Dudeeeee it's gonna be tough for both of them. Glad e knows. B u really should maybe strip instead lol. I really don't know how theyll get over this. I have a feeling the only way is for c to pass on-which is what I think will happen in the end.

Very cute - they are both as excited as 2 teenagers (just with grown up jobs)!

Awww....poor Charlie. I wonder if he had a stroke, since he didn't speak at all? Sounds like Bella will be busy in LA with Victoria! Loving the story!

Quite interesting job for Bella! Never saw her in this role ....enjoying your story!

He is gonna be a hell of shocked. I think at this poijt his feelings are deeper for her than that, not to mention I have faith in you and you wouldnt dare leave us like that. I love this story poor Bella, can we say AWKWARD. Edward is a good guy like his father. Hurry hurry pls with that update. i accidently bit my nail when I saw your cliffee, aww man..

Cliffie! Please update soon! Really good though!

Omfg u stopped there!!!!!! Dude I'm ok with the angst or with the happy e, but wow I can't fucking wait for the nxt chapter. U better FUCKINH update soon!!

AAAHHHHHHHHH! I cant wait for the next chapter!

you can't just end it there!!!! well, i guess you could, since you're the author...although i have to say, i was really looking forward to reading Edward's reaction in this chapter.  And since you want to hear from your readers about our opinions about his reaction, I honestly hope that you doing break them up or tht Edward goes into his emo, pissy, grudge-holding version of himsel that has been way too prevelant in many other fics when hie gets mad.  I don't think he'll handle it well, but I hope that he's mature about it and talks about it with Bella rather than just blowing up and angry.  I can't wait until next time!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh damn stright to the point i love that bitch omg i have been waiting for this

I can't think of a better way for her to have told him. You did SO good!

In RL, of course, he'd dump her. He'd want to have sex with her first, but he'd surely dump her.

I know her motivation is pure. She's doing what she has to do. But you can't explain than motivation when someone recognizes you in a bar or on the street or in church.

But unless these two are willing to move to Europe to live, I just don't see how this can turn out well.

We're a very Puritanical society. In France, Italy, Denmark or just about any other civilized country, it might be unusual, but no big deal.

God, we're such hypocrites.

 

>

I feel so bad for her, her self-doubt. She likes him so much  I really hope he does not let her down. Great story, cant wait to see what happens next.