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Reviewer: rtpgirl (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Okay. So, I'm worried about Rob's desperation at the airport. He obviuosly knows how much Marisa loves him. I know he'll miss her, but I feel like it's more than that. He knows more about this stalker than he's letting on doesn't he? Oh I hope nothing happens to Marisa while he's gone! *bites nails*

For the record, I think peach pie and vanilla icecream would be devine! *wink* <3 you babe!

Author's Response:

Hi bb, very perceptive of you, catching Rob's desperation. It may or may not have significance. Keep reading to find out. Peach pie and vanilla ice cream does sound yummy doesn't it? Nom, nom. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Awww. So sad for them.  Rob's line of " matter what...." makes me a bit nervous though.  What does he think is going to happen?

Author's Response:

Very perceptive of you NKubie, who knows what's going on in that crazy mind of Rob's. Keep reading to find out. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Stalker and Rob's Mum aside this would have to be one of the best chapters to this story. So full of love and need and wants. I think you have really hit your stride with this story. You have both characters written to perfection and the subplot is not OOT but actually believable and not a little too scary. Thank you for taking the time to write this and giving me the pleasure of waiting for the update and then running to the phone to read the next installment. I am going all fan girl on you. I don't think you authors get anywhere enough thanks for what you do all for free. I appreciate this immensely. Thanks again

Author's Response:

Wow, Kazbar, I'm floored by your kind words. Thanks so much, it means a lot. It's interesting because I do feel so comfortable writing Rob and Marisa now. It's nice. I do put a lot of work into my chapters, and it's great to know it doesn't go unnoticed. Thanks again!

Reviewer: lw5202 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour sure can write the heck out of a lemon!  Sad they are going to be separated. Hope rumors and misunderstandings don't cause any problems with the distance.  I was thinking the stalker would obviously know about Marisa--since she is a stalker!  And it seems the stalker would want to get rid of her competition! Hope Marisa sleeps with one eye open...  Thanks for the update! 

Author's Response:

So happy you appreciate the lemons! The separation is going to take some interesting turns. Very perctive of you to realize that the stalker would do what she does best and eventually know about Marisa. Keep reading to find out how this happens. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour


Such a great chapter. So sad they will be separated.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much Louise! Keep reading to find out how the separation pans out. Hugs back.

Reviewer: dmickey (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Oh Scilla, the sad goodbye and the lovely peaches before the goodbye. memorizing. I feel he is really in love and he really hated to go. I know Marisa will not wait the 8 wks and neither can I.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, bb. Glad you enjoyed it and that you felt what Rob was feeling. The eight weeks will be interesting. Keep reading to find out what happens. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! It's almost finished.

Reviewer: eyeonrob (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Scilla, I will be certain to vote for OTI. You are a beloved fellow hOOr and this story has a special place in my heart. I joked about the stalker being Kristen but now I'm thinking maybe it was the girl singer from the club that Rob took Marissa to. Not sure, though. I like this bit of mystery but hope that our dear RL HHH never has to go through the stalker nightmare. Asshole paps are enough, thank you very much. Sounds like the next chappie is going to be quite interesting. Can't wait!   

Author's Response:

Hi bb, Thanks for considering OTI, it means a lot. Good guesses about the stalker and yes stalkers are scary no matter what. Next chappy coming up soon. I'm editing it now. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Ojojoj (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Another great chappie of your story! And the reference to the Stoli-shirt, I truly love the way your mind works! A great mystery solved in the most perfect way. Lol. // Dr C

Author's Response:

Dr. C, glad you liked the Stoli part of the story. I couldn't resist, lol. Thanks so much for reviewing! Hugs.

Reviewer: Canyaceme (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

don't have anything to add just wanted to give you some appreciation for this story.  Love it!

Author's Response:

That's okay, I'll take the appreciation, just fine. It means so much. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jrivera (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Then again excellent chapter Scilla.  I am amazed and thrilled to have found this story.  After MOTU ended I guess I was kind of bored of all other stories but this one has me captivated since I bumped into it.  I love how you keep it more or less real and not overly unrealistic like others.  I hope that Marisa in the future can mold her schedule to Rob's so that they can see more of each other in the future.  I look forward to her visit to always romantic paris although I wouldn't be surprised if Rob goes bonkers and gets to LA first.  That would be a sign of some crazy crazy love. Anyway keep up the good work and I know from chapters notes that we are nowhere near the end and thats great news.  Un abrazo y felicidades por tu estupenda historia (Soy hispana de nacimiento).  Saludos.

Author's Response:

Wow, comparing OTI to MOTU is humbling to read. Thanks so much! Keep reading to find out whether Rob goes to L.A. or Marisa goes to Paris. Mil gracias!

Reviewer: Janners (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Sigh...I hate good-byes....sniff sniff!

Stalker is Kyle.  That's my prediction!

OK - Cookie!  Get writing!  Don't make me wait this long again!!!


