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Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Scilla, that was incredible! After so long to have these two together was amazing! Thank you for the wonderful chapter. Now I can't wait to see what happens tonight. Please bring it to us soon!

Feel better soon...and keep writing!

Bethany



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Please keep reviewing, it means so much.

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?

Jesus....hot alley makeout sessions for the win!

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 8--Orgasm Muse

Oh, wow.  How devastating.  You've done an absolutely amazing job developing your characters, even the secondary ones.  You have a lot of talent!

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 7--Hop on, James Dean

Rob on horseback....oh, my!

Reviewer: kphrase (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

awww, so wonderful, Cilla! Thank you for the quick update... so sorry you're not feeling well... I love where this is going... cannot wait to read the next chapter! Luv ya, K



Author's Response:

Thanks K, glad you liked it. I'm feeling a little better now. Please keep the reviews coming. Thanks.

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Oh Scilla! Soooo happy again! *breathing again* He really can be an idiot at times huh? He loses his phone alot!

Well, can't wait for the action at Rob's house.

Hugs,

louise



Author's Response:

Thank you! Well, he did warn her about his idiocy. Totally something "real" Rob would do. There will definitely be action for sure.

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Wow. HOT. Yay for her letting him in and explaining himself. Totally believable that Rob would lose his phone... seriously :)

Can't wait to hear about Marisa meeting him at his house. I'm sure he's going to romance the pants off of her.



Author's Response:

Hey Aussie, thanks for reviewing! He better romance her right?!

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 6--I Prefer To Drive Manual

Oh, I am so enjoying all this Rob/Marisa stuff.  I think I even just died a little typing that.  You're kind of my hero for writing this.  I can't wait until he's screaming "Marisa!" in the throes of passion.  *sigh*

Reviewer: cbrand1996 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

I knew things would come through. I think I said something about a broken cell phone in my last review. I am very glad that Rob is in your imagination as nice as he is in mine :). Thanks for the chapter. I look forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I was surprised that only a few people guessed it. Rob's not a jerk, so there's no way he could have played her like that. Thanks for your reviews!

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for your consistent reviews!

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Hmmmmmm! Loved it! More Please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Starting to work on chappy 23.

Reviewer: sam0204 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Okay, I'm a little disappointed by the "lost cell phone" excuse but it made for a quick make-up, which is definitely a plus.  Had he not called her because he was having doubts, then came to his senses, it would have been a chapter full of talking rather than making up.  Still, I would love to see the next chapter have some more emotional connecting for them.  They have the physical part down-pat, but I think if it were a real relationship they would have to devote some time to strengthening their emotional bond if this is to work long term.  I am new to the world of fan-fic but I know that "lemons" are the word to denote sex scenes.  Is there another word for more romantic scenes?  Maybe grapes?  Grapes are a romantic fruit, right?  Either way, looking forward to Marisa's visit to Rob's house!



Author's Response:

Hey Sam, thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. So Rob and Marisa first had strong sexual tension and are captivated by each other, then the sexual tension is consumated and they are all consumed by their sexual chemistry. The emotional connection is there, and it will start coming out more and more as they navigate their way through their relationship. I don't know if there's a word for romantic scenes, but grapes sounds nice to me. Can't wait to find out what you think of ch. 23.

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 2--Old Enough To Be His Teenage Mother

Well, hello there, drunk Rob.  I do so love the boy when he's a bit tipsy.

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Great! Love the make up sex! I like the twists and turns. and then the making up. I have read some other fan fic stories on this site and some from other websites. You are definitely one of best writers....I look forward to more stories from you..I hope you keep writing lots more! thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, that's a huge compliment. Please keep reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: MyRobbie (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Holy crap, I just wrote a whole review and then it got lost because I timed out. Damn fanfic.net and their stuffiness! Twilighted just doesn't work as well! Gah!

Alrighty! I hope you feel better soon, scilla. Antibiotics are the best, aren't they? I think I may love antibiotics as much as Rob. Well, no, but they're certainly up there.

Great lemony chapter, girlie! And it totally fits his personality that he would lose his phone and not have any info written down. Oh, to be young and irresponsible and batty. But he's forgiven.

And as far as what's going to happen at Rob's house? Lots of boning, yes? And maybe an outing to the press? There's always that tension there in your story. I suppose that will be the big climax for them - whether they can weather the papz or not. I said climax.

And is she setting herself up for heartbreak? Yes, I think she is, but it's good. She's finally waking up, getting over her grieving and living again. Even if they break up. And I'm getting deep there and that's what he said and I'm out!

Kisses!

Author's Response:

Hey MyRobbie, I think if you click Remember Me (teehee) when you sign in, you won't get timed out. So annoying. Rob and Marisa will go through a lot together. Stay tuned. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 1--Open to Interpretation

 I think I will inherently love this story because my name is Marisa!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

lovely



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Thank you!!!!!! I needed Rob to have a lame reason :)  I am happy because I read this, and you cheered up my craptastic morning.

Love,


Emily



Author's Response:

So happy to have cheered you up!

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Thank you!!!!!! I needed Rob to have a lame reason :)  I am happy because I read this, and you cheered up my craptastic morning.

Love,

 

Emily

Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

I hope you're feeling better soon!  This was a great chapter--I had a feeling it was something like that, but I hadn't thought of him losing his phone. 

Can't wait until the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It had to be something lame, Rob's not a bad guy. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

I love all of this story.  I cannot wait for your updates

Reviewer: Drizl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

OMFG Scilla, I f*cking lurved the marker scene. Awesome sauce love. I'm still giggling. Drizl



Author's Response:

Thanks Drizl! I came up with that scene in the spur of the moment. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: isabellamariecullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

that was an amazing chapter!! but how could you end it there? you are killing me!!

i loved the shoulder throw! Marisa is so cocky, despite all her insecurities. i loved the send off she gave him!!

please update soon!! hope you feel better soon, take care :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's the thing with Marisa is she goes back and forth from being insecure to being confident. I think most of us are like that. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Get better soon Scilla!!!  Loved that they made up - and make up sex is the best!!!  And I'm glad that she told him how upset she was - don't like stories that just gloss over the emotions.  Hope you are feeling better soon and can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the well wishes Binky. Marisa's pretty hot blooded, so she wasn't going to hold back on her anger. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Sexy!!! Couldn't help but wince though; it would be irony if she showed up at his place, and say, some tramp was there, or worse: Sienna!! Have a sinking feeling it's not over yet. The angst, that is.

Hope you feel better soon. Bronchitis sucks! I had pneumonia last year for 5 weeks! So take care of yourself. :)



Author's Response:

Wow, 5 weeks, that's awful. I'm feeling a bit better thanks to the antibiotics. This story will be long, so no, the angst is not over, but it won't resurface just yet. Thanks for reviewing.

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