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Reviewer: bellaval (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

EXCELLENT, as usual.  I love your Rob and was talking to my friend the other day about it.  We agreed that yours is the best Rob.  Marissa needs to get over to Paris - I agree with her sister 'you only live once'.  As far as the missing condoms are concerned, I am inclined to think that one of his friends took them.  I know your Rob wouldn't need them in Paris.  Just the best, best story and I want you to get her over there soon!!!!!!  Keep on writing.  Loved it



Author's Response:

Oh my God, bellaval, you made my day. Sometimes, when I'm feeling brave, I'll take a look at other Robfics, and wonder about my Rob, so it makes me incredibly happy that you and your friend feel that way. I try really hard to do real Rob justice, with a few liberties here and there, so it's particularly rewarding when I find out others agree. Marisa will be in Paris soon enough. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cbrand1996 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Thanks for the chapter! I really thought it was sweet that Rob was so shy about the video cam sex. That was very cute. I want to see how things develop with the stalker... she is scary. I am also glad that Marisa has her sister to give her a telephonic slap for not going to Rob :).



Author's Response:

I like the way you summarized the chapter! Even though Rob is sexy with Marisa, at heart he's still a shy, dorky guy, so gotta have that in there as well. The stalker is not going away just yet. And yes, we can always count on Monica to knock some sense into Marisa. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: On Wings of Lead (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 5--Villa Lucia

You met Rob?! *dying inside* I’ve never even been in the same state as him lol

My rambling reviews may be a little slower from here on out (at least for today) I’ve got to start dinner and Goblet of Fire is coming on so I might be a teensy bit distracted :P but I’ve enjoyed this immensely and I can’t believe I waited so long to start reading it!



Author's Response:

Hi there, Welcome. Yep, I met Rob briefly here in L.A last November with a group of others. He was gorgeous of course, but shy and adorkable. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: On Wings of Lead (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 4--Lady in Red

"Loved it!"

I love Jack, too, and he's perfect here.

Reviewer: On Wings of Lead (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 3--Suspenders and Garter Belts

"Loved it!"

It’s completely normal that I’m reading Jack Nicholson’s words in my head with his accent, right :P

Reviewer: On Wings of Lead (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 2--Old Enough To Be His Teenage Mother

"Loved it!"

And now for the rambling portion of my review: I laughed my add off at your description of Taurus’ being chatty people. My mom is a Taurus and she talks constantly. I mean, constantly. Shockingly, I am not a Taurus :P

Reviewer: On Wings of Lead (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 1--Open to Interpretation

Hey scilla, it’s omerta from RAoR…as promised, I’ve started reading your story (Hi, Captain Obvious here lol) I’ve just drank 2 cups of coffee to stay awake and read as much as possible so my reviews will be jumbled and incoherent (you'll find that’s pretty normal actually, even without the coffee) and not at all useful in a literary critique sort of way. Mostly I’ll just ramble and/or say “I loved it”…because I do :)

And thus ends the most awkward review ever! lol

Reviewer: Robfan06 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 14--F*cking Finally

WOW!!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it! Please keep reading and reviewing. Hugs.

Reviewer: Robfan06 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

I hate u....just kidding. There is no way in hell I could have turned that beautiful man down...not as much as I am obessed with him. So I hope it gets better from here...I will just keep reading and find out.

Reviewer: Silton (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

I refuse to believe that Rob took or used the condoms...he would never do that to me...I mean Marisa.  My guess is Tom or Bobby, but it would be funny if his mom or dad used them.  The wank was hot. 

So....did you enjoy the pix from Montreal?  I don't understand why KStew does not walk around with a permanent smile of her face...what is wronge with that girl? 



Author's Response:

Good guesses, lol. Glad you enjoyed the wank, Rob and Marisa sure did. I loved the pics in Montreal of happy, in love Rob. As for Kristen, she looks happy around Rob, just not the paps. But who could blame her when they get hounded relentlessly and horrible things are said to them just to bait them. I'm shocked all she's done is given them the finger, I would have knocked them out by now. But, hey, that's what they're hoping will happen so they can their "shot." I don't envy Rob and Kristen's position one bit. Okay, off my soapbox now, lol. So glad you read and reviewed. Hugs.

