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Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

That was an awesome chapter!!  I waited all day at work to read it at home!!  Took a lot of patience to do that, and patience is not something I have a lot of but it was so worth it!!!  I love these two together and they are juts getting better and better!  : )

Reviewer: lw5202 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

I am really liking where the story is going!  I am not as nice as Marisa, I would have wanted to snoop a lot more :)  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Mrs Boyscout (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 17--Salty Sea Dog

Cannot believe you had the neighbors spy on them.  Too frickin funny!  Glad they are having some meaningful conversations in between bouts of loving.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Mrs Boyscout (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 16--Magic Man

Woohoo yea for Marissa!  A quite a boost to Rob's ego, I bet.  Super hot Saturday.  And hilarious that the neighbor came over to tell her they were being loud.  LOL  

Terrific chapter!

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

I had to reread the first part of the story, it was so good! This is well-written and nearly flawless. I look forward to every update. I also love dirty talking Rob. I wish I could hear his accent, too. Thanks!

Reviewer: ilikereading (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

How long, my lady!!  Just two words to encourage your writing: keep writing!  ;))

I feel a real thrilling to the upcoming chaps. I´m gonna meet my mother- in- law! And at the premiere!!


Looking for the next step.

PD: I trully understand your delayed, I´m a wife and a mother too, so of course I understand. Real life is the most important. Always.


Reviewer: Twiliterati (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

As usual..I enjoyed the chapter.Don't worry, I am sure all of us as devoted readers are NOT quitting this story until we have to. I know i definately wont...This story owns me.

Bring on the 'rents!!!!! I am sure Marisa is gonna win them over..atleast I hope so.

Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: pjsnurse (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Wonderful as always.They are so sweet together. I am glad there is going to be much more of the story to look forward to. Take your time.

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Oh boy

Reviewer: Carson1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Wonderful as always...looking forward to the next update! Cheers

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Wow, great chapter.  I love how they are getting so much closer.  Can't wait for her to meet the rents.

Reviewer: BeckyS76 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Scilla, This story is amazing. I just have no words about how much i love it. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Tigerlily74 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

He wrote her a song! That is so sweet! I hope you decide to keep updating once a week but if once every 2 is all I can get I'll take it!

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Gets more and more this! Keep them comin!

Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Holy Shit is right!!  Meeting the family??  Hope Marisa is ready for it!  Okay, my favourite line of this chapter (besides the dirty talk of course)..."The timbre of his voice was like single malt whiskey being poured slowly over ice, smooth and intoxicating."  I can hear it perfectly in my mind and WISH I could hear that in my ear at night!!

Great job Scilla - we all know that RL can be a beyotch sometimes but I apppreciate the effort that you put in to update as regularly as you do so no worries about making me wait ....I'll always wait for Rob!!  Big Smooches!!!

Reviewer: Mrs Boyscout (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 3--Suspenders and Garter Belts

I don't know if this come up later or not, but during the conversation about garters Marissa tells him she's not wearing pants -- which to him means she's not wearing underwear.  Did you plan that?  I have learned so much about British-isms since reading fanfic.  :)  Love this so far!

Reviewer: ihopatz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Really enjoying your story scilla!  I'm so ready to see what happens when she meets the mom *YIKES!*  Thanks for an amazing read.

Reviewer: Cullenbychoice (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

I really enjoy your story! thank you :)

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Damn!  Your the queen of freaking cliffhangers.  Sooo unfair, that RL gets

in the way, but we all have one.  I know I'll have to be patient.  I have

told 3 of my Twi friends to read this story.  Honestly it's one of the best

I've ever read, and I've read at least 100.  Keep up the energy and sex!

Reviewer: LizzieMac09 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Oh Scilla, thanks for the shout-out - and you are waaaayyy too keen to be spanked young lady LOL!  Had to read this chapter again cos Rob is just so sexy .... and he luuurves her.  Oh I just can't for Marisa to meet his mum and dad!

Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Hi Scilla

I just wrote a really long review just now and then got logged off as I submitted it. BUM!

I love the story, and as usual this chapter lived upto expectations. Love Rob and Marissa's sweet peach!! So they're back together and at his house. Lucky girl. He's told his mum about her and wants them to meet. WOW. I'd be petrified. Will he ask her to the premiere?? Did she nearly say she loved him?? Hope so. Can't wait to read on, glad it's a long story. Love something juicy to get my teeth into!!

Fully understand about how other priorities have to fit in with writing. Us girls should stick together. It's hard being a wife/mum and working. I know. Hope you are ok and post again in a couple of weeks.

Thanks for your support of my story. Have submitted on here so hope it's validated soon. Not sure where I'm going with it but thought I'd just go with the flow for now. Anyway, gotta go and get my little girl from school. hugs Clare x (aka cullenscougar)

Reviewer: Ladymerlot (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Totally enjoying this story.  This was my first Rob story.  I particularly enjoy that you are presenting an older Rob with a beautiful, sexy mature woman.  We can dream.  Of course the erotica is fabulous, however, character development is key to the success of any story.  I love Marissa. She is straightforward, sensual and possesses very real insecurities regarding her age in juxtaposition to her relationship to very beautiful, sensual Rob.  I would like to believe that he is very mature and wants and needs this in his life.  A caring, sensual and intelligent woman to keep him grounded in reality. Separate from the high profile drama of his glaring popularity.  Being loved for who is is. Not for what he represents to the screaming masses.

Glad to hear that this story has a ways to go.  Right now they are existing in a safe bubble.  Going public will be a crashing departure from what they are experiencing and create problems that will take maturity to handle.  I feel that Marissa will be the strong one. Rob will be overprotective and they to shield her from the crazy fandom. 

Again loving this story. 

Reviewer: Canyaceme (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 24--I Love...

Great story.  I can see a lot of Rob's characteristics in your Rob. 

Reviewer: margdj (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 23--Pattinson Manor

I'm SO looking forward to the next update - I'm missing Rob and Marisa!!

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