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Reviewer: TwilightCougar1 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Oh may have been a painful birthing process baby....but it was worth it...GAH!!!! Super, uber hawt....just the thought of hawty Jude Law trying to horn in on Robs Marissa was so hawt...I was all primed for the trailer madness...awesome...maybe some of the best writing yet baby...cumming into your own so to good scilla...what you do to me...don't stop...yep...right there bb....

Author's Response:

TC1, you're going to make me cry with your sweet words, bb. Thanks so much!!! Can't wait to be on the Eclipse red carpet with you and the other h00rs. Muaaa

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Holy toledos.... that was one fuck hot chapter! *LOL* Marisa goes to Rob expecting some trailer-sexing and instead gets a dinner invite with the likes of Kate Winslet and Jude Law! hehehe Honestly, if I was in the get-up that she was wearing under my clothes, I'd be blushing all shades of tomato red, even though no-one but Rob had any idea.

As for the final part of the chapter in the trailer. *LMAO* Seriously, I was all 'yay they're getting it onnnnnnnnn' *inserts sex bomb type music* and then Stephanie & Nick knock on the door? Blow-job breath would the least of my worries.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Aussie, so glad you enjoyed it! Please keep the reviews coming. Hugs.

Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Hahahahah.......Oh brother poor Marisa! Let's hope she'll managed the sudden surprise visit!

Can't wait for more.

Thanks for posting.

Author's Response:

Laila, you're right, poor Marisa sure has a lot to manage when it comes to Rob. He's one big adventure, that's for sure. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: ChelDreams (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Yaay!! Penis breath *giggles*

Fab chr bb-sofa king hawt-this is a rushed review cos need to pick up mini (I may already be late but OTI is not a fic I can leave lying around in my emails!!)


p.s. *blushes* Thnx 4 the mention-I feel famous now *giggles* Any time u need help bb-I'll try my best.x.

Author's Response:

Chel, I'll take any review, even a run by one lol. Thanks for the help and the support bb! Muaa.

Reviewer: laragonzalez10 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Hi Scilla! Poor Marisa!! Just when she tought every worry has desapired her parents doubt rob feelings for her too.... I can imagine her Latin parents being upset regarding her elationship with a younger British boy perfectly (remeber I'm Spanish too)

I loved the dinner scene you wrote and the ensemble you put toguether for the last lemon. I would die to have a young guy playing with my "peach" that way....

I love your story scilla and you are a very skillfull woman.

Your updates always brighten my day.

Your loyal Spanish reader, Lara

Author's Response:

Lara, mil gracias amiga! So happy you enjoyed the chappy and thanks for the detailed review. Besos, Scilla

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Poor Marisa, her parents just aren't being very understanding.  So fun meeting all the actors on set.  Too funny with Jude Law flirting.  How unfair is that, Jude on one side and Rob on the other? Trailer sex was hawt.  Can't wait for conversation with Nick and Stephanie.  Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Great summary of the chapter pirate! Thanks so much for the review, keep 'em coming. Hugs.

Reviewer: robskitten (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

thanks 4 such a great chapter, scilla!  as always u more than deliver the goods.  i sure hope Marisa's family comes to grips with her dating a younger man!  love ya dear!

Author's Response:

robskitten, thanks for the great review, it means a lot to me. Yeah, her family needs to get a grip, let's hope Rob's reacts better. Thanks again! hugs.

Reviewer: looloolinda (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Sweet Jesus, as though this story wasn't delicious enough - you had to throw Jude Law into the mix?  All I have in my head in the moment is a dream outtake - Marisa having a dream after this evening's events in which the three of them have a menage...  Hell, I hope I dream of it (swapping Marisa with yours truly, of course)!
Thanks for sharing...

Author's Response:

Oooo Linda, there's an idea! I'll see if I can somehow incorporate a Rob and Jude dream sequence. Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: flormi (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Hola  Scilla!  justo me estaba llendo a dormir cuando recibi la alerta del update....obviamente mañana ire a trabajar dormida! jajaja

Cada capitulo que escribis es excelente, maravilloso, me quedo sin adjetivos......amo tu historia.

Gracias por compartirla!

un beso


Author's Response:

Flor, que amable eres, de verdad. Que gusto que hayas disfrutado del capitulo tanto. Gracias por tus lindas palabras. Un beso, Scilla

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

What a great chapter!!!  The end - phew!!!  Can't wait to hear what this meeting is about!

Author's Response:

Thanks teddi! Writing it really took a lot out of me, but I'm glad it was worth it. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 11--Heartache or Regret?

"I need you to know that I’m a man, even if I’m young.”  Gah, love, love, LOVE, take charge Rob. 