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Obviously, the culprits for the condom conundrum would have to be his sisters!! I am not willing to believe Rob took or used them. just had an out-there idea...what if Rob's mom tucked a couple in his bag, just in case?? (Boys will be boys, after all, right?) I have to say I love the racy Skype sessions and hope there will be more (in the style of the FF story "Late Night Encounters")! I think Marisa should Skype him in the Parisian taxi on the way to his hotel! Thanks for updating! Oh! I loved that you included the disclaimer about Rob's fake e-mail address!! Just out of curiosity, what did the D stand for in it? I got the Robert Thomas Pattinson initials, and the 86 from his date of birth (and thanks for reminding me just how much of a cougar I really am!!!!). Smooches and wishes for writer's-block-free inspirations for a speedy update. Jen

Author's Response:

Hi Jen, very creative guesses on the condoms, lol. I haven't read Late Night Encounters, will have to check it out. Mmm, verra interesting idea about Skyping in the taxi, will give it serious consideration and if I use it, credit you for the idea, of course. As for the fake e-mail address, I read somewhere that Rob's full name is actually Robert Thomas Douglas Pattinson, so that's what the D is for. No writer's block, thank goodness, so I'm working diligently on ch. 34. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Obviously, the culprits for the condom conundrum would have to be his sisters!! I am not willing to believe Rob took or used them. just had an out-there idea...what if Rob's mom tucked a couple in his bag, just in case?? (Boys will be boys, after all, right?) I have to say I love the racy Skype sessions and hope there will be more (in the style of the FF story "Late Night Encounters")! I think Marisa should Skype him in the Parisian taxi on the way to his hotel! Thanks for updating! Oh! I loved that you included the disclaimer about Rob's fake e-mail address!! Just out of curiosity, what did the D stand for in it? I got the Robert Thomas Pattinson initials, and the 86 from his date of birth (and thanks for reminding me just how much of a cougar I really am!!!!). Smooches and wishes for writer's-block-free inspirations for a speedy update. Jen

Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Obviously, the culprits for the condom conundrum would have to be his sisters!! I am not willing to believe Rob took or used them. just had an out-there idea...what if Rob's mom tucked a couple in his bag, just in case?? (Boys will be boys, after all, right?) I have to say I love the racy Skype sessions and hope there will be more (in the style of the FF story "Late Night Encounters")! I think Marisa should Skype him in the Parisian taxi on the way to his hotel! Thanks for updating! Oh! I loved that you included the disclaimer about Rob's fake e-mail address!! Just out of curiosity, what did the D stand for in it? I got the Robert Thomas Pattinson initials, and the 86 from his date of birth (and thanks for reminding me just how much of a cougar I really am!!!!). Smooches and wishes for writer's-block-free inspirations for a speedy update. Jen

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

God that was sexy.  love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Terri! Glad you enjoyed it. Hugs.

Reviewer: pearlgem (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 32--Au Revoir, Mon Amour

GIVE BACK THE STOLI!!! :) 

 

Scilla, nobody does peaches like you do! Love it! 



Author's Response:

GIVE BACK THE STOLI!!! LOL. That should be our anthem. So happy you like the peaches and OTI. HUgs.

Reviewer: Pattypattz (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Hate to see Marisa stressing over the paps and  reviews...especially since the stalker is putting her two cents in and making threats towards her. I'm glad she is going to be honest with Rob and tell him about this, as he should know.

Well this brings a whole new meaning to Skype calls...LOL...I use Skype alot and have it also on my Iphones to use when I travel abroad but I've never used it like they did.

I'm not sure about the condoms...I don't think Rob has used them..maybe the stalker took them...for what I can't imagine. Maybe Tomor Bobby took them to use while they were still there in LA....maybe his Sisters took them? I'm not sure where to go with that one.

I'm glad Monica called and can talk some sense into her sister about going to Paris and being with Rob. She is right..life is too short, so she should take time off and go...live it up and be with him....I know that is what I would do...she can still remain independent and all, but she'll be there supporting, and loving on Rob....what a better place to be in!! Hope she fly out next chappy and all...I love that Marisa is a little Jealous of Sienna Miller...Ms. Miller doens't want to tangle with a Latin Woman...LOL...they can be very posessive of their loved ones and Lovers.

Great chapter as always Scilla bb....can't wait to see what you've cooked up for us next...and oh I liked the Peach Tshirt and the fact that Marisa took a fresh baked Peach Pie to Rob's Mom...must have been a real fun time baking it...I'd have been laughing and or horny the whole time.



Author's Response:

Hi bb, your long and detailed reviews are always appreciated. Yeah, readers are definitely perplexed with who could have taken the condoms, wait and see. Glad you enjoyed the Skyping. Monica calls it like she sees it and cuts through Marisa's worries. You're right about not messing with a Latin woman, that's fo sho. What a coinkidink that real Rob owns a Peaches t-shirt, huh? Thanks again! Muaaa.

