally a grown-up conversation! However, I am just really pissed at Bella because she does seem to protect Jacob and make excuses for him. Her little comment about "Jake's not trying to ruin our relationship" is a good example because how and the fuck can she possibly think that when that is all Jake has been trying to do?!
She had better get her head out of her ass when it comes to Jake or this relationship is doomed, because no relationship can make it when a "boy" friend is causing trouble and the "girl" friend does nothing but make excuses for his sorry ass behavior to the real "boyfriend". That is always putting the asshole above the mate and that will never work! Jake needs his sorry ass beat down or fired!
Reviewer: cellibelli85 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
Thanks for the update. I'm glad he finally told her about his parents. What I can't understand is how Bella can be so blind concerning Jacob. Its obvious that he wants her to end things with Edward. I still think its hypocritical for her to accuse Edward of pulling away and hiding things when she did the same. Yes he made a mistake in not telling her about his grandfather but so did she with the whole Jacob debacle.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
Wow...Edward's past really is heartbreaking. That is a lot to process.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
poor edward! and his mom and dad! i hope that edwrd can be with bella, and not have his family hovering over them!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
Good Chapter......
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 28 I Love You
Wow! Ths was some Chapter! to think our little 9 yr old Edward hearing and seeing all of those things, well that just was.....well, I'm speechless!!!
Awesome, chapter thank you so much for continuing to keep us so engrosed in the story!!
Till next chapter say motivated and inspired!!!
Kathyxoxo
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