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Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 11:36 PM · On: The Longest Day

FUUUUUCCCCKKKKKK!  No way - cliffy or what!  I am pacing - what the hell is he going to do to her?  Edward is going to go ape shit!  I guess the weekend business trip is off.  I must say, I am kinda glad that Michael doesn't get a chance to dribble all over her! 

You NEED to update soon.  This is of the utmost importance! 

Oh, and I can completly agree the 'University of Edward Mason' - I love this fic.  I am holding my breath for its update - and now YOURS!

much love xxx

Reviewer: crystal91390 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:50 PM · On: The Longest Day

I read this fic @ fanfiction but I'm rereading it here and decided to show you some lurve ^_^

I'm totally inlove with this fic

Reviewer: EBF (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:44 PM · On: The Longest Day

D: ohnoes

Reviewer: jenidig (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:00 PM · On: The Longest Day

Oh my god. You left it there! Ugh. Lol. Great story. 

 

I love this Edward & Bella. 

 

Ahhh, can't wait till you update again :)

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:50 PM · On: The Longest Day

omg, i can't believe she didn't let jane walk her to her car, so not smart. bella has the worst luck she definitely should have anticipated this happening. on to of that  james is probably obsessed with her to. he'll probably start stalking her right about the time she recovers from this attack, if he isn't already. edward is going to freak. please update soon.

Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:51 PM · On: The Longest Day

omg, please let bella be alright

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:43 PM · On: The Longest Day

I really want Bella to join some sort of Tae Kwon Do and pull a J.Lo in Enough. You know, kick that guy's ass. UGH! Poor Bella =[

I want to kill him. Maybe Edward is secretly a ninja?

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:31 PM · On: The Longest Day

Wow.  That chapter left me on the edge of my seat (and I'd read it once before!).  Very frightening. 

Totally looking forward to your update!  You are owning me with this!

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

oh shit...i feel the angst coming....what would ever happen?  her job? his past?

Reviewer: eddie_lickmyas (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

wow

ur story is w-o-w like really really amazing

plz hurry up with the next one plzzzzzz

Reviewer: rockergal221 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Cocktails and Conversation

This such a great story! At first i thought Michael didn't realise that Bella was dating someone, and i thought he would make a move on her or something. But when he didn't i was both relieved and disappointed, it would have been so funny to see Bella yell at Michael and then get worried about her job, and Edward would get all angry at him! Love it, keep updating!

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

Maybe a bit too many I love you's?  Maybe I'm not quite as soppy as I thought ;)

Nicely written though.

Achilles

Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

I love getting into a new story. This one is divine. I'm enjoying it very much so. I can't help but think there is something that Edward is hiding. Great job. Keep up the great work. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

That was so good. Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

First of all, if anyone is pimping you out, dearest, they are making a mint because you are one hot lay.  Period.

Second, I run into recs of your story on all sorts of forums.  I hope those smut readers are reviewing.  If you're not participating, you're a peeping tom.  And, that's just icky (I'm ALL ABOUT jumping in these days!)

I adored this chapter-- both times I read it.  I'm so glad Bella is over the 'naming the puppy' hump.  And, see, only incredible things happened!

The promise you'll love me NO MATTER WHAT bit made a chill go down my spine.  That's some bull to straddle Heh heh.  I just said 'straddle'.  Probably due to your bad influence....

Great chapter, hot stuff!!!

Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:37 PM · On: The Jacket

she's super dramatic...so all you have to do is joke about her being a whore and you get in the panties!!! haahhaa



Author's Response:

I am laughing at your review right now  :)

Thank you for it, by the way.

She was super dramatic in this chapter, poor Edward just pushed her biggest button.

All I have to say about him getting in her panties..."He so would have gotten into mine too!"

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

Much love back to you too!  That was intense, in a good way!  I just love it how they are so desperate for each other.  I must admit though, I did get worried for one tiny second thinking that some some unknown reason Edward was going to push her away - *phew*

I came across your fic in the 'Most Recent' section, but I have also seen it recommended on another fic - but for the life of me I can't remember which one.  There are just too many:)

Happy New Year xxx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!

Actually, my beta, Marvar, found me in the Most Recent section too!  LOL

This was an intense, but basically really fun chapter to write.

I'm all about the love...if you couldn't tell.  LMFAO!

Happy New Year to you too!!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

such a great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

I love all your reviews!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: Ally_boo143 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

This chapter was absolutely beautful!!! So sweet and genuine!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much!

Beautiful, sweet and genuine was exactly what I was going for!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

this story is so good. i wonder what he is keeping from bella. please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely review...and I promise, all will be revealed.

:)

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Aftermath, Aftterglow

I don't know if I have the proper equipment to show you how much I love you, Cosmo!  The chapter is great and I swooned when I read Edward's declarations.  

Your words are beautiful as is.  I just dust lightly for extra sparkle.  

I found out about this fic scrolling through the new updates.  I was intrigued and the rest is history.  Now I have a new fic-wife.



Author's Response:

I love you too, sweetie!

You tend to make my day!

My words make me beautiful...but you definitely make them shine  :)

I love that you found me through New Updates...LOL  It was totally meant to be.

Love Your Eternal Fic-Bitch  :)

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Mothers and Lovers

So I've just stumbled upon this story and I'm not sure why it doesn't have more reviews.

It's INCREDIBLE! You've done an excellent job with the writing. It's fabuous and I fully intend on recc'ing it for my next chapter of "Smile that Explodes" :D More soon please!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the sweet review!  I truly appreciate it!

Thanks as well for the rec. 

 So many people are pimping this story out for me, but I love each and every person that does.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Four Days

Wifey, you need to divorce me because I am so fail at reviewing.  Can we please watch Love Actually next time we Skype.  You know how I have a thing for the British dudes.

Thank you for showing me the love. 

Can I borrow Edward while he's wearing the boxers and robe?  That is a hot visual.



Author's Response:

You're catholic...you don't beleive in divorce...which is a good thing, since you're never getting rid of me!

Edward and the cashmere are available and at your disposal whenever you like...and I'm totes all about watching Love Actually with you.  I'm hot for Bristish Men myself.  Especially the original "Mr. Darcy", Colin Firth.

 

Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Mothers and Lovers

I can't get enough of the bathroom counter happy times with Edward.  I need a cigarette, Cosmo.  I would have locked him in the bathroom and thrown away the key.  But that's just me.  

Kisses to you for your lovely recs for my story. You are my fic-goddess.  



Author's Response:

Come on over, I have a cigarette for you!

Happy times in the bathroom are just one of his many specialties....

I love and accept all kisses from my crazy-hot FicWife  :)

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Mothers and Lovers

Lovely!  I've had a smile on my face for every chapter of this story - thanks so much :)

Can't wait to find out from Georgeousward what he was talking about with his father.

Achilles

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