Reviewer: GRLTRP (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Scilla with the cliffie!! Oh me! I could almost picure them talking on Skype. So sweet. I can totally see Rob's goofball but serious when need personality come through in your writing, too! Too awesome! Keep up the great job and I can't wait to see where those two sneaky condoms ran off to!!



Author's Response:

I know, I know, gotta keep the suspense going. I really try to capture all of Rob's sides, the dorky, shy boy, combined with the loyal, and definitely sexy man. Love you coining them the "two sneaky condoms," lol. Where, oh where could they be?Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: loving40s (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

OH MY SCILLA, you are good girl!  We've got a stalker thing going on, so an element of danger, and now we have mysteriously missing condoms?!  I do not think Rob cheated on her...he's crazy about her obviously.  Maybe one of Rob's buddies? Or stalker chick took a couple?  I"m leaning towards one of rob's friends.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! The stalker storyline will continue and soon you'll learn who took the condoms. I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Oh! Scilla I can just see Rob touching himself, pleasuring himself with Marisa moaning and encouraging him over the net. Great chapter and excellent writing. Looking forward to a reunion in Paris.

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it! Paris will definitely be interesting in more ways than one. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Holy cannoli, Scilla!!  That Skype scenario was, ahem... seriously..erm..all kinds of shades of fuckhawt.  Yowza,...yes, yes, very inspiring.  Thanks for giving this H00r some ideas the next time MrBinky travels....But we all know how loyal Rob is - he's not cheating on Marissa - there's a perfectly plausible explanation. Right, right?!?!???  Can't wait for the next chapter Lovey!!



Author's Response:

Binky!!! Happy to oblige giving you and Mr. Binky inspiration for the next time he travels, lol. The missing condom explanation will take place soon. Keep reading to find out. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: p galore (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

OMGgirl...the story is great... love that skype!  I think the pictures add the perfect touch too.

I do think that those places are waaaayyyyy tttooooo fancy for the kind of things I have in mind to do to that boy though! lol but they'll do! lol

 

Great job on another chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it. Yep, that Plaza Athenee is pretty ritzy, but hey that's what maid service is for, right? to clean up messes, lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Janners (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Wow....this chappy reminded me of cyber-sexing with a guy a few years ago.  He had a cam but I didn't.  I talked him through everything via MSN!   Yeah...it was hot!

I think Clare and Richard have been gettin' busy! (wink)

Well done, Scilla!!



Author's Response:

Hi, bb, your cyber-sexing experience sounds very intriguing, thanks for sharing it. Interesting guess on the missing condoms, lol. You never know...  Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: silvervolvogirl (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

OOOO what could have happened to the condoms???? Your mind is a little twisted (totally in a good way) so I'm sure it will be something other than what they are typically used for maybe? Or maybe Mom and Pop Pattinson just wanted to switch things us a little? Don't really wanna think about that though! HA! We know Rob would NEVER cheat! That's totally out! I'm thinking maybe Tom and Bobby were up to no good...ideas more specific than that I cannot come up with that is why you write and I read;) Still loving the story! Always excited to see an update in my inbox!!



Author's Response:

LOL, you know me all too well. I like your ideas though, very original. You'll find out about the missing condoms soon enough. Almost done writing ch. 34. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Yikes..missing condoms..I was fearing Rob took them, but Geez..he'll be in Paris for 2 months, and if he wanted to cheat, I'm sure Paris has plenty of condoms. One of Rob's sisters maybe? Or maybe that crazy stalker bitch, as a souvenier? Yes. I think we have a winner. (hopefully?) *bites nails* cause I'd be heartbroken if he cheated.



Author's Response:

Muldergirl, what about this horrible possibility, what if he used them already? I know, I shudder to think that too. You'll find out very soon what happened to the missing condoms. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: VintageRobLover (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 33--Quelle Horreur!

Another great chapter, Scilla!  I look forward to the notices that your story has updated.

Yeah, CougarMomma!  LOL!

Your attention to detail just enhances the story.  I can see it all as I’m reading it.  And I LOVE that you’ve made Marisa mature in more than years.  She loves him, but realizes she can’t just drop her own life to follow him. 

I think one of the houseguests (Brit Pack or sisters) was caught short and helped themselves to the condoms.  Or this was missed when they reviewed what was touched after the stalker broke in.



Author's Response:

I was hoping someone would get a kick out of the CougarMomma moniker, lol. I'm really glad you appreciate the details. As for Marisa being mature and independent, she is, but we all know that love sometimes has a way of making people do things they normally wouldn't. Keep reading to find out how that plays out for her. Good guesses on the missing condoms. You'll find out very soon what happened. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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