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Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Three words, sweetie, to describe this chapter: scarey, hot and sad!

Stalkers are scarey! I know because I used one in my RPF about Kellan.

The loving hot sex in this chapter made me squirm!

The sadness of separation always brings a lump to my throat and tears to my eyes! Well done!

I was one of your nominators in the Reality Rebellion awards! I REALLY love this story!

Please hurry, darlin', because I need MORE PLEASE!

Love, Ellen xx



Author's Response:

Hi Ellen, I am so grateful that you nominated me for the awards. It means so much, so thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed all aspects of the chappy. Ch. 33 is finished and I'm editing it now. Hopefully it won't be too much longer. Thanks again! Hugs.

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

Fabulous...the whole conversation about the peach pie!! I was absolutely dying laughing. I could almost picture it in my head! That was so hilarious! Great story so far...very good!!!



Author's Response:

So happy you enjoyed it and it made you laugh. I hope you keep reading and reviewing. Thanks again!

Reviewer: nfturgeon (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

Damn hot Baby!

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

Great...the neighbor coming over. I'd probably react the same way: oh, well, thanks and sorry....then slam the door to get back to Rob!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again. I hope you stick with me. OTI has UST, lemons, angst, laughs and then some plot twists arrive. Thanks again! Hugs.

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 15--How To Have A Proper English Breakfast

Awesome. The armpit part was a bit freaky. Overall, it was awesome, though! Peaches...

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally

Good Lord Almighty!! It was definitely worth the wait!! Awesome!! :)



Author's Response:

Hi GRLTRP, welcome! So happy you're reading OTI, and especially that you're reviewing. I'm glad the chapter was satisfying, lol. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Loved the premiere, I think you caught the energy perfectly. But they were being awfully dangerous in the elevator, still gotta love it though. Love the continual portrayal of family and friends.

Hmmm who is the mysterious stalker, Stacy or girl #2.



Author's Response:

Thanks bb. Well, as you know as a fellow Angelena, premieres are pretty crazy. TC1, who was there, helped me a lot with the details. As for the elevator, yep, Marisa's very passionate and daring about sex and I guess Rob's going with it. Who could blame him, right? Good guesses about the mystery woman...Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Big wet smooches.

Reviewer: nfturgeon (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

Gawd! I want to slap some sense into that woman! I'm obviously getting way too engrossed in this story... Thanks Scilla.



Author's Response:

So glad you're getting engrossed. I hope you keep reading to find out how OTI develops. Thanks so much for reviewing! Hugs.

Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

The last two chapters  Wow I'm breathless.You sure know how to turn  someone on with words' Thanks



Author's Response:

Breathless, wow, I like it! Thanks so much for reviewing, please keep it up, twss. Hugs.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

I loved cheeky, playful Rob mixed with some drunk Rob in there, that was so awesome, I was cracking up.

And you portrayed the family so nicely, that was super cool.

And you tricked me, I totally thought Rob was gonna try out his phone skills for the upcoming long time apart, but loved how he came over.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

So cute that he told his mom about her. Man, just say you love him already!

I noticed your note on the previous review, July 7th huh? So I am exactly 2 weeks younger than her.. well 4 years and 2 weeks :) But I do have the long brown hair and hazel (brown/green) eyes and am of Spanish descent, so close enough for me to put myself in her shoes.. yay me!

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 29--Trial By Fire

Well I think Marisa held her own pretty well against the trial. Although 8 weeks, how will they make it, lots of skyping I guess, huh?

I love the peach necklace, too cute.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

I can't believe her parents were so unsupportive! I mean, I know they would be concerned about her, but still, it's her happiness at stake.

I love that Jude Law was flirting with her, so funny.

And "penis breath", snicker.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 27--The Beanie & The Sexpenders

Wow what a beotch! Incredible! At least Rob totally put her in her place, no ifs and or buts.

And yes, thank you very much for the beanie and the sexpenders and the cleanup, classic, LOL

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 26--Amor

oooh boy, I did not see that one coming, Kyle a girl, like a Kylie or something? I think I see the green eyed monster coming out of Marisa in the next chappie.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 25--...You. So much, so much.

Yay! Rob totally manned up and said it first, I love that. Only thing I found weird is such a huge house he has, how can that boy possibly upkeep it, we know he ain't a housekeeper. Maybe he gets one to come in once a month or something. lol.

I love the line "You found me when you were meant to find me" I feel that way with finding him and all the RAoR gals, the universe has a way of getting you what you need when you need it.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 23--Pattinson Manor

I loved the entrance into the manor, and I loved Rob's constant calling and devotion, even how he fell asleep right after, too cute.



Author's Response:

Thanks bb, so happy you're reviewing every chapter. It warms my heart. Muaaa.

Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Sorry I haven't stoped to review before This is great! I never write long reviews.You are real good I can see your story in my head.The sex parts are hot,hot. Thanks



Author's Response:

Yay memepam, so happy you reviewed. Please keep it up! Hugs.

Reviewer: FlorenA (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

Oh my gawd who is she!!!!!!!!!!!!! stacy? or the other one? he said he was with two other girls before marisa right? I want to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

As always thanks for the all the lemony fresh moments!



Author's Response:

Gracias Floren, good guesses. Keep reading to find out. Un beso.

Reviewer: LynnO (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 31--Lights, Camera, Oh, oh!

i'm loving this story...i adore rob.  please please update!  (if you posted, oh, say, 8 or 9 chapters at once i wouldn't complain!)  i read this all in one sitting and now i'm jonesing for more!!  thanks for all the time you put in on this.



Author's Response:

Hi Lynn, thanks so much! CH. 32 is ready, it's just awaiting validation by my beta. Keeping my fingers crossed for soon. But if it doesn't post by tomorrow, I think I may post an excerpt the upcoming chappy on the OTI forum. Go check it out in the Forums section of Twilighted under Other. Hugs.

Reviewer: FlorenA (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Oh Scilla you are SOFA KING FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

penis breath ROFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Yay Rob! I knew he would come through, and I guess I was right about him losing his phone. I almost cried as she was holding back the tears too.

So glad that they got back together and that Marisa has let her guard down. I worry that she will still get up in arms if something unexpected happens again.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 21--Stage 5 Acceptance

Hmm could I have been right? Could he have lost his phone and so just came over cause he couldn't find it? Has he been feeling like an idiot or been over thinking things?

I definitely am giving him the benefit of the doubt cause I want it to work out between them.

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 20--Stage 3 Anger, Stage 4 Depression

hmmm it is starting to make me think what Rob is playing, is he being flaky, did he lose his cell phone, is he showing his age? Can't wait to find out.

 

BTW, Jacyln Smith was my favorite Charlie's Angel too, I used to play Charlie's Angels with my friends and I always wanted to be Jacyln, hehe

Reviewer: naturaladdict (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 19--Stage 1 Denial, Stage 2 Bargaining

Being a Cancer, I totally have those worried thoughts and anxiousness about someone calling, and if that person was Rob, I would be feeling like her too.



Author's Response:

Hey bb. Glad you can relate to what Marisa's going through. And guess what? She's a Cancer too. Her birthday is July 7. And nope, you know I'm a Scorpio, so Marisa is not me, lol. I hope you read through the angst to get to the rest of the story. Muaaa.

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