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Reviewer: anna4 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2012 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 1

It's amazing!! Loved it, please continue on x

Reviewer: watergirl27 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2012 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

i want to read more of this, it was great i read this page like 16 time OMG

Reviewer: waddie (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

I feel really weird writing this, I'm new to this site and use to read on FanFiction.com. this is so much better though and your story is awesome :)

Reviewer: waddie (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2012 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

I feel really weird writing this, I'm new to this site and use to read on FanFiction.com. this is so much better though and your story is awesome :)

Reviewer: helenel (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2012 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 1

Such a good read. Thank you for sharing your story. I'd love to read more about how their lives proceed if you write a continuation to this story.

Reviewer: soccerchick_14 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please keep writng the story!! i love it:)

Reviewer: dark_dork15 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it. Please continue the story.

Reviewer: JasonCulhane (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like your writing and I think it's very plausible (though I wish you hadn't killed off my two favourite cullens but I understand the story couldn't have worked without it) Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: arrr (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

Woah - glad you expanded this - loved the first chapter - agree that haven't found a good Al/B pairing and so far you have this maniacal, dark Alec...fantastic...loved the incubus twist!

Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 1

everything written neat

Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

goodly & neat

Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

goodly & neat @ the same time

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 1

Well, I was interested....right up until I saw the "Alec/Bella pairing" In your chapter end notes. Not something I can ever imagine being interested in, especially considering his actions here.

That's not to say I wouldn't have slowly come around. If you hadn't revealed the pairing, I might have been optimistic that Bella could escape and perhaps continue her life with the Cullens. It would probably have been enough to keep me reading. But, like Bella in this first chapter, I'm completely horrified by the thought of an Alec pairing.

Again, if you hadn't given it away, I might have come around in time (right along with Bella). So my suggestion is to delete that note ASAP and hope that you can win people over to the pairing in time.

Reviewer: jemm101 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

kkkeeepppp iiittt ccoommminnngg

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

nope nope nope, sorry doll love your writing but can't do stories where Edward dies, just can't the ticker can't take it!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes! Yes! I would so look forward to an Alec and Bella story! I've been thinking of that for a bit now but there are no such paring of these two that I have found. Granted it will be a challenged and I'm sure your going to get some flack from the team Edwards out there but I'd really like to see how your going to do this. So looking forward to your next updates. I've fav this.

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 1

Great twist! Always a joy to see something new...looking forward to more! <><3

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

no Edward and Alice??.......poor Bella.......I want to see how it ends tho

Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

YES I like it! Keep going! You've got me hooked.

Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

so human pet is finished:):)

waitin....................:)

Author's Response:
Yes, and I kept my promise. I sent chapter 2 to be validated today. LOL!!!

Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh well:):) i really like human pet!!! lol but youll post ch 2 then,right!?!?!

Author's Response:
Yes. I have chapter 19 ready. I'm going to submit it today. Chapter 20 is written and ready to be edited. I will type it up tomorrow and submit it at soon as chapter 19 is validated. I hope to start chapter 2 of this story over the weekend some time.

Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

so i hear u r almost done with chp 19 for human pet.but theres still no chp 2 4 this story.............

Author's Response:
Yes, yes, I know that I'm being horribly cruel to make you wait. I have finished chapter 19 for Human Pet. I'm going to type it up and submit it Friday. I am also pleased to say that chapter 20 is almost halfway finished. I hope to finish it by the end of this week. I feel that it is best that I complete Human Pet before forging ahead on this story. I want to give it my complete focus so that I can make it as good as I can. With that being said, I'm definately going to start writing chapter 2 of this story next week. Thanks for being so patient and thanks for your reviews. : )

Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

where did u go!?!?! chp 18 4 human pet has been up 4 awhile!!!!!

Author's Response:
I'm still here, alive, but barely. I work for Wal-Mart and black Friday really is the day from hell. I've been suffering all week. Not to mention that I stock groceries most of the time and the build up to Thanksgiving has been rather draining. I'm sorry this is taking so long. It seems that my muse has taken a vacation during my exhaustion. I did manage to write most of chapter 19 for Human Pet. It is being edited. I'm still working on the direction that I want to go with this story. I know what I want to happen but finding a way to put it all into words is busting my butt. I promise to sit down over the weekend and get this story rolling. Thanks for reading and being patient. I hope to make chapter 2 well worth the wait. : )

Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1

i absolutely love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next update:):)

Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 1

omg i luv this stroy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its just as good as human pet (btw, when r u gonna update that again!?!?!?):):)

anyways-cant wait 4 the next upate!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:
Yes, I'm working on chapter 18 for Human Pet. I need to do a final edit and then type it up. Once I submit it, I'm going to start working on chapter 2 for this story.

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