OMG!!! are you gonna post the next chapters por favor i need to know what happens haa...great story xxx

NOOOOOOOOO

i actually cried. i cannot even REMEMBER the last time i cried reading a story, and bella telling edward to leave made me cry. i totally loved everything up to that...but hey-whats an author without cliffies and making people cry??

oh E isnt gonna like this

Great chapter!

Well...  that sucks for her.  I think as women, we often feel that the world isn't fair.  And in a lot of cases, it isn't.  Yet, what we must realize is that we are responsible for different things in life just as men are responsible for others.  But because of how long the whole unfairness thing's been going on...  we take a lot of pride in our independence, which isn't always a good thing.  The other thing is that too many people put work as a higher priority over things that should be more important such as relationships.  Work wil always be work.  It's there 24/7, 7 days a week, even after we die...  work goes on.  Relationships though aren't.  Someone once told me that in order to make a relationship happy, one has must put his/her significant other's happiness above their own and vice versa...  in other words, it requires sacrifice without resentment.  If both parties live that way, everything will work and each will forget about themselves since the other is fulfilling their happiness.  It seems like they've gotta to learn that the hard way.

best chapter ever, and i do believe you have the best edward yet.

Well - that was some hot and posessive action! 

Michael comes across all sweet and caring but I just can't shake the thought that he really wants more than friendship with Bella.  Coming to her house sealed the deal for me - I am on high Mike alert now! 

This is the reason I think that Edward is so pissed about the trip.  He knows what Mike is up to and he thinks that Bella is being taken advantage of.  Perhaps Edward could go with her?  Then he could not only look after her but also satisify his own posessive nature.  - and ward of Mike..........

Still love my Darcyward, even though he is being a little ass at the moment. xxx

not disappointed. damn good lemon, loved it.

Oh no trouble in bella land. When it rains it pours. So now all she needs is Mike to hit on her while Edward shows up to apologize......... :)

Mike Newton?  Bloody Mike Newton!  That little shady man I do not trust, he is up to something and I know that he is after Bella!  Thank goodness that Alice is there, she will be able to recognise his shitfyness immediately. 

Now, Edward.  What is he not telling Bella?  Something else has gone down and he is with holding from her - my guess is that is has something to do with James.  Even if he doesn't have a key, he knows where she lives and he is bound to want revenge.

Thanks for the update xxx

Huh - the nerve of Michael Newtown when he's been having all those sex dreams about her as if she's his possession!  A great chapter - I'm so glad to see that Bella is on the mend and Edward's care and attentiveness is so sweet! x

Great chapter!

Great chapter!