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Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter Fourteen: Sex and sandwiches
Hey again,
I think it was you asking if I added you to my lists? Yup, I did. My hidden LJ one, and my favs on here.
Okay, let's see what we can do, comment-wise, on a Saturday afternoon, while I had little sleep the night before.
This, I could tell, was going to be a long week.
Well, hopefully it'll be a long week for Edward, too...
Did I mention I practically didn't sleep? I probably shouldn't comment at all, I mean, nothing decent is going ot come out right now. :P
“Your shirt, Bella,” he growled. “And those pants. What are you trying to do?”
"Why Edward, if you don't like them, I could always take them off...?" Would have been too direct, right? Poor Eddie.
Oh, Bella wants him to wash her back... Silly girl... Should have kept that for later. I mean, why not throw him on the bed and, well... Save a horse, I think they say? *grin*
Feel like a smoke? Haha!
Nah, smoking is bad, and I like my lungs healthy. My dad has been smoking for 35 years, and he has been sounding like Darth Vader for free for more than a decade now, so I am quite repulsed by it. ;-)
Looking forward to seeing how the presentation goes, and how Bella will deal with all this when business week is starting again...
But I'm not going to panic, for the overall fic, cos they have the same car, ya know! :DDD
Loved that detail, can you tell?
See ya soon!
Spikey
Author's Response: Spikey - If I haven't said it lately, I love you! Thanks for the funny (and lengthy) comment on the sexy times! I like your suggestion, but yeah, I think it would have been too forward. Not that Bitchy Bella won't be forward when it comes to sex, but she's just getting her bearings with Ed (I need a nickname for him too - like CW&IA has Tattward...hmmm). Niceward just seems dumb.
Anyways, thanks so much for hanging out here and chatting. I love all of my loyal readers! This is so much fun!
Lumedog :)
Reviewer: Tine (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 05:46 AM · On: Chapter Fourteen: Sex and sandwiches
Defininately need a cigarette now and I don't even smoke. ;)WOW.
I'll be waiting for more.
xoxo,
Tine
Author's Response: YES!! Awesome! Yeah, me neither but if there ever was a time to smoke, I thought this might be it! Of course, we've only just begun. Ooh, it gives me good shivers thinking of all the yummy things I'm going to have these two do!
Stay tuned and much love to you too! Thanks for being a loyal reader!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter Fourteen: Sex and sandwiches
great job
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter Twelve: A walk and then...
I LOVE to cuddle!! It's the best! Glad Edward comforted her after her nightmare.
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter Eleven: War and peace
Glad Bella is taking the initiative to talk to Edward!
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter Ten: Stuck together
OH NO!
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter Nine: In (P)reparation
Chicago should be fun!!
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter Fourteen: Sex and sandwiches
That was one heck of a chapter. Can't wait for the next.
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:38 PM · On: Chapter Eight: The B Side
I love that everyone could see that B and E dug each other!
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter Fourteen: Sex and sandwiches
Hell yeah i loved that......finally right
Author's Response: Haha! Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :)
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter Seven: Let's try to get along
Glad they are getting along!!
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter Six: Damage control
OOOOoooo...at Saturday at the office...ALONE? Plus, a conference in Chicago with Edward ALONE? Very, very interesting!
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter Five: Are you kidding me?!
Oh...Bitcy boss lady!! LOL!! Too funny! Can't wait to see what happens next, Monday should be intersting!
Author's Response: Thanks hon! Love your comments after each chapter! Hope you enjoy it. Don't worry - working as fast as possible on the next few chapters to keep my lovies happy!
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 4: Boss from hell
Love it! Should be interesting having Carlisle as Edward's brother...
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter Three: First Day
Poor Bella has it BAD!!
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 2: Baggage
Loving it!! Can't wait for Bella and Edward to meet! Love how badass Bella is!
Reviewer: linzk78 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.
Great start!! I am intriuged!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 03:46 AM · On: Chapter Thirteen: The mason
They should nookie the whole dang week... :P
Looking forward to more. In fact, I should add you to my lists... :D
Spikey
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments Spikey! So...did you add me to your lists?? Hmm???
Thanks and keep it here for more fun!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter Seven: Let's try to get along
They have the same car... LOL!
Loving this story!
Spikey
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter Thirteen: The mason
I loved it! Nookie would have been too much! This was perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I didn't want to push the limits of "reality" with this. Hence the slow progress. I don't know about you, but I'm getting a bit impatient though!
Thanks for the reviews/comments!
Reviewer: Tine (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Chapter Thirteen: The mason
I absolutely loved this chapter. It seems like they have finally gotten somewhere and they kissed. YAY
Can't wait for more ;)
xoxo,
Tine
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much!
Reviewer: gymgirl06 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Chapter Thirteen: The mason
Great story! I love that you made Bella the boss. I think that she is a strong female character and it's nice to see her in charge instead of being the secretary. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks! What a compliment! Yeah, thought I have enjoyed stories where Bella is the one working for Edward (umm, The Office anyone?!), I thought it was time for Bella to be the Boss.
hehe
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: Boss from hell
Bahahahahaha.
I love your Edward btw.
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Baggage
Haha, I love Bella's mental musings.
Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.
I like this version of Bella! She's got backbone!
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