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Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 15: Discussions.
This is going to be one hell of a party, I tell you what.
I love how now the girls are waking up and smelling the coffee. Something is fishy in Forks and they'd better watch their sexy backs.
Ta
Master of teh Boot
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Yup, they should really keep an eye on the guys and a few of the others.
Chelle
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 14: Poolside Fun.
I have to say that you make the best sex scenes. I feel like taking a dip in the pool now.
Ta
Master of the Boot
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. The smut is so much fun to write.
Chelle
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Friendly Games
I thought this chapter was hiarious. It's like the original scene but it's got its own fresh flavour to it.
Things are better with three guys anyways.
Ta
Master of teh Boot
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, things are certainly more interesting with three guys around.
Chelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 17: Floating.
You are so evil I swear I am downloading this movie soon if you don't start esplaining:::in my best Ricky accent from I love Lucy:: hehehe post again soon!
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. The movie is really worth watching anyway, it's a fantastic movie.
Chelle
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 17: Floating.
oh i hope you update sooner rather then later!!!!
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Things have settled down now that college is over, so the updates should be a lot more often.
CHelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 16: Party
I love the free spirited chap they needed a little fun but I still want to know WTF is going on damn me and my lack of knolwedge in all thinsg movie related hehehe
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Don't worry, we are getting closer and closer to the explanations.
Chelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: Discussions.
great work but still no answer grumble grumble hehehe!!! post again soon
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. The answers are coming, but first some more smut I believe.
Chelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 14: Poolside Fun.
SQUEEE!!! Jasper has magic fingers muah hahahah That was awesome holy crow go Alice!!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 13: Friendly Games
Great Chap I really want to go watch the movie now LOL but I decided I can watch it after we are finished with the story. It is totally original to me and I like it! I can't wait to see what happens next but I am looking forward to it! Post again soon!
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Morning After.
Nice way to wake up. With Edward I mean. That's how I'd like to be able to treat a lady :)
But there was also some good plot development here. This chapter was over all too quickly and I crave the next one.
Ta
Master of teh Boot
Author's Response: Hi
thanks for your review. I would love to wake up to that every morning as well.
Chelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Morning After.
Squee!!! Waking up like that gives you more reason to go back to sleepf or a chance to wake up again!!!
Great Chapter I am so glad you posted so soon!!! Hope youhave agreat Holiday weekend!!!!
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Chelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Morning After.
Squee!!! Waking up like that gives you more reason to go back to sleepf or a chance to wake up again!!!
Great Chapter I am so glad you posted so soon!!! Hope youhave agreat Holiday weekend!!!!
Reviewer: martha (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Morning After.
ohhhh...Edward in the am!!!sigh!!
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed it. More smut up next.
Chelle
Reviewer: Alice-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Library encounters
hi
man and here I thought the ExB smut was good... this was seriously HOT!!!!!
awesome chapter!
Alice
Reviewer: Alice-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Masen Mansion
hello
I love Edward and Bella Smut. and the way you wrote it made it fucking awesome. I can't wait to find out what Alice and Rose did... you are going to write about that right?
oh and I love the idea of the guys being horny devils. it just makes everything that much more interesting.
Alice
Reviewer: Alice-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Royally Screwed
Hi
this was a good first chapter and I like how you included the title in it.
I really like the Witches of Eastwick so I am looking forward to your Twilightificated version of it.
Alice
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 11: Realisations
Fantastic chapter. Things started off so nicely. Then things take a sinister turn. It's not a hugely siniister turn but it's there. Ouch, bones break. Poor ?Lauren. Sort of.
Damn those small town ladies. That's the reason I live in the city.
Things will get interesting, and I can't wait for it :)
Ta
Master of the Boot
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Chelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 11: Realisations
I was spo excited for anupdate an now I am puzzled... Great Chapter but huh....This story is rather peculiar..... This whole wishing or hoping is confussing because where ahd the brothers gone to? Why were they struggling to remember their eye color?
Who wouldn't wish for some kind of harm to Lauren shes a bitch! I know thats the point but to accuse sweet innocent Rose when it was Bella with the wishful thinking.. hehehe Post again soon I am getting more questions then answers added to my list hahaha
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. It might not make much sense if you haven't seen the movie, however, things do get cleared up later.
Chelle
Reviewer: SweetRia (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 11: Realisations
Good chapter - a little short, but good none the less. Can't wait for the next one - really liking this story.
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Chelle
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 10: What Goes Around.
I never got to this part of the movie so I'm not sure it's in there, but it was one hell of a read. It's like nothing i've ever read before. They should hire you to do an adaptation of Witches of eastwick in book form. :D
Rocking baby, just rocking.
TA
Master of the Boot
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. I don't think it's quite as dramatic in the film, one of the advantages of writing first person, but it is in there. Of course, wiht it being Lauren it is that much sweeter. Glad you are enjoying it, there is still quite a bit of drama and smutty goodness to come.
Chelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 10: What Goes Around.
LMAO!!! Great Chapter sniffle like Rosalie's car ride a little too short sniffle! Can't wait to see how the party pans out!! Post again soon!
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review, I would have to check, but I think she gets to drive the car again.
Chelle
Reviewer: martha (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 10: What Goes Around.
Teehee...don't we all love poetic justice!! Wish it were so in real life some time!
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Chelle
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 9: First Encounters
Looking forward to the party and I am all about a little self esteemed Alice walking tall! Great Job post ahain soon! The suspense is killing me I just have to know where these boys came from and how the hell!
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 8: Musical Magic
Don't stop now, I'm having way too much fun!
One criticism though, I missed the flaming chello from the movie. Otherwise it's just great to see Alice such a shell of her usual self.
Ta
Master of the boot
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review. Yes, the flaming Cello had to be cut, as I didn't want the house to burn down and it would have been a bit of a buzz kill to have to stop and put the fire out. Anyway, we get to see more of Alice soon.
Chelle
Reviewer: Alice983 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Musical Magic
wow. I just found your story cause u was lookin for something new to read. ive noticed its the same every chapter. who are you really? just your average horny little devil. I LOVE it!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi
Thanks for your review, glad you are enjoying it so far. The reason that it is is the same in every chapter wiht that line is because that is a line from the movie. Next chapter should be up soon.
Chelle
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