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Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow - well i have to be constructive i know no other way to be...it's the beta in me.
1. you paid NO attention to the deaths of Alice and Edward - which was a HUGE plot point and rather un-necessary if you ask me...if alienated me as a reader on a personal level.
2. You made Alec the bad guy - right up front...instead of maybe making him inconsequential to Aro's decisions...
But you have intrigued me...and i will continue to read, if you continue to update.
Reviewer: baybeet (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
nice...very original.
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is a very interesting thought. I would like to see where this plot goes, if u continue I hope the rest of the Cullen's are brought in.
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
I read it, it was good, well written. Interesting coupling :)
but I really can't do the fan fics where Edward gets killed, just goes against my Twi-grain...
Reviewer: Jacquelyn Swan (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Continue Continue Continue PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: JULIEKT (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi I never review but I thought I would with this one I really think this story has alot of potential mainly with you as an author. I love human pet and I think you should continue this story. Thanks and hope to see more on both stories. Julie
Reviewer: JULIEKT (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi I never review but I thought I would with this one I really think this story has alot of potential mainly with you as an author. I love human pet and I think you should continue this story. Thanks and hope to see more on both stories. Julie
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
I... I honestly don't know what to think lol. On the one hand... it's just plain awful that Alice and Edward are dead now! On the other... this could be an interesting story. I find myself wishing for the Cullens to mount a rescue party though lol
Reviewer: brit77 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well you did goo with the creepy factor for Halloween.... I liked it !
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