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Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

I need a smoke, and I don't smoke!! That is hot!!....Although, the three bellas are giving me whiplash...

Reviewer: ekimmuh (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1: Rumored Nights

Very interesting storyline and very well written opening. It is dark, and emotional. Edward appears to be very mysterious, and Bella is seriously messed up.

Ekimmuh - WL

Reviewer: Larifari (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

Hmm, I would really like to know which girl he likes more. Bella or Miss Bells?

Good work, looking for more.

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

Oh hell ya!! Gooo Ms. Bells!!!

Reviewer: ice princess (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

Loved it!

Reviewer: whit (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

O WOW some SEriOus dArkward!!!but great chappie

BIG fAn
~w h i t~

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

Wow, that Ms. Bells really likes to play with fire big time!!!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

So, what is gonna happen to poor Bella and who else may we be seeing?

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

Wow!!!  That was pretty HOT. I would like a smoke as well please. lol  I am so hooked on this story. I just never really know what is going to happen next. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Alaina

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

I need clean panties and a smoke.  I love Dr. Darkward.  If I were completely sane I might get lost in all of these personalities but I understand all of them.  I think I should be worried about that. 

I'd like to see a group therapy session with the Edwards, Bellas and Tanyas all together. 

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

I can see Edward building up quite the collection of ruined underwear... and I think he'll be sending Bella/MissBells some 'replacements' over time as well ;)

It's interesting that Edward's got a similar split-debate happening inside his own head, makes you wonder what might happen if you had those Edward's with Bella's multiples in the same room as separate entities - which way would they REALLY pair off?

 

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

yep

Reviewer: purpledays (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

Omg, I don't know what to think. Edward is yummy in this chapter, but I afraid he will become unhinged to where his yumminess factor will decrease. Miss Bells and loving the vampire is a riot. I'm confused, at the end of last chapter, was it Miss Bells or Bella? B/c Bella seemed quite comfortable w/ Edward and sexual, but in this chapter Edward stated that Bella is afraid to want him at times.

Love the lemon.  Is there enough love to reign in the monster, I don't think Edward knows and either do I. 

I can't wait to read the next chapter. 

 



Author's Response:

i think that in the last chapter, i didn't clarify enough...i screwed that up, royally, and i'm so sorry :( lol i meant to imply that miss bells had taken over after isabella, because carlisle was telling edward that she was saying things like "bella is boring," etc, and i thought that was enough of a hint that miss bells was now there...but, a lot of people seem confused, i wish i could fix that chapter up a little more, and i might if i get some time...thank you so much for reading, even through the confusion...i appreciate it!!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

Wow...I think that Miss Bells is going to cause more problems than Edward can handle, lol.

This was a great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

:) thank you, i really needed that. i appreciate it!

Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 17: Show Me Your Teeth

I think I like Miss Bells POV a little bit more than Bellas.

Reviewer: eva wilson (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 16: Too Close for Missiles, I'm Switching to Guns

So again... what the hell is going on? And what happened with Tanya and Edward? Now Edward is back to wanting Bella? Are you getting bored with your own story and just throwing stuff in there to shake it up?

Author's Response:

there's a lot of complication in this story. it's hard to follow sometimes, but then again, a character with mpd is hard to express and comprehend. i understand where you're coming, and appreciate the input. all i can tell you is that many issues will lead up, all of the different character, for example, tanya, and their craziness will play a critical part in where the story is headed...the central theme is the DIFFERENT SIDES of one being, which actually, is being expressed through the characters' flip-flopping. i promise you, i'm not bored. at all. everything has a reason. sorry if you don't like it...:(

Reviewer: eva wilson (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 14: Monsters

what the hell is going on in this story? Bella isn't the only one with multiple personality issues. I find myself with a deep frown and a what the ....? at the end of every chapter. Thre's no consistency and it's hard to follow the trajectory of the plot because no one follows the same line of thought or behavior from one chapter to the next.
Now all of a sudden Edward's a doctor and he does.... or does not... want to have sex with Tanya.

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 16: Too Close for Missiles, I'm Switching to Guns

You just keep it going.  I can't get enough of this! Please, please bring on the next chapter.  I'm dying here!                                       Jeannie



Author's Response:

thank you very much honey!!!

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 15: Hot Mess

I love the new personalities!  How many are we up to now?  lol          Jeannie



Author's Response:

ohh, between bella's three, edward's two, tanya's two...i'd say too many...lol.

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 14: Monsters

I can't wait!  You are awesome!                                            Jeannie

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 13: Everybody is Someone Else's Secret

Another awesome chapter! You blow me away!  Now I'm caught up with this story, annd am having withdrawals!  lol How often do you update?  I'm dying for more.  It's soo good!                                                                                  

                                                                 Jeannie



Author's Response:

:D Thanks Jeannie! I update pretty frequently, about once a week ish. When the story first got started, I was a little too busy, so that's why there's so few chapters right now, but I have been writing non-stop. The validation process for Twilighted usually take 4 days for me and my validation beta...right now, chapter 17 is in the queue for validation! there's still time to catch up to the end! i hope you enjoy!!! thanks for reading!!

Sara

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Bad Romance

That was hot!! You did excellent!

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dirtier than You Want to Know

Perfectly apt closing line!!  lol LOve it!!!!



Author's Response:

:D I am loving all of your reviews!!!

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dirtier than You Want to Know

Perfectly apt closing line!!  lol LOve it!!!!

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 9: Give It Up To Me

Beautiful! I read this ch. in no time.  I'm loving this.

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