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Reviewer: cbrand1996 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

I knew things would come through. I think I said something about a broken cell phone in my last review. I am very glad that Rob is in your imagination as nice as he is in mine :). Thanks for the chapter. I look forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I was surprised that only a few people guessed it. Rob's not a jerk, so there's no way he could have played her like that. Thanks for your reviews!

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for your consistent reviews!

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Hmmmmmm! Loved it! More Please!!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Starting to work on chappy 23.

Reviewer: sam0204 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Okay, I'm a little disappointed by the "lost cell phone" excuse but it made for a quick make-up, which is definitely a plus.  Had he not called her because he was having doubts, then came to his senses, it would have been a chapter full of talking rather than making up.  Still, I would love to see the next chapter have some more emotional connecting for them.  They have the physical part down-pat, but I think if it were a real relationship they would have to devote some time to strengthening their emotional bond if this is to work long term.  I am new to the world of fan-fic but I know that "lemons" are the word to denote sex scenes.  Is there another word for more romantic scenes?  Maybe grapes?  Grapes are a romantic fruit, right?  Either way, looking forward to Marisa's visit to Rob's house!



Author's Response:

Hey Sam, thanks for sharing your thoughts with me. So Rob and Marisa first had strong sexual tension and are captivated by each other, then the sexual tension is consumated and they are all consumed by their sexual chemistry. The emotional connection is there, and it will start coming out more and more as they navigate their way through their relationship. I don't know if there's a word for romantic scenes, but grapes sounds nice to me. Can't wait to find out what you think of ch. 23.

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 2--Old Enough To Be His Teenage Mother

Well, hello there, drunk Rob.  I do so love the boy when he's a bit tipsy.

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Great! Love the make up sex! I like the twists and turns. and then the making up. I have read some other fan fic stories on this site and some from other websites. You are definitely one of best writers....I look forward to more stories from you..I hope you keep writing lots more! thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, that's a huge compliment. Please keep reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: MyRobbie (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Holy crap, I just wrote a whole review and then it got lost because I timed out. Damn fanfic.net and their stuffiness! Twilighted just doesn't work as well! Gah!

Alrighty! I hope you feel better soon, scilla. Antibiotics are the best, aren't they? I think I may love antibiotics as much as Rob. Well, no, but they're certainly up there.

Great lemony chapter, girlie! And it totally fits his personality that he would lose his phone and not have any info written down. Oh, to be young and irresponsible and batty. But he's forgiven.

And as far as what's going to happen at Rob's house? Lots of boning, yes? And maybe an outing to the press? There's always that tension there in your story. I suppose that will be the big climax for them - whether they can weather the papz or not. I said climax.

And is she setting herself up for heartbreak? Yes, I think she is, but it's good. She's finally waking up, getting over her grieving and living again. Even if they break up. And I'm getting deep there and that's what he said and I'm out!

Kisses!

Author's Response:

Hey MyRobbie, I think if you click Remember Me (teehee) when you sign in, you won't get timed out. So annoying. Rob and Marisa will go through a lot together. Stay tuned. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 1--Open to Interpretation

 I think I will inherently love this story because my name is Marisa!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

lovely



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Thank you!!!!!! I needed Rob to have a lame reason :)  I am happy because I read this, and you cheered up my craptastic morning.

Love,


Emily



Author's Response:

So happy to have cheered you up!

Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Thank you!!!!!! I needed Rob to have a lame reason :)  I am happy because I read this, and you cheered up my craptastic morning.

Love,

 

Emily

Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

I hope you're feeling better soon!  This was a great chapter--I had a feeling it was something like that, but I hadn't thought of him losing his phone. 

Can't wait until the next chapter!



Author's Response:

It had to be something lame, Rob's not a bad guy. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 18--The Peach and Mr. Friendly's Wild Weekend Finale

I love all of this story.  I cannot wait for your updates

Reviewer: Drizl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

OMFG Scilla, I f*cking lurved the marker scene. Awesome sauce love. I'm still giggling. Drizl



Author's Response:

Thanks Drizl! I came up with that scene in the spur of the moment. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: isabellamariecullen (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

that was an amazing chapter!! but how could you end it there? you are killing me!!

i loved the shoulder throw! Marisa is so cocky, despite all her insecurities. i loved the send off she gave him!!

please update soon!! hope you feel better soon, take care :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's the thing with Marisa is she goes back and forth from being insecure to being confident. I think most of us are like that. Thanks so much for reviewing.

Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Get better soon Scilla!!!  Loved that they made up - and make up sex is the best!!!  And I'm glad that she told him how upset she was - don't like stories that just gloss over the emotions.  Hope you are feeling better soon and can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the well wishes Binky. Marisa's pretty hot blooded, so she wasn't going to hold back on her anger. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Sexy!!! Couldn't help but wince though; it would be irony if she showed up at his place, and say, some tramp was there, or worse: Sienna!! Have a sinking feeling it's not over yet. The angst, that is.

Hope you feel better soon. Bronchitis sucks! I had pneumonia last year for 5 weeks! So take care of yourself. :)



Author's Response:

Wow, 5 weeks, that's awful. I'm feeling a bit better thanks to the antibiotics. This story will be long, so no, the angst is not over, but it won't resurface just yet. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: suziekew (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Now that was worth the wait! Feel better Cilla!



Author's Response:

So glad you thought so. Thanks!

Reviewer: shelly551 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

OMG I... there are no words for ths chapter

Just fu.....king good that's all I can say ,no words .

Shelly



Author's Response:

WOW, thank you!