So, since you've met him, what DOES HHH smell like?  Did your senses work at all when you met him?  Did you act like the lady on Oprah the other day (when he went to her house) who just looked dazed and said "You're so hot!"  Hee Hee!!!!  That would be me ... a big puddle of goo.

Thanks for writing.  Loving the story.  Glad Marisa has decided that she doesn't want to look back and regret not giving this a try. 

Author's Response:

featherme, I so appreciate you reviewing as you go along. It means soooo much. When I met HHH, we were at an event outside, so I couln't smell anything. But believe me I tried. I'd had three glasses of wine and actually took a big, long whiff of him, but nothing. I was in a group of other people, so I didn't get to talk to him one on one, but I just remember thinking that yes, he was gorgeous, but so shy and unassuming and young, damnit, really young. Please, keep reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: ihopatz (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 28--Leave Your Shoes On

Ooo...jealous angry Rob is fuckhawt!  Lots of lurve for ya scilla!

Author's Response:

I love jealous, angry Rob too. Thanks for reviewing bb.

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 10--This Is Crazy Right?

Oh hell.  I know he'll forgive her, but damn!  I cannot believe she did that.  I feel so badly for him! 

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 9--I'll Be Your Lover Too

Oh, I loved that!  I think I can guarantee that I'd probably be just like Marisa (tears rolling down my face if I heard him sing to me #as if) if I had been in her situation.  Oh, that voice.  Love him.

Marisa is handling Laura so well, but I would've said something very catty and ugly to her by now.  She is seriously getting to me.  Marisa's way is better though.  Laura is making a fool of herself.

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 8--Orgasm Muse

Yeah, loved the pool action and the piano playing.  So looking forward to him playing the guitar and singing.  I also liked the background on Marisa. 

I'm really enjoying reading.  So glad I decided to jump in and not wait any longer.  Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: angelgirl0910 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 27--The Beanie & The Sexpenders

Um, Kyle is a bitch and I'm glad Marisa told her off. And the wall sex? DED!! So hot bb. So hot. Add the sexpender into the mix and you got a room full of h00rs that self-combusted. And I LOVED that Marisa put on the beanie. It such a cute mental picture.

And I think that Rob should be the one to tell her about filming in Paris. It more honest and it doesn't seems like she's checking up on him via the gossip mags. But that's just me. Can't wait till the next update bb. Great job so far.

Author's Response:

Yay Jenn, so glad you're back and all caught up. Ch. 28 should post soon. Thanks for the reviews bb. Muaaa.

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 7--Hop on, James Dean

Yes, Mr. Rob in a cowboy hat on a horse, riding me, er, I mean, riding with me = major win!!

Loved the chapter. 

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 6--I Prefer To Drive Manual

Marissa and her skillz with the stick shift...she's good!  Like she said, GAME ON!

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 5--Villa Lucia

Loved Marissa eating the grapes.  Go get him Tigress!

Reviewer: TerriG (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 27--The Beanie & The Sexpenders

still waiting for the next update .... great story

Author's Response:

Ch. 28 has taken me the longest to post, but it's finally with my beta, so any day now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 4--Lady in Red

The UST is killing me...but it's oh so good.  What was our boy doing for so long away from the table?  Hmmm?  :)  Love it! 

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 3--Suspenders and Garter Belts

 “Your suspenders were showing.”  That was hilarious!  Jealous Rob FTW!

Reviewer: featherme (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 2--Old Enough To Be His Teenage Mother

"Mmmm, ride Mr. Pattinson, that sounds like Heaven"  Good Lord, yes, absolute heaven!

Great writing.  Lovin' the story and how detailed you are on his characteristics.   On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: angelgirl0910 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 26--Amor

Umm... Kyle is a she??? What?!?! *Jenn run off to read next chappy*

Reviewer: PunkyBumpkin (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 27--The Beanie & The Sexpenders

Wow, that visual... up against the wall, with the beanie & sexpenders... fuckhot is right!

(I'm cracking up right now because my iTouch autocorrect very correctly completed "sexpenders" instead of "suspenders". LMAO)

As for Paris, I'm an impatient type, so if I were Marisa, I'd have to ask him.

I can't wait to see more of them together in public. And I can't wait for Marisa to meet his family, and Bobby too. ;-) I had a dream once that Rob brought me to London to proudly introduce me to his entire family. Wishful thinking much? LOL

Oh, and if he were mine, I would totally call him Robbie too. He's just too damn cute for it not to slip out sometimes. ;-)

It keeps getting better and better, Scilla! Can't wait for the upcoming chapters!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing every chapter, it means so much. Muaaa.

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