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Reviewer: SyrenPrincess (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Who's The Boss?
NOOOOOO!!!! you cant end it like that!!!! oh that sucks....lol....guess ill just have to keep reading
Author's Response: Sorry...it does add to the drama and suspense though...no?
I definitely hope that you do keep on reading!
Thank you so much for the review!
Hugs,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: hopeless_romantic (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Who's The Boss?
What? Why?
Author's Response: I love your response!
It's totally the same one I would have!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Who's The Boss?
Emmett? Please tell me that it was Emmett - now please don't tell me that Edward was with him!!!! Fuck - I knew she should have called him, just to let him know what was going on. Aaarrrrgggghhhhh!
Loving the story -
update soon please! xx
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see.....
She wasn't doing anything wrong though.
Maybe she'll be okay :)
Thanks for all the reviews!
You kick ass!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Who's The Boss?
What is going on? Update soon!!!
Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Who's The Boss?
What is going on? Update soon!!!
Author's Response: I know...you've gotta hate cliffies!
Sorry about that! *giggles*
Thanks for the review!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Who's The Boss?
omg, i wonder what happened, who she saw. i can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
I love them all!!!!!
What would a good story be without a little heart-fail?
Hugs,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Mistakes and Misapprehension
Beautiful letter - I was wondering if she had somehow missed it.
I love that Jasper was so defensive of Bella - or should I say Alice. I think that boy will always be beautiful. I am a massive fan of Jasper! And the hot bath..... well you know that Bella and Edward have to take a dip together at some stage;) xxx
Author's Response: Can I tell you? Writing that letter was one of my favorite parts of this story so far!
I freaking love him!
Yeah...Jasper was awesome in this chapter!
I haven't done a bath or shower scene...yet.
You never know what's coming up in the future!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Mr. Darcy Mr. Cullen
I love that he called her straight away! They are both trying so hard so slow things down........... ha!
Author's Response: I loved that too!
The date was one of my favorite chapters to write.
You keep reviewing...I'll keep writing!
Thanks again!
xoxoo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Edward and the Downward Dog
Oooooo - that is so sweet! I was hoping that the customer was Edward! Yum, yum, yum, can't wait to see how the date goes!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you're liking the story so far. I think you'll like the actual date :)
I love me some Edward in this story!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Everything and Nothing
That was so hot. Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!
It was a freaking hot chapter to write!
I think I smoked like a million ciggies on that one! LOL
Thanks!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Everything and Nothing
so freakin hott!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so!
It was kind of steamy when I wrote it :)
Thanks for the review...I love them all!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: mcnavy (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Everything and Nothing
love your lemons!
Author's Response: I either love writing them...or they make me crazy nervous!
I loved writing this one...or two, rather.
LOL
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Everything and Nothing
Love it
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
xoxo, cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Everything and Nothing
loved it
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review!
I'm so glad you loved it!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Everything and Nothing
Thanks for the shout out, Cosmo. I love that you devoted the necessary time to describe Edward's glorious cock. Mmmm. Thank you for making this educational as well-I took some notes from Bella on how to give a stellar BJ.
Hottest line:
"You made me so wet I was sloppy."
Keep on writing your lovely prose. I'm here waiting.
Author's Response: Yeah, well...you know. Somebody had to take the time to describe his glorious cock. And, not for nothing...his glorious cock would me me "sloppy" too!
Thanks for the review!
Kisses!
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Mistakes and Misapprehension
Wow. Loved Edward's note. He is an 'f'-ing saint to put up with her emo sh*t.
Favorite line: "I was inside you last night, after all." So hot.
You are awesome.
Author's Response: I loved writing that note! I thought about it forever. Seriously, I wrote like 5 different drafts and they were either too sweet or too dirty. I tried to balance the whole f*ckhot, dirty Edward with Mr. Darcy because that's really what we all want.
And that line...well, what can I say? That line is my own personal fantasy. I want nothing more than for my husband to think that there is nothing better than that!
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Full Disclosure
Oh, the drama. Your lemons are super hot, but without the corny repetition. Favorite line:
"The way my name sounds on your mouth...It's too much."
Author's Response: Lemons make me super nervous. I totally have panic attacks when I write them. I mean, how many ways can you say he licked my pussy? LMAO And there are only so many words that you can use to descibe a cock. I'm just sayin'. I loved that line too! It's like you get to totally live out your own personal "Edward Fantasy" when you write.
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Old Friends and New Ones
Poor Alice. Having to take one for the team by hooking up with Jasper. Ha ha. Favorite part-the dialogue between Alice and Bella.
Author's Response: Yeah, I loved the interaction between Alice and Bella too! I might take one for the team for Jasper. Nah, Edward has ruined me for all other men. Even all the Cullen men.
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:17 PM · On: The Jacket
I needed a cold drink and a cigarette after that lemon. Thank god Bella came to to her senses and got her man. How do you let that hotness walk out the door?
Author's Response: Yeah...I think I smoked a pack after that chapter! She was so all over the place in that chapter. He totally said the wrong thing and pushed her biggest button. Poor Edward...he either says the absolute best thing or the worst possible thing! I love him!
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Mr. Darcy Mr. Cullen
Grey suit, white shirt=f#ckhot. Favorite part is when she tells him what type of man he is. Genius descriptions, of course.
Author's Response: That was actually my favorite part to write! I loved her in that moment!
Yeah...the grey suit and white shirt...totally from Rob's GQ! He was so hot in those pics!
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Edward and the Downward Dog
Sigh. To have Edward walk into my place of business. Stellar. To have him ask me on a date. Priceless. Love your character development and story pacing.
Author's Response: See...now you're the one making my head big! *Grinning*
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Ambition Is Hot
I love your vivid descriptions of her room and her personal items. You also had some hot solo action! That's what I call versatile.
Author's Response: Well, you know, a girl's gotta be 'versatile'...especially when she's not getting any. LMAO!
Reviewer: marvar (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Cocktails and Conversation
Bella has some willpower, doesn't she? I would've pulled that man into the car. Intriguing story. Love reading Bella's thoughts so I can gain insight.
Author's Response: I know...right? I would have totally pulled him into the car too! (But, I would be a total whore when it came to Edward.) Just sayin'...
Reviewer: Daisy Mae (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Mistakes and Misapprehension
Edward---(sigh!) This relationship is happening so fast that one can't help but think that the other "shoe" is going to fall soon. Or is that just my paranoid self saying that?! It seems too good to be true and so quickly. Enjoyed the chapter and can't wait for the next one!
Great story development so far---keep on writing! ;)
Author's Response: I know what you mean about the 'too good to be true'.
But, isn't Edward always a little 'too good to be true'?
I hope you'll hang in there with me as the story continues.
Thanks so much for the review!
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Mistakes and Misapprehension
great chapter. please update soon. thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Next chapter has been sent off for validation....
xoxo,
cosmogirl7481
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