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Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Something More Important
Glad she is recovering, she went through a lot. Great chapter. I loved it. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: jenidig (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Something More Important
you know, i wonder what edward was doing. i'm sure there is something there. like, in the beginning i thought that maybe edward owned the whole company and maybe that was why he was so secretive about himself. but then, she video conferenced with the person. idk, lol. i'm just a little confused about edward. i feel like something is off. can you just tell me if i missed some detail about this and set me straight? lol. sorry :) btw, greeeeat chap
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Something More Important
Can't wait until the next chapter
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Something More Important
You're making it sound like it's big deal that Mike's coming over to visit her. I don't think we should read too much into though the ending of this chapter is making it a big deal. ??????
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 05:58 PM · On: The Jacket
God who wouldn't want Edward taking them up against a wall? It was fab how you wrote it. Certainly didn't disappoint. Can understand Bella getting upset at his "joke", but glad they made up quickly. Intensity much! Great stuff, gonna read more now.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Something More Important
I got a giggle about the girls making fun of the sparkly body powder. Hehe. I have this very funny ad for 'Sparkle Peen' running through my head -- a lovely addition to any Valentine's Day celebration!
I love seeing you at the top of my favorites queue. (Who doesn't like seeing you on top, right?)
MWAH!!!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 08:14 PM · On: The Buzzing
In case you respond (without success) to that PM, I changed my email notification address and don't have access to the Forums till I get it approved.
Heat and ice for that carpal tunnel. And an anti-inflammatory. LOL.
Reviewer: Whitney Love (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 12:51 PM · On: The Buzzing
Great chapter. He did save her in a way. I'm glad they have each other. They are truly wonderful together.
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 08:57 PM · On: The Buzzing
Mmmmm the lovely Edward. I think that I would really like to hear an EPOV for this particular chappy! I can only imagine how he would be flipping out about her a) being late b) not answering her phone c) finally hearing her voice and not knowing where she is and d) finding her crumpled body on the ground. That I think would be an angsty filled cacophany!
I hate to think what kind of injuries Bella sustained - but I think that Edward will be a very good nurse! xxx
Reviewer: mydirtysecret (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 08:44 PM · On: The Buzzing
Love it :)
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:53 PM · On: The Jacket
I dont think anything is better than Edward having me up against a wall,lol. Great story, you are doing an awesome job!!!
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:20 PM · On: The Buzzing
Another great chapter! Can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:06 PM · On: The Buzzing
I REALLY AM ENJOYING THIS STORY
GREAT WRITTING
HOPE THEY CATCH THE GUY
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:12 AM · On: The Buzzing
Nicely written - still want to know what happened after he got her phone call ;)
Achilles
Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:20 AM · On: The Buzzing
Thank God she is ok - I'm a bit confused about the saving part though - was it Edward on the phone? The love in this chapter just wrapped me up and left me fuzzy and warm, so thank you for that
Reviewer: amber133 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:19 AM · On: The Buzzing
what a sweet update. i love this story
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 08:28 PM · On: The Buzzing
he saved her. and he stayed. I love that.
Reviewer: gabyweasley (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 08:16 PM · On: The Buzzing
wow.
your amazing.
just saying.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 07:58 PM · On: The Buzzing
I already read this, but I had to read it again-- just because it was there-- and I'm terribly glad I did. The idea of Alice and Edward conspiring together is just delicious. I mean, the trouble those two could cook up!!
Loved it!!
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 05:43 PM · On: The Longest Day
Oh I want Edward to come to the rescue!!! Please make that happen......please?
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 03:35 PM · On: The Longest Day
omg
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 02:10 PM · On: The Longest Day
So is Jake the attacker??????
Reviewer: iamcuterthanu (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:51 PM · On: The Longest Day
OMG I cant belive you just left it like that!! I'm totally plugging this story in my next chapter! :)
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:02 AM · On: The Longest Day
I think I love this chapter the best! The dirty text messages are perfect.
But the best part is the way you wrote the attack with such suspense-brilliant!
I'm so happy to ride your coattails ficwife. I'll check your commas and whatever else you need.
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 04:29 AM · On: The Longest Day
Ooh drama - I know she'll be alright but will it be Protectorward or Jane that finds her. Oh god and will the bastard have done anything more to her? poor thing if he has :(
Much better than the last chapter - keep it going.
Achilles
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