Lurve you!

Author's Response:

Hi bb! I know, it was a sad goodbye, I cried while writing it. Good guess on the stalker, keep reading to find out. I'm already done writing ch. 33, just editing it now. Thanks for the support and for always reviewing. Lurve you back.

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

LOVE this story! And I am getting some new ideas! Anyway, every woman should have a man like Rob. It's not fair!

Author's Response:

So glad OTI gave you some new ideas. And, yes, you're right it's not fair, but hey, we can all dream, right? :) I appreciate you reviewing so much. Thank you!

Reviewer: Rosa33 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 30--Meet The Pattinsons

OMG...This chapter is so HOT HOT HOT....

As usual though...=)

Thank God i have the time to read this chapter today...amazing,love it so much Scilla.....

So did you see Mr Pattinson?  O_O how lucky you are,of course you live in LA his late home town...oh dear,i´ll keep on reading and letting you know about it...

Take care ..much love xxx


Author's Response:

Hi Rosa, thanks so much. So happy you enjoyed it. Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: bbbee (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Wow, hun! I'm crying right now... and that last line was so beautiful "I spent the next few hours sitting on the warm sand, staring at the Pacific, shedding enough tears to fill a thousand oceans." *sobs* I  don't know how I'm gonna make it wiyhout, I mean how Marisa will make it without, yeah...that's what I meant...*cough*

Oh's nos, effin STOLI THIEF!!! lol ...yeah, so much for Tom knowing Karate ;)

Thx for another great chapter Scilla! ¤hugs¤ <3

Author's Response:

bbbee, thanks for writing in detail what you liked about the chappy. I really appreciate it. That Stoli thief must be caught, darn it! Thanks for reviewing bb!

Reviewer: LynnO (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

omg, i'm actually shedding tears over here....i can't wait for the next chapter, please write fast!!  (it must be really empowering to know that you can bring complete strangers to tears just with your words...)

Author's Response:

Wow, Lynn, I'm floored. Thank you. I cried while writing it, so I'm glad it moved you as well. Ch. 33 is done, I'm just editing it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

That was so fucking hot, start to finish. Freckles, moles, peach pie a'la mode....still trying to quiet my breathing. And well shit....that would explain why we haven't seen the Stoli in a while!! Love the tenderness and safety Rob feels with Marisa, they are truly each others better half. Can't wait for their reunion in Paris....oo la la!! Great job again, scilla---luv you and your mad talents, ma hOOr!!


Author's Response:

Spunkaroo, what a great summary of the whole chapter. Thrilled that you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: memepam (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

The love making in your chapters are just great. You sure know how to turn your readers on.I will be waiting for your next chapter.

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoy the lemons. I love writing them. Next chappy coming up soon. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

So THIS is the infamous "good bye" passion which goes on and on!!!!!  "Come already!!!"  I see where you worked in your little obsession with a certain young man's freckles... loving it!  But I am wondering who the Mystery woman" is???  Hmmmmmm.

Author's Response:

Hi Alexandra, so glad you reviewed. Yep, this is the chappy where I was yelling at Rob and Marisa to "come already," but clearly they didn't listen to me and kept going and going, lol. Yeah, I love me some freckles. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ihopatz (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Bitch took the black Stoli?! NOT COOL! The end of the chapter was so sad, but the f*ckhawt, peaches in between more than make up for it! Excellent as always scilla!

Author's Response:

Bitch did take the black Stoli, lol. Can you believe it? So glad you enjoyed the chapter bb. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour


Author's Response:

I know. I'm sad too. But keep reading to find out what happens. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

Gulp..I hate seperations and always worry about what's gonna happen. It doesn't help with your talk of cliffhangers next chapter!! LOLOLOL

This story is awesome. And I'm sure he has alot of stalking stories. I adore the guy, but could never stalk him.That goes beyond healthy. And we all know how much he fears it. Hopefully people will leave real Rob alone to live his life in peace. I know, doesn't seem likely.

Author's Response:

There will be lots of twist and turns, so hold on tight. Yeah, Rob being stalked is a scary prospect. Let's hope it's not happening in real life. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

great story - cannot wait for updates.  Will def vote for you in Aug

Author's Response:

Wow, thanks so much! I really appreciat it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: christiner (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

I love this story and I can't wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response:

Hi there, thanks so much. That mean a lot. Please keep reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

So creepy.  Hope he doesn't have a stalker in rl.  I love the ring Marisa gave Rob.  Really cool.  Mmmmm, ice cream.  I know what I would have wanted to lick it off of.  Eight weeks is a long time. Can't wait to see how they handle Skype.  Should be fun!

Author's Response:

Hi pirate, I hope he doesn't have a stalker in real life either. Scary. I'm so glad you liked the ring. It's pretty unique. Peach pie a la mode is always good, right? Skype and the eight weeks coming right up. Thanks for reviewing!

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