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Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 24
Oooh, something's up! These two just can't have a happy, normal life together, can they?
The wedding was sweet, and I'm glad that Alice made it—it wouldn't have seemed right otherwise. But I'm not sure Bella's celibate-till-wedding idea didn't backfire on her—Edward was just a tad impatient that night. Not something you'd want to remember about your wedding night! (although I have to admit he more than made it up to her afterwards)
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: i know right? there's never a dull moment!
personally, i like edward being horny and domineering in the bedroom for once. he was so overtaken with passion he just had to have her. um, who wouldn't want that? it's hot. and bella liked it. :)
i'm just not a fluffy kind of girl, what can i say... ;)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 24
POUT nevermind I thought you posted a new chapter while I was reading sniffle lol I got all excited and psyched myself out LOL
Author's Response: aw! the next one should be out promptly. :)and yeah, it was nice to marry these two off <3. long time coming...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 24
Oh no oh no! He better not ruin their honey moon by doing something stupid! I can't wait fr the next chap, and it looks like I won't have to!
Reviewer: sunshynecullen (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well, wow! Edward didn't waste any time, did he? Does he want to be with her or did he just want to frick her?lol.
Author's Response: ah, haha yeah... it would appear that way wouldn't it. ;) just keep in mind, there's been sexual tension for quite some time...
thanks for reading though! let me know what you think a couple chapters down the road.
Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 24
Yay two updates in a row!!!...but I feel likes it's coming to a feckin bloody end :(
Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 23
Stay gold ponyboy!!
Author's Response: ha! your review made me laugh a little...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 23
Sniffle That was a nice chapoter holy crow class 3 times a week hahaha only Edward!!! Look forward to the next chap!
Author's Response: yep, he's an impatient one alright... :)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 24
I just love love love this story
Author's Response: <3 *sigh* thank you!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 24
Wait! They just got married and perhaps made a baby-he can't be running off now to do dangerous things! Can he?
Author's Response: i know; there's never a dull moment...
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 24
Their wedding was so sweet! But what happened that would make Edward so...mad and sad? He's going to have to leave Bella because one of the boys got hurt, maybe?
Author's Response: i can't say much w/out giving away plot points but... it might not be what you think...
Reviewer: twilio (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 23
Your writing is seriously amazing. I just found this story last night and finished reading it tonight... really good. Thanks for sharing, can't wait to see how it ends!
Author's Response: thank you!! i'm so glad you liked it. :) i appreciate the kind review; it's very encouraging.... and , i hope you contiinue to enjoy the rest.
xoxo
rochelle
Reviewer: twilio (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 23
Your writing is seriously amazing. I just found this story last night and finished reading it tonight... really good. Thanks for sharing, can't wait to see how it ends!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 23
Lovely. Just simply lovely.
Author's Response: thank you, so much. that's very sweet. <3 <3
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 23
'Nature's first green is gold Her hardest hue to hold Her early leaf's a flower But only so an hour Then leaf subsides to leaf So Eden sank to grief So dawn goes down today Nothing gold can stay.'
Sorry, having The Outsiders flashbacks there (that's where I learned the poem, and I did that then by heart, so mistakes are mine).
The hard part's over, telling the parents. I can understand why they want to rush six months worth of classes into one to get married quicker, but I'm sure someone suspects that Bella might be pregnant. I'm not saying she is (you said she wouldn't be), but the suspicion would be there. It always is for a rushed or early marriage. This smacks of both.
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: well, remember: this is a pretty strict Catholic community, so most of the adults wouldn't even think they were having sex, except for maybe renee (and she's only guessed at it) and esme (who also, only suspects.) and neither of them would be pleased about it, at all. what happened with emmett and rose was... almost catastrophic, but they managed through it and "made it right".
also, edward and bella have known each other their entire lives, literally. now that they both know the other wants forever, there really is no reason to wait to get married - they really do know each other. i think people nowadays tend to draw out the engagement for such a long time...
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 23
Another great chapter
Author's Response: thank you. :)
xo
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 23
Sigh. Edward is a very complex man. Insecure that he is stealing Bella's future. Positive that he loves her with all his heart and will protect her with everything he can. Impatient to move on with thier future and conflicted about what it might hold. Bella is alot more simple. She places all her faith in them together and that is that. No wonder he simply seems in awe of her at times!
Author's Response: wow, yeah - you said it pretty perfectly. edward does tend to overthink things, as in canon. sometimes he needs a does of bella's to-the-point-ness. :) they balance each other well; for sometimes bella can be a little naive at times, too.
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 23
I came into this sotry late but I absolutely love it. Your mum's Irish? So is mine. I read these chapters with the accent. I grew up around it. I still don't pronounce "H" correctly. My mother never swore but if my brother and I heard Jaysus, Mary and Joseph followed by our first and middle names we ran because Ellen Margaret was on the war path. Great story!
Author's Response: aw, your review so made me smile. yeah... my mom definitely had her sayings. like how alice (in this) always says "judas iscariot" as a curse? that was my mom, all the way. :)
i'm so glad you gave the story a chance, and liked it. thank you for letting me know what you thought!
xoxo
rochelle
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 22
Aw, a proposal without the actual words, that's so sweet! And very fitting for the two of them.
Something tells me that Aunt Vera is going to keep the two of them separated until the vows are actually exchanged, though. It would be funny to see them get caught sneaking from one room to another...
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: it is fitting, isn't it? :) and yeah - aunt vera's a character. she's helpful when it comes to lightening things up...
xoxo
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 22
Really great writting
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 22
Oh, the longing that Bella felt after 5 days! You could just feel how unsettled she was until she was with Edward again! And his proposal-it was not the most romantic by any stretch, but you could see that he just couldn't wait a second longer to tie her to him always! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: ah, i know. they're rather dependent on one another now... and so used to being together that being apart -especially forcibly - is pretty awful. edward's proposal was very him. ;) grand gestures and wordy declarations are not his style... like you said, he just couldn't wait any more!
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yay! Finally they're going to settle down a bit, maybe? Aunt Vera is nice for letting them stay in her house, and her personality is quirky. Loved the chapter! :)
Author's Response: finally, a little bit of calm for these poor kids. and yes, aunt vera is a trip. i had a great aunt who was a little bit like her. :)
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 12
Still love the story... Need to get caught up ~ meg
Author's Response: good, i'm glad. :) let me know what you think!
xoxo
ro
Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 22
aw! Yea! Happy! Happy! A great way for him to propose its so them its perfect
Author's Response: glad you approve. :) i thought it was very edward, myself!
Reviewer: Puddinpop72 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 22
Short , but sweet!! ... It's about time he makes a honest women out of her!!
Author's Response: i know, right? aunt vera will be pleased as punch. :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 22
SQUEEE!!! What a day those two had squee!!!!!Great work I am so happy it updated I needed those to back together! I am so looking forward to t he next chapter now we have a wedding to plan and do we have to worry about any trouble while they are in Cork what does this mean for Edward as leader...See, to many questions and my brain is running them on a constant loop post again soon I can't wait!!!
Author's Response: yes, many questions indeed - and that's a good thing! :) i'm not one for unnecessary (or forced) angst, so it made sense to reunite these two as quickly as possible. after all, neither of them wanted to be separated.
as for everything else, you'll soon find out.
xoxo
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