Reviewer: katiebird (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Hey sweetie,

I hope that you feel better soon. Having bronchitis sucks. Thanks for writing thru the pain.
I have to say that I didn't even think that he might have lost his phone. But I'd like to think that I would have hid my anger better. Just as a form of self-defense. Probably not though, I tend to wear my heart on my sleeve. I just know that I would have eventually cried too. I cry when I am angry.
Kudos to Marisa, having a steady head with the marker. I don't know if I could have written anything legible, let alone upside down. I would have been too distracted by the pretty penis.
I hope that Rob gives her a present of some kind. Something pretty, like jewelry.

Take care of yourself, missy.

Author's Response:

Hey katiebird, thanks so much for your detailed review. Love those. Pretty jewelry...wait and see. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Knew he wasn't a player.  Stupid man. Losing his phone. What a git. Totally enjoying this story.  Hate the wait.  Feel better soon.  This is the worst time of year for flu, bronchitis. Love the "tatoo"  Original.  Till next time, keep him safe.  



Author's Response:

Thanks Ladymerlot. Yeah, Rob's a good guy, there's no way he was playing her. He can be quite the idiot sometimes, as he likes to tell us all the time. The tatoo idea just came to me so I included it. Thanks so much for your consistent reviews!

Reviewer: gbasjw (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Yeah - I'm one of the readers that you nearly lost when you decided to blundgeon us to death with Marissa's neurosis & past life dramas.  I lost all respect for her at that point and this chapter didn't do anything to change that.  I don't have a problem with her accepting him back so quickly as her initial reaction to the whole no call scenario was over the top (IMHO) anyway.  But she wrote her name & phone number on his jacket tag?  Like his mommy?  I suppose the body ink antics were supposed to redeem her and make her appear sultry but yeah didn't work for me.  Also, not crazy about the lost phone angle simply because it's so overdone in fanfic.   I am going to stick with the story for a few more chapters to see where you go with it as you keep promising bigger & better things.  Honestly, you need to make me like & believe in Marissa again.  I'm not sure that's going to happen.  I know I'm one of your few negative reviewers.  Sorry about that.  Guess that's because I'm close to Marissa's age & that's probably why her behavior & attitudes irritate me so much.  She & EC seem to share the same mood swings & propensity for self-flagillation.  I don't like it when Edward does it either :)



Author's Response:

Hi gbasjw, first of all, I'd like to thank you for taking the time to review in such detail. It shows that you are emotionally invested in the story, even though, clearly the emotions it's evoking in you are negative. That's okay. At least, it's making you feel something and that's better than being indifferent to a story. So here are my thoughts. I guess I take issue to you referring to Marisa's "neurosis and past life dramas." Neurosis implies that someone has an overreaction to life's events. Marisa went through two of the biggest losses a person can endure. She lost her husband violently and suddenly. And she lost the baby she had been trying for for so long. Both on the same day, instantly. The fact that she is still walking around, living her life and is not in a straight jacket somewhere in a padded cell is quite a testament to her lack of neurosis. When Rob seemingly disappeared, the feeling of profound loss was reignited for her. I would hope that is not difficult to empathize with. It touched the subconscious, primal, irrational part of her brain, the part that will never fully heal from her significant losses. I don't think there's anything over the top about it, to be honest, given the gravity of the losses. Plus, she's got fiery Latin blood coursing through her veins Rob's lucky she didn't put out a hit on him. Just kidding, to any Italian readers out there. I know full well that not all Italians have mafia connections. I should know, I'm part Italian. Anyway, as for writing her name on his jacket. ROb's the one who offered it to her. I don't know what to tell you about the marker tatoo. Either it turns you on or it doesn't. Again, that's okay. As for promising bigger and better things...I don't know if I've promised that, I've simply stated that this story will be long and will take lots of twists and turns. I hope you stick around for them. I really do. As for being close to Marisa's age and not being able to relate to her, again, different strokes, for different folks. I'm one year older than Marisa and I can totally relate to her. But hey, I'm biased, since I'm writing her right LOL. And no, Marisa is not based on me. My husband, Elvis, is very much alive and I have two wondeful kids and am one of the few who havent' suffered through a miscarriage. Again, I'm glad you're having such a strong reaction to the story. I would like to make one request of you though. If you could provide your disagreements regarding the way the story is going in the form of more constructive criticsim and feedback, rather than the emotionally reactive way that you have reviewed. I'm human after all, and it does affect me when I read things like "you bludgeoned us to death..., etc." I hope you see my point. Take care and I look forward to dialoguing with you in the future, Scilla

Reviewer: Sweetnobody (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Aw get well soon.

Phew ... This chapter was great.  Bloody mobile phones and their loss!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Please keep reviewing.

Reviewer: christiner (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

Excellent!! I love this story & can't wait to read more. I wonder if Rob will get Marissa pregnant later on in their relationship, that would be so good for her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your consistent reviews! Interesting concept...very interesting.

Reviewer: ilikereading (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2010 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 22--I Want You, I Need You...

First of all...Take care of yourself, hun!! I need you healthy and strong ;)

Thanks for the way you have resolved the entire situation. I love it. And I hope the meeting at Rob´s house will be full of feelings and talkings to exchange thoughts. And lemons too, of course ;D

I´ll be  waiting. Take your antibiotics, hot milk and honey and drink a lot. Some orange juice can work, too. :D

Su.



Author's Response:

Hey Su, thanks for the advice. I took it and I'm feeling better already. The meeting at Rob's house will be full of all of the above. Please keep reviewing.

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