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Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter One

Ooh, this is really good.  Very mysterious and atmospheric, with a nice dollop of magic thrown in.  I don't usually start reading WIPs that only have 1 or 2 chapters, as I like a good helping to get me hooked (and hopefully more new chapters before I catch up), but I think this actually has me hooked already so I'm praying that you are a regular updater, as I am very keen to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Prologue

I very much enjoyed "You Found Me" so thought I would give this a try.  The premise has me intrigued and on the basis of this first chapter I think this is going to be good. 

Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Prologue

Just found this prologue.  Are you continuing this story?  The prologue has captured my imagination and can't wait for the story to unfold!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes I am continuing it... RL has gotten in the way of a lot lately and instead of giving you a sob sotry just know that I am working on it. I want to get it up again in a few days but I can't promise anything. I'm so glad you like it! I have a great feeling about this story!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Prologue

looking forward to more

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Prologue

I love a good romance/mystery!  I keep picturing a dirty, wild looking, mountain man of an Edward and I sympathise with Bella for wanting to do more than rub his knuckles!  Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

That's exactly kind of what I was going for... Something about a wild looking Edward... *sigh*

I hope to have more up very soon! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: twidiehard0302 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Prologue

Very intriguing - I love a good suspense/thriller with some romance thrown in - can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cummingsismyhomeboy (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Prologue

intriguing premise! not to mention the relationship already in those last couple of paragraphs...

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