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Reviewer: Rosa33 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

OMG...This chapter is so HOT HOT HOT....

As usual though...=)

Thank God i have the time to read this chapter today...amazing,love it so much Scilla.....

So did you see Mr Pattinson?  O_O how lucky you are,of course you live in LA his late home town...oh dear,i´ll keep on reading and letting you know about it...

Take care ..much love xxx


Author's Response:

Hi Rosa, thanks so much. So happy you enjoyed it. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Wow, hun! I'm crying right now... and that last line was so beautiful "I spent the next few hours sitting on the warm sand, staring at the Pacific, shedding enough tears to fill a thousand oceans." *sobs* I  don't know how I'm gonna make it wiyhout, I mean how Marisa will make it without, yeah...that's what I meant...*cough*

Oh's nos, effin STOLI THIEF!!! lol ...yeah, so much for Tom knowing Karate ;)

Thx for another great chapter Scilla! ¤hugs¤ <3

Author's Response:

bbbee, thanks for writing in detail what you liked about the chappy. I really appreciate it. That Stoli thief must be caught, darn it! Thanks for reviewing bb!

Reviewer: LynnO (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

omg, i'm actually shedding tears over here....i can't wait for the next chapter, please write fast!!  (it must be really empowering to know that you can bring complete strangers to tears just with your words...)

Author's Response:

Wow, Lynn, I'm floored. Thank you. I cried while writing it, so I'm glad it moved you as well. Ch. 33 is done, I'm just editing it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

That was so fucking hot, start to finish. Freckles, moles, peach pie a'la mode....still trying to quiet my breathing. And well shit....that would explain why we haven't seen the Stoli in a while!! Love the tenderness and safety Rob feels with Marisa, they are truly each others better half. Can't wait for their reunion in Paris....oo la la!! Great job again, scilla---luv you and your mad talents, ma hOOr!!


Author's Response:

Spunkaroo, what a great summary of the whole chapter. Thrilled that you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

The love making in your chapters are just great. You sure know how to turn your readers on.I will be waiting for your next chapter.

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoy the lemons. I love writing them. Next chappy coming up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

So THIS is the infamous "good bye" passion which goes on and on!!!!!  "Come already!!!"  I see where you worked in your little obsession with a certain young man's freckles... loving it!  But I am wondering who the Mystery woman" is???  Hmmmmmm.

Author's Response:

Hi Alexandra, so glad you reviewed. Yep, this is the chappy where I was yelling at Rob and Marisa to "come already," but clearly they didn't listen to me and kept going and going, lol. Yeah, I love me some freckles. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ihopatz (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Bitch took the black Stoli?! NOT COOL! The end of the chapter was so sad, but the f*ckhawt, peaches in between more than make up for it! Excellent as always scilla!

Author's Response:

Bitch did take the black Stoli, lol. Can you believe it? So glad you enjoyed the chapter bb. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour


Author's Response:

I know. I'm sad too. But keep reading to find out what happens. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Gulp..I hate seperations and always worry about what's gonna happen. It doesn't help with your talk of cliffhangers next chapter!! LOLOLOL

This story is awesome. And I'm sure he has alot of stalking stories. I adore the guy, but could never stalk him.That goes beyond healthy. And we all know how much he fears it. Hopefully people will leave real Rob alone to live his life in peace. I know, doesn't seem likely.

Author's Response:

There will be lots of twist and turns, so hold on tight. Yeah, Rob being stalked is a scary prospect. Let's hope it's not happening in real life. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

great story - cannot wait for updates.  Will def vote for you in Aug

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much! I really appreciat it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: christiner (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

I love this story and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response:

Hi there, thanks so much. That mean a lot. Please keep reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

So creepy.  Hope he doesn't have a stalker in rl.  I love the ring Marisa gave Rob.  Really cool.  Mmmmm, ice cream.  I know what I would have wanted to lick it off of.  Eight weeks is a long time. Can't wait to see how they handle Skype.  Should be fun!

