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Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Mistakes and Misapprehension

BELLA OWES EDWARD BIG TIME LOL



Author's Response:

She pays him back....I promise!

Thanks for the review!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Mistakes and Misapprehension

Glad it was just a misunderstanding.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for the review!

Yeah, misunderstanding might be a slight understatement.

When I was writing this chapter, I kept asking myself what I would have done.  I don't know how much different it would have been for me.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: pril (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Full Disclosure

I can't believe you left us hanging like that!!!



Author's Response:

I know...right!  Sorry for the cliffy, but it had to happpen.  I'm a slave to my outline...LOL!  Hope you're liking the story so far.  I promise...it only gets better from here....

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Full Disclosure

this is so good. i can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I promise...there is more to come!

Seriously...thanks for the review!

It made me smile  :)

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Full Disclosure

Where is Edward?

Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Edward's whereabouts are a mystery right now...but all will be revealed.

The next chapter is all ready to be submitted for validation.  It should be up sometime early next week.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Full Disclosure

Their chemistry together is amazing.  I can't believe you left it like that, now I am wondering what is going on.  LOL.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm glad you're liking the chemistry between them.  Sometimes it's hard to get that across in words.  Yeah, I know the cliffy sucks...but, really, it was the only place to stop the chapter.

See you next time!

Happy Thanksgiving!!!!!!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Old Friends and New Ones

nothing would be better then E stroking your leg.....well, I guess I could think of a few other things that included him lol

great  job



Author's Response:

I know...right!

Hey, thanks for the review!  I love each one you've given me!

xoxo,

cosmogir;7481

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Old Friends and New Ones

this story is so good. please update soon. thanks



Author's Response:


Thanks so much for the wonderful compliment!

Thanks as well for the review!  They make me giddy  :)

I will be uppdating shortly...the next chapter is ready to be sent off for validation!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Old Friends and New Ones

Woo Hoo!!!  Hot, hot, and more hot.....love it!!  Gotta run-goin to see New Moon!!!  FINALLY!!!!  Update sooooon!!!  Please??

Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Old Friends and New Ones

Woo Hoo!!!  Hot, hot, and more hot.....love it!!  Gotta run-goin to see New Moon!!!  FINALLY!!!!  Update sooooon!!!  Please??



Author's Response:

Please...go see New Moon!  I saw it last night at midnight, plus, again today!  It was freaking awesome!

This chapter was a little on the spicy side!  Just a touch.  *wink*

Thanks for the review...I really appreciate it so much!

See you next time!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Old Friends and New Ones

Stumbled upon this story today and am really enjoying it!  I feel "angst" ahead?----keep writing & I'll keep reading!

 

CosmoGirl---I love doing laundry but do not like to house clean----wish we were neighbors so that we could help each other out! ;)

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you stumbled upon my little storry!  As for what's coming up next...

Well, I believe that real life has a bit of everything.  I'm trying to write Bella and Edward in real life.

Well, as real as you can be in a fictional story.  LOL

We should be neighbors Daisy!  I don't know what it is about laundry...LOL! 

I just hate it with a passion!  (Notice, no one ever write Bella and Edward doing anything like housework or laundry.  I guess it's not sexy enough!)

Thanks for the review!  I cherish them all!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: alt (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Old Friends and New Ones

I'm hooked!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad you're hooked!  I'm totally hooked too. 

It's been fun to write these characters.  I like where they have taken me so far.

Thanks for reviewing!  It really makes me smile!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Old Friends and New Ones

That was so hooot!!!

Please update soon

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I liked this one too!  It was sweet and hot...LOL  And, I love me some Alice!

Thank you for the review!  I really appreciate the feedback.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Old Friends and New Ones

Just love the chemistry between them.



Author's Response:

  I don't think you can have a Bella/Edward story without crazy chemistry!  LOL  They are quite hot together though, even I have to admit that myself.

Thanks for the review!  I really love them all so much!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: jparker160 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 04:03 PM · On: The Jacket

I think I need a cigarette!!!  Btw, thank you for having Bella be able to express herself during sex other than saying "Please" all the time.  In all the other stories I've read, that's all she seems to be able to communicate....  You're fabulous!!!  Update soon??



Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderfully sweet review!  You make me smile and giggle!

I think I might have had a cigarette after I wrote that too!!!!

Yeah, Bella is definitely a strong woman in my story.  She's very driven and knows what she wants.  She's not one to back down from anything...which we saw in this chapter.

Definitely updating soon...next chapter is ready to be sent off for validation.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: dcook78 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Edward and the Downward Dog

So loving this story so far. On to read this next chapter.  :)

 

Dee



Author's Response:

I love this story too!  Thank you for the review!  It makes me so happy!  If you liked this chapter...I think you're going to love the next!

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 02:36 AM · On: The Jacket

I love it. Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for loving this story!  I love it too!  I have enjoyed writing it and I look forward to exploring these characters.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 09:22 PM · On: The Jacket

Nothing would be better than Edward taking u against  a wall lol

nice chapter



Author's Response:

I agree about Edward and the wall...Sadly, my husband does not.  LOL

So, tell me...after reading the chapter, do you think Bella is a slut?

Thanks for the review!  They really do make me happy.

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481

Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 08:04 PM · On: The Jacket

A great first lemon.  Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

I really was nervous when I wrote this chapter.

I hope you like what's coming next  :)

xoxo,

cosmogirl7481 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Mr. Darcy Mr. Cullen

I really love this story. On that note, don't let her sleep with him on first date LOL. The build up is so much better and I just don't like a slutty Bella LOL.



Author's Response:

Talk to me about this after you read chapter 5  :)

PS

I don't think Bella's a slut!  I promise, I know. 

Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Mr. Darcy Mr. Cullen

Wow, I just love the chemistry between them.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Yeah, I'm all about the chemistry  :)

Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Mr. Darcy Mr. Cullen

Woohoo---this is hot!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  This was actually one of my favorite chapters to write!

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Mr. Darcy Mr. Cullen

I LOVE YOUR STORY.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I love this story too!  I've been kicking it around in my head for a while now, and I finally decided to just give it a shot and write it!

Thanks for the review!  I love them all so much!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Edward and the Downward Dog

Interesting reunion.  I enjoyed that Bella tried to stay in work mode when talking to Edward.  I am glad that they were able to reconnect.  Looking forward to the date!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I like that Bella stayed in work mode as much as possible too.  Her job is the most important thing in her life.  I sucked at responding to this review quickly, but I hope you've had a chance to read the date chapter.  It posted last week.

Thanks for the review!  I love them all!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Edward and the Downward Dog

keep it coming



Author's Response:

I promise to keep it coming!

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