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Reviewer: where_the_books_live (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 2

I love this new twist on Edward- Keep it up.



Author's Response:

i will, thank you x

Reviewer: phoenixreborn (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

Hey, this is really good!  Looking forward to reading further ( I love Darkward!)



Author's Response:

great, glad you like, thanks x

Reviewer: wingd writer (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

Ooohhh

I like it



Author's Response:

great, thanks for reviewing x

Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 3

Every time I get into one of your chapters I want more...

I LOVE this Edward, I want to hear more of his thoughts... what's he going to do next?

Enlighten us poor readers soon, please! Till next time!



Author's Response:

submitting the next one now, have no fear! hee hee, thanks so much x

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 3

LOVE IT! Love dark, sexy Edward...



Author's Response:

great, thanks for your review!

Reviewer: beachykaty (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 2

Can't WAIT to see where this is going!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying x

Reviewer: beachykaty (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a great story!! I love this dark side of Edward that we hardly get to see...so primal! Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much x

Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

I'm loving the set-up of this story, very cool. It will be interesting to see the effect she has on him and vice versa... But what's wrong with Bella? Plotting an escape from Edward? I wouldn't go any where...

Author's Response:

Ha ha, neither would I! Just a natural response to beng kidnapped in the night...will she come round...?

Thanks for the review x

 

 

Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 1

I LOVE Darkward! Can't wait to read on, so that's what I'm gonna do. Right now.



Author's Response:

hee hee...okie dokie then x

Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

Cool story.  I'm hooked.



Author's Response:

great, thank you x

Reviewer: airekel (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hi,

I just found your story, and so far I'm intrigued.  I don't know that I'm going to like Edward with red eyes, knowing, of course what that means, but I'm interested in where you are going to take this, and look forward to reading more.

Sorry I didn't review the first chapter, but I got caught up, and had to keep reading.  Hopfeully it won't be long before you post another chapter.

Thanks for an interesting read.  :)



Author's Response:

thanks for reading...i hope i hold your interest...i a hoping this wont be a predictable story x

Reviewer: sleepyhead91 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 2

ooo i like this! two thumbs upp :P



Author's Response:

thank you xxx

Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 2

ooooh I like! I'm interested in the origins of this Darkward. Will the rest of the Cullens be in this or is it a specifically B/E story?



Author's Response:

awwwww man! you can't ask me that! it'd spoil it...hee hee...wait and see ;)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 2

OMG!!!!! The thought of being carried away by sexy vamp Edward just has me melting!...Seriously!!!



Author's Response:

i know...right! hee hee x

Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yessssssssssssssssss!!!  That was so hot!  I love me some Darkward.  So simple, yet so sexy!  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

hee hee, thanks, glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

WOW, just came across this story while browsing the title list and I read the first two chapters. Damn this Darkward is sexy as all hell! He could kidnap me anytime LOL. I'm putting this in my fav list and I'm looking forward to your next updates cause this story has gotten my attention big time.



Author's Response:

jeez, thanks so much xxx

Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 2

OOH I REALLLLYY like where this is heading. And I like your darkward. He's dark but endearing at the same time. If I was Bella I'd still want him too :)

I'm really glad you decided to take a shot at writing. What you've done so far is really good!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much x

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

GREAT STORY
GREAT CHAPTER

Well, I would stay with him lol



Author's Response:

hell yeah...me too...hee hee!

thanks for your review x

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 1

“Hmmm, I thought you wanted this, my Bella. I thought you wanted to feel me. Oh, you have no idea how I can make you feel. Don’t you see? I owe you.".........More Please!



Author's Response:

Hee hee...ok!

Thanks for reading x

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooooh! I like this. Whatever will Darkward do? *shivers* I'm sure he'll suprise me. ;)



Author's Response:

I hope he does! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oooooh! I like this. Whatever will Darkward do? *shivers* I'm sure he'll suprise me. ;)



Author's Response:

I hope there will be a few suprises along the way...that's my intention anyway. I don't like predictable stories!

Thanks for reading x

Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love a good Darkward and this is a really original take. What a great introduction to Edward, totally new and refreshing. Cool to see a red eyed, more animalistic (but still somehow sincere) and sexy Edward. Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks, the beginning was a dream I had, I just elaborated a little.

Thanks for your review and thanks for reading x

Reviewer: Folklorn (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Sorry, I forgot to say that I wholeheartedly agree with sherylb. the self-loathing thing with most of the Edwards out there gets REALLY old. Thank you for keeping that part of the Edward train chugging on another track.

Seriously, 1am...



Author's Response:

Again, stick with me...it isn't going to be easy for either of them...but I love Darkward and that is who he is!

Reviewer: Folklorn (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

I must say, this story has me ridiculously excited. I'm really intrigued by the way you've started this. It's rare to come across work that has an original feel to it. As a bonus I really enjoy your style of writing.

It's refreshing to see a darker Edward that's more instinctive and yet not crossing the line into demonic and abusive. there's a lot of those creeping around right now but this is almost comforting. I know that sounds odd. I'm sorry, it's 1am for me. I just love it when Edward knows there's something special about his Bella.

you've managed to make me enjoy his red eyes as well. Gold gets boring after a while you know? I need to stop talking before this gets too out there. Brilliant work!

Can't wait to read more. Bravo ;)



Author's Response:

Ok ok, you may hate me in a few chapters time, please stick with me though, all will be well. I have read ALOT of fanfic lately and this is nothing like anything I have read so far.

Thanks for reading and I hope I don't scare you off! x

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow!! I really like this! I don't think your Edward will be self-loathing.  that's good!...and Bella is obviously not shy...looking forward to some fun/sexy times....



Author's Response:

My Edward will have some inner struggles, but rest assured I intend to keep the darkward theme. Thanks for reading.

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