Author's Response:

Hi pirate, I hope he doesn't have a stalker in real life either. Scary. I'm so glad you liked the ring. It's pretty unique. Peach pie a la mode is always good, right? Skype and the eight weeks coming right up. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: silvervolvogirl (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour


Author's Response:

Thank you. So glad you enjoyed the chappy! Please keep reviewing.

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Three words, sweetie, to describe this chapter: scarey, hot and sad!

Stalkers are scarey! I know because I used one in my RPF about Kellan.

The loving hot sex in this chapter made me squirm!

The sadness of separation always brings a lump to my throat and tears to my eyes! Well done!

I was one of your nominators in the Reality Rebellion awards! I REALLY love this story!

Please hurry, darlin', because I need MORE PLEASE!

Love, Ellen xx

Author's Response:

Hi Ellen, I am so grateful that you nominated me for the awards. It means so much, so thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed all aspects of the chappy. Ch. 33 is finished and I'm editing it now. Hopefully it won't be too much longer. Thanks again! Hugs.

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

Fabulous...the whole conversation about the peach pie!! I was absolutely dying laughing. I could almost picture it in my head! That was so hilarious! Great story so far...very good!!!

Author's Response:

So happy you enjoyed it and it made you laugh. I hope you keep reading and reviewing. Thanks again!

Reviewer: nfturgeon (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

Damn hot Baby!

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

Great...the neighbor coming over. I'd probably react the same way: oh, well, thanks and sorry....then slam the door to get back to Rob!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again. I hope you stick with me. OTI has UST, lemons, angst, laughs and then some plot twists arrive. Thanks again! Hugs.

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 15--How To Have A Proper English Breakfast

Awesome. The armpit part was a bit freaky. Overall, it was awesome, though! Peaches...

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally

Good Lord Almighty!! It was definitely worth the wait!! Awesome!! :)

Author's Response:

Hi GRLTRP, welcome! So happy you're reading OTI, and especially that you're reviewing. I'm glad the chapter was satisfying, lol. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Loved the premiere, I think you caught the energy perfectly. But they were being awfully dangerous in the elevator, still gotta love it though. Love the continual portrayal of family and friends.

Hmmm who is the mysterious stalker, Stacy or girl #2.

Author's Response:

Thanks bb. Well, as you know as a fellow Angelena, premieres are pretty crazy. TC1, who was there, helped me a lot with the details. As for the elevator, yep, Marisa's very passionate and daring about sex and I guess Rob's going with it. Who could blame him, right? Good guesses about the mystery woman...Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Big wet smooches.

Reviewer: nfturgeon (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

Gawd! I want to slap some sense into that woman! I'm obviously getting way too engrossed in this story... Thanks Scilla.

Author's Response:

So glad you're getting engrossed. I hope you keep reading to find out how OTI develops. Thanks so much for reviewing! Hugs.

Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

The last two chapters  Wow I'm breathless.You sure know how to turn  someone on with words' Thanks

Author's Response:

Breathless, wow, I like it! Thanks so much for reviewing, please keep it up, twss. Hugs.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

I loved cheeky, playful Rob mixed with some drunk Rob in there, that was so awesome, I was cracking up.

And you portrayed the family so nicely, that was super cool.

And you tricked me, I totally thought Rob was gonna try out his phone skills for the upcoming long time apart, but loved how he came over.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

So cute that he told his mom about her. Man, just say you love him already!

I noticed your note on the previous review, July 7th huh? So I am exactly 2 weeks younger than her.. well 4 years and 2 weeks :) But I do have the long brown hair and hazel (brown/green) eyes and am of Spanish descent, so close enough for me to put myself in her shoes.. yay me!

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 29--Trial By Fire

Well I think Marisa held her own pretty well against the trial. Although 8 weeks, how will they make it, lots of skyping I guess, huh?

I love the peach necklace, too cute.

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