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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter Five: Are you kidding me?!
What a mess indeed...I can't even imagine what is going to happen on monday..can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 4: Boss from hell
OMG I love that Carlisle and Edward are brothers...such an interesting twist...lol...oh I can't wait to see how this goes...
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter Three: First Day
Whohoo so now we meet Mr. Cullen...ohh the angst is just to funny
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 2: Baggage
Wow Bella sounds seriously jaded
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.
Hmmm so was cruising the recents and wouldn't you know this lil synopsis caught my attention...sounds like fun...
Reviewer: robing77 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter Three: First Day
"ready to take on any duty you give me. I will consider this a challenge, to which I will surely rise"
Just sounds so dirty cumming from Edward :)
Author's Response: Hi there, and welcome! It makes me so giddy to see new "faces" here. My Edward has a bit of an ego, and of course it sounds dirty. Haha. Because we want it to be dirty. Glad you're enjoying it so far.
Many thanks,
Lumedog
Reviewer: robing77 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: Baggage
Poor B- it sucks that we still have to choose relationships or good careers in this day and age- but we do...booo!
Great story. Can't wait for B to meet Mr. Cullen :)O
~Robing77 WL reviewer
Reviewer: robing77 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.
I like cantankerous Bella, a nice deviation from the shy klutz. It will be exciting to see the dynamic between Bell and Edward in this story! Great Job!
Robing77 WL reviewer :)
Reviewer: JustJo94 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-nine: Upside down
Well...you have me entreagued...
I'm hooked...I just had to read this today...all of it.
I love your writing style. It flows together seamlessly. I cannot wait to see where you take this and how you have the characters tie up loose ends.
Impatiently waiting,
JustJo94
WL
Reviewer: JustJo94 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-two: Reality check
Hmmmm....
"I cant liiiiiiiiiiive.....wiiiith or withooooooouuuuut youuuuuuuu!"
Hmmm.....
a bit of foreshadowing?
Heavens, I hope not...haven't these two been through enough of an emotional rollercoaster?
Sigh...however, you are in the director's chair...
Ok..Captian, my Captain...lead us foreward and onward!
Reviewer: JustJo94 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 04:31 PM · On: Chapter Nineteen: The vultures descend
Hmmmmm......
Could I possibly be on to something.....hmmmmmm
*taps finger agains chin*
Yeah..we haven't had much angst in a while...too many holes for our characters to trip on...
Reviewer: JustJo94 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter Thirteen: The mason
And...may I have your address to forward the Dr's bills for the whiplash that I had occured reading the last two chapters...in succession????
Sheesh, girl! It's a mess. There are way to many holes in their relationship...i'm just waiting for someone...like...Tanya...or something to waltz in with the force of a whirlwind to create more havoc with these characters...
It wouldn't be a good story without the angst and drama, right?
JustJo94
WL
Author's Response: Haha! Whiplash from reading....hmmm, is that good or bad? Sorry? ;)
I like to keep my readers on their toes, I suppose. I'm going to take this review - and your whiplash - as a compliment.
Thanks! :)
Lumedog
Reviewer: JustJo94 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter Seven: Let's try to get along
Wait...was that...yep...i chip from the iceberg broke off...Is there a heat wave nearby? I could have sworn that there was...
I love the cat and mouse game. I love the realness...is that a word?...of the "relationship"between the two...
JustJo94
WL
Reviewer: JustJo94 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Baggage
LOL...had to laugh at the last part of the chapter...I just experienced something similiar this past weekend...
I was out at a couple bars with the ladies and the guys would look...but thats about it...it's like there is some sort of male experation date that is imbedded in our DNA...oh..well
I loved this chappie as well...
JustJo94
WL
Reviewer: JustJo94 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.
Wow...what a...tight....ship!
I love the speed at which this chapter really seemed to flow...It makes me really feel as if I am in the "business" world....It gives off that professional...domineering feel to it without coming across harsh...except for Bella...this should be one interesting Shrew to tame!
JustJo94
WL
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love it when readers express that what I tried to do in writing a chapter really translated for them! What a great compliment. So glad you're enjoying this so far. Can't wait to hear more about my little take on this story.
Many thanks,
Lumedog
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-nine: Upside down
Awww - now I am completely up to date with this fantastic story.
I love reading EPOV especially when the story line is not regurgitated. The POV is supposed to fill in the blanks and you do a great job of that. My curiosity was piqued when Edward called Esme to explain what happened between him and Bella. I wanted to know what he was saying to her. Of course, my questions were answered from reading EPOV.
Got to love Jasper - truly a southern gentlemen and great friend.
I love this story - so very well written and looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your reviews! It's so nice to see a new "face" here, and I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. I'm trying furiously to finish the next chapter! Yeah, I can't stomach regurgitations of previous chapters and points of view, either, which is why I try to do exactly what you wrote up there. I also thought it was critical that the readers experience Edward's pain and anger post-breakup, since he doesn't share it with anyone other than Jasper. And that's only by default. Guys don't cry on their friends' shoulders and share feelings like us gals do, so this is my way of letting everyone in.
Thanks so much again and please come back soon! (when I update, which will hopefully be this week)
Lumedog
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-eight: I'm sorry...
Way to go girl! I like take charge bella - smart, beautiful and has the love of Adonis himself.
I'm curious though, how will Bella manage a 5 hour daily commute?
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-seven: The plan
Yippeee... Jumping up and down like a school girl!!!
Honestly,I'm just loving this story. You are a very talented writer. I am completely emersed in these characters.
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-five: All for me
I knew It!!!
Bella - get a grip girl!
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-four: Devil in a blue dress
what a fabulous story! Why do I have a feeling that Bella is going to run? Edward has been so supportive of her drastic mood swings, yet Bella can't fully grasped that she is loved by Adonis himself!
Ugghhhh... it's around the corner isn't it.
Great story..... anxious to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, and welcome! I'm so glad you like my little fic. Yeah, my Bella is pretty dense sometimes. But she's trying...
Thank you again, and hope to see you here again!
Lumedog
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-nine: Upside down
Gah, I'd like to say 'phew, can they really move forward now?,' but then again, Tanya's still around.
Can we kill her next chapter?
Spikey
Author's Response: Spikey - I've missed you! Don't worry. I promise Tanya and Aro will get what's coming to them. It's called karma. Tee-hee. As always, many thanks.
Love, L
Reviewer: Vanillamochalatte (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Time is money, honey.
I'm not sure I like a cold-hearted, bithcy Bell but I'll reserve judgement until later. Maybe there's a reason.
On to Chapter 2 :-)
I like how you set the scences.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 08:27 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-nine: Upside down
great chapter
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 09:18 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-nine: Upside down
edward is so sweet! i hope that they can make it work and that whatever bella has planned for tanya and aro that its really good!! i can't wait!
Reviewer: Hez_Pixie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-nine: Upside down
I started reading this last night and fell asleep LOL! So here's the delayed review!
Awwwwwww! I absolutely love Jasper in this chap. I want someone to call me Sugar! LOL! And what a good friend to Edward. He's always so damn laid back and collected. I seriously want to be more like him.
It was good to see this from Edward's side because we see the pain behind what he's going through. When I read it from BPOV, I kinda thought that, despite what she had put him through, he was being a dick. It was like he loved her one second and the next wanted nothing to do with her. But NOW it makes sense. Aw, I love Emo Sweetward. I want to put him in my pocket and take him out when I'm having a bad day so he can tell me that I'm beautiful. *sigh* :D
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