I love a happy ending as well, and theirs seems so full of promise! Yay! 

Chyla

Oh boy....I'm trusting you here. Please don't undo all of the progress we've made over convention week!?!

My favorite poet here, and one of my favorite poems! So is Edward Bella's muse? Is he helping her get her groove (and perspective) back? I mean he shows up and she's waxing poetically! Lol

Whaddya mean that you couldn't tell if it was good or not? You know darn well it was smoking hot! I hope she doesn't screw this up....he's too damn fine to lose!

Pretty nice lemonade there!

Loved the title! Very clever! Now...WTH? She has decided to even more of a witch than ever, you know, for his own good? Ridiculous!

Wow, she really is something else! Perception is a deadly thing...

wow, sparks are flying------who will last the longest, will Ed be able to put up with the high and mighty miss swan? i guess time will tell 

 

 

Ha ha. I'm GLAD she's not doing well with keeping her wall up & distancing herself from Edward! I SO hope she just can't do it--isn't capable of going backwards, & is in too deep now!! Silly girl; quit running & blow up the !@#*% wall!!

Whoo-hoo progress!! And some hott make-out progress too!! Yummy...  ;0)

IIII Like It!

I do feel for Bella tho. Hard being a businesswoman in "man-world" so I'm sure she feels the need to constantly prove herself. So that, along with the Sh**heads she's been with, have caused her to build up impenitrable walls of bitchiness to protect herself. They just lucky she hasn't become a sniper O__o 

Normally when I read fics, I am always partial to EPOV.  But that is especially so with this story.  I am so overwhelmed with harsh emotions when reading BPOV.  It is almost how I felt reading Withering Heights.  So much negativity, selfishness and selflessness all at the same time.  I understand the necessity, but I do so much prefer EPOV.

Author's Response:

Then try my other fic, Power Ten! It's all EPOV! :)

Hello,

I adore this story and am so sad that it ended.  Brilliantly written and so moving!  Would you please write a sequel?  I hate that it had to end but it ended happily...and that was wonderful!   I love Edward...his heart and his love for Bella.  Thank you very much for writing this....

 

Best Wishes

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this. A sequel? Wow. Never thought of that. Got any ideas for what I'd write about? :)

Again, thank you for reading and reviewing - I appreciate it. I hope to update Power Ten soon - I'm moving and working on a new house, which has taken over for the time being.

Hugs,

Lumedog

Oh, what a great story!

I like that Edward broke it off with Bella, she so deserved it.  And I liked that Esme and Carlisle were their friends and not parents, though it was odd to think of them in that fashion, I had to keep reminding myself they weren't Edwards parents.

There wasn't a lot of un-needed or redundant story telling when switching POVs.  I hate it when there is no new information, when switching POVs, that help the story move forward.  I love hearing what Edward thinks about situations, though.  Its almost like reading Midnight Sun sometimes.  Its such a treat!

 

thanks for writing a great story!

Ok, so I see a little better why he caved.  Sometimes alternating POV can be repetetive, but I think this time it was completely needed.  